A/N – This is my first Fanfic so if it's kind of weak just tell me in a review. If you think its good then also tell me in a review. If you have any improvements to my writing constructive criticism is welcome but if you are just going to write about how this story sucks you can go read some other fanfic and criticise that author because I don't care. I'm not much of a writer but I was bored of waiting for KH2 to come out so I wrote my own version. Anyway here is my first attempt at a fanfic.

The Light in the Darkness

Chapter 1 – The beginning of a Long Journey

Walking through darkness, it's like walking through water. It's so thick and I'm getting tired. It's been so long, At least a year. It's getting harder to see. Maybe I will soon turn into darkness were Riku's thoughts as he and Mickey searched Kingdom Hearts for a way out.

"Chin up Riku. We're gonna get out of here," Said Mickey in his usual high voice.

"C'mon Mickey, we've searched this place for a year. We still haven't found a way out." Replied Riku sadly, "I don't think we'll ever get out."

"Of course we'll get out. It's only a matter of time before we find the answer. C'mon lets have something to eat." Mickey took out his Keyblade and summoned a large plate of BBQ ribs which were Riku's favourite. Riku thanked him and dug into his food thinking about Sora and Kairi but unaware to him and Mickey their chance to see their friends will be very soon because just out side that door 13 people in long black hooded coats were trying to open the door. With just the right amount of dark energy harnessed from the darkness in their hearts they blew open the doors and let all the heartless out.

"Did you hear that?" Riku asked Mickey.

Mickey got up, "Ya it came from the direction of the door. Someone just let all the heartless out. Let's go check it out."

So Riku and Mickey both sprinted to the door to find them off their hinges and in pieces while heartless were streaming out of the huge gap that used to be the door of their prison. As Mickey and Riku ran out the door they saw the group of 13 who had opened the door.

"Who are they?" asked Riku.

"They are the organization. A group of 13 members who's goal is to turn all the worlds to darkness." replied Mickey "if we act like we support the heartless we maybe able to join them and spy for Sora."

"OK lets go." said Riku.

Riku and Mickey walked up to the group who were just about to leave. They told a story of how they were trapped there when they tried to destroy the worlds. The organization bought the story and welcomed them to their group. They got into the gummi ship and were taken to Hollow Bastion. When Riku got off the ship he let out a yell. His eyes burned. Burned so much the pain was unbearable. Mickey ripped a piece of the robe the organization had given him and wrapped around Riku's eyes. Suddenly the pain stopped.

"I thought this would happen. I'll explain later." Said Mickey quickly as the organization watched them. "c'mon lets get inside."

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She sat there looking into the sunset, watching for any sign of his return. Waiting just waiting. She smelt the ocean breeze; she felt the warm sand beneath her. She was in perfect paradise. But all that didn't matter all that mattered was him. He saved her, he loved her, and he promised he would come back but it has been a year and he still isn't back. Kairi sits on the beach alone waiting for Sora to come home. And then she saw it a star was falling, fading into darkness. She ran as fast as she could to the secret place hoping beyond all hope he would be there. She used to spend hours there waiting for him but nobody came. This time she knew he would be there. She just knew it. She was at the opening to the secret place climbing through the hole, running along the tunnel coming to the room. A boy was there but it wasn't Sora.

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A/N – OK there is my first chapter. If you think that this was good keep reading and I'll post more soon. If you think it sucked, well I don't really care about your opinion. If you don't feel like doing a public review then you can

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