Hie! I hope the summary is good enough to have brought you here!
Unfortunately, this is just going to be an ad for the upcoming story. It is
currently in a large green shiny notebook on my bookshelf, incomplete.
Hopefully, if I get reviews on the net, I will be encouraged to continue.
Here's a little preview to get you all e-mailing me madly to get me to
write it up, stat!
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'No, no, no. You aren't concentrating hard enough. It's supposed to float smoothly around you, not smack you in the face. Try again.' The calmness with which his father spoke really infuriated him. He wasn't a child anymore.
The door opened slowly, and a person of small stature walked in, looking around hoping that he had not interrupted. 'Are you making things fly into Tian?' This little person asked. He giggled after that as his older brother scowled. He walked up to the small crystal that Tian had failed to make fly, and started to skip around the room holding it above his head.
'Hey, give it back!' Tian cried taking chase.
'There, look. Clow's done it.' Their father said, smacking Tian over the head while smiling. Tian frowned as he watched his little brother run around the room floating the crystal over his head, having let go of it at this point. 'And he's a lot younger than you are.'
'Showoff,' Tian muttered under his breath. Then he was smacked in the face with a flying crystal.
'Oops.' Clow said quietly.
'No problem,' Tian said from the floor.
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There! Hee! Clow's about three years old there. Review to give suggestions on events and how to make my summary better.
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'No, no, no. You aren't concentrating hard enough. It's supposed to float smoothly around you, not smack you in the face. Try again.' The calmness with which his father spoke really infuriated him. He wasn't a child anymore.
The door opened slowly, and a person of small stature walked in, looking around hoping that he had not interrupted. 'Are you making things fly into Tian?' This little person asked. He giggled after that as his older brother scowled. He walked up to the small crystal that Tian had failed to make fly, and started to skip around the room holding it above his head.
'Hey, give it back!' Tian cried taking chase.
'There, look. Clow's done it.' Their father said, smacking Tian over the head while smiling. Tian frowned as he watched his little brother run around the room floating the crystal over his head, having let go of it at this point. 'And he's a lot younger than you are.'
'Showoff,' Tian muttered under his breath. Then he was smacked in the face with a flying crystal.
'Oops.' Clow said quietly.
'No problem,' Tian said from the floor.
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There! Hee! Clow's about three years old there. Review to give suggestions on events and how to make my summary better.
