Yeah, I rewrote the story. It's not like I have anything better to do! I live in Florida and they have this hurricane and like they cancelled school thursday and friday. I'm used to not having school on fridays though since I go to Pompano Beach High School. So here is a completely changed story from yours truly!

Hi my name's Doris, Riss or Dori, or Dor for short. I'm a weird little child, and I'm proud of it! All the kids in school hate me (no surprise there). I just get obsessive over stuff like Kingdom Hearts or Hyde or Gackt or somebody or something else ( I wish those people and things the best of luck and to watch there backs).

"Dor! Dor! Dor! There's no school tomorrow! There's no school tomorrow," shouted my friend into my ear. I pulled my face away from my phone a bit, considering she nearly killed my eardrums. "Really! Your not joking are you," I responded turning on my tv in my room. My room was a little dimly lite and I was standing in front of the tv. Some dude with a major combover was on talking about hurricane Katrina. "Yeah! There's no school tomorrow," said Val with her younger sister running around in the backround, Namy. "Cool! Can I call you later," I practically yelled into the phone. "Sure! Okay Bye,". "Bye," I hung up and dialed more numbers, a few mintues later I found myself on our grassy front yard. The sky was a light gray and really windy, and really nice. I like the dark I don't know why.

The sounds of flapping feathered wings and the rustling of palm leaves rung through my ears. The grass was swaying to the north as I was on my gray rope swing on our towering tree. Boy do I feel sorry for that damned tree, I try to do Resident Evil kicks off the side and throw knives at it. We lived on a corner lot and the cars were whizzing by our house, surprisingly it hasn't even drizzled yet! In the far distance you could see dark clouds, on the news they said there were weird meteors falling out the sky in all parts of the globe. Weird, just like in Kingdom Hearts, that would be cool if it were real. I did get threatened in school a few times from kids saying that Sora is not a faget. I think he is, majorly! Aww well back to what I was talking about, Hurricane Katrina had it in for us man! Then I got a bad taste in my mouth and ran inside, I put the swing up in the notch ran past the kitchen,living room, tv room, and down the hall to our bathroom. I fiercely opened up the mirror cabinet and took out a green mouthwash liquid. I drank a cup of it and gargled it and spit it out, it burned as it hit my tastebuds. I spit it out quickly and put water into my mouth. I felt super weird, like something was coming, then again, I'm a little bit of a empath, so maybe someone was feeling a burning in their stomach.

I went into my room, "Doris, we're all living for Wal-Mart. We'll be back in an hour," yelled my mom at the door as footsteps and the sound of a little girl screaming out the door, my baby sister Abby. I looked at the clock and it said 6:00, I crawled into my normal unmade bed. I got under the covers and could feel hot heavy breathing on the back of my neck lying next to me in my bed was a person in a dark hood, I screamed "Ahh! Who are you,". It got up and sat on my midrift with its legs on both sides of my body. It leaned down toward my left ear and said "Your worst nightmare," said a dark sinister boyish voice. "Ryan you big jerk! You scared the shit out of me," I exclaimed as he fell to the floor laughing his head off. "Sheesh! I thought you matured over the summer! I guess you didn't," I said getting up from the floor. He was still on the floor laughing but managed to choke up "You laugh should h-have laugh seen your-yourself," I walked over to my desk and turned on the light. His brown haired showed his blonde highlights, he closed his blue eyes and I gave him an evil glare. He got up and stopped laughing, he was like 5'11, and I hate him for being taller then me. I felt like getting him, "Stop giving me that 'I'm gonna kill ya and bury ya' look," he said crossing his arms mimicking me. I pushed him onto the floor and he was there for a second and I walked out my room. He can be such a jerk at times! I walked out my house and onto the front yard, the sky was a gray and the air was swirling around. The branches on some trees broke off, "Holy crap," I said looking into this swirling gray fortex with lightning in it. "What is it," said Ryan as he walked out my home. We both looked up in awe at this unnatural occurence, the giant palmtree thing we had on the very corner was swaying in the violent wind.

It was already dark and the moon was slowly being consumed by darkness. 'Are we having an eclipse?' I thought to myself. "That is not an eclipse. That is darkness, maybe Kingdom Hearts is real after all," Then my front lawn started to pool dark liquid, myself and Ryan stepped back, but it kept spreading. Then a darkness came forth from it, large glowing yellow eyes, tree like legs. It saw us and attempted to hit us with its thick arms, then the black stuff got our feet and we were pulled out of there.

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I was falling, falling into the darkness. I, Sarah Michelle Badonoy was falling in the darkness. There were flashes of my life rolling before my eyes. I don't know why, but I remebered my younger cousin Doris. I was falling in the darkness, the cold air whipping my long black hair in my tan face. I'm from the Phillipines, and I'm used to heat, but not the cold. I shivered in the cold pulling my shirt around me more. Goosebumps appeared on my arms, trying to hold in my precious body heat. I was wearing jeans, a white shirt, and some white sneakers. In the darkness there was a platform below, stained yellow glass. A girl in a golden dress and brown hair was embedded into the glass, the image of her. I stood at the center looking at my surroundings, this platform was the only difference between me falling and standing. There were smaller platforms like glass, I decided not to go there, "There is always light within the dark," said a familair voice. "Hello? Who's out there," I questioned the distant voice. "True light exposes the darkness, you can protect the light, or destroy it. Which do you chose," asked a person wrapped in red cloth stepping toward me. "I don't know," I said, this being was 4 feet from me and he had a eerie yellow eye, his face was hidden and black belts were above his left eye. "You must be influenced then," and with that my vision faded to white.

Yeah, Michelle is actually my cousin. And yeah she's real, except Ryan, he's based on this kid in half of my classes named Brain. He looks exactly like Sora, except he has braces. Creepy. Yeah, I rewrote it as well, I wanted to get in the original components I orginally decided on, but I didn't know how to put it in. Also, I'm half fillipino so there is gonna be some tagalog words in this (oh god I hope I spelled tagalog right). If you've seen Constantine the girl that had the exorcism is speaking tagalog she was saying "Take them with us,". So yeah, look for a update soon. Laters.