Ice hell fire: No reviews, no suggestions (sulk), but it's my story and I'm writing it

Disclaimer: I don't own anyone of the cards or the character and events in yugioh! All I own is this story and the accessibility to the internet


Yugi and co. rushed to the exit with the Kaiba brothers following close behind as the Aircraft landed.

"Stay, I'll sort it out with Noah alone."

"Oh, no. Your little companions are coming. Or..."

"You will fire using MY system."

"Correct."

Yugi and co. realized that Sapphire have dug her claw nails deep in to her palm, leaving a thin trail of blood behind as she walked. They were almost afraid to follow her, even her familiar beak the BEWD looked nervous but the guns aiming behind them left them with no choice.


"This is impossible!" Mokuba exclaimed

In front of them stood the previous directors of Kaiba Corp. ; the big five--- Gansley, Crump, Johnson, Nizbitt, Leichter.

"Quite possible, Noah has offered us a virtual world to stay in. But we have stayed here for too long that we have lost our body, which mean we will have to get a few new ones; and we'll duel for them. And see who's here, perfect; Kaiba Corp's previous directors, current and past CEO. Feel our wrath! And we shall start with you, Ms, Sennen."

A hole appeared under Sapphire's feet, before Yugi and co. could react she ducked a wave of bullet shot towards her, and then avoided another opening appeared out of nowhere. The big five scowled and turned the floor in to great whirlpool and sucked everyone in.


"Where are we?" Tea asked as everybody picked themselves off the ground.

"A simple pre-stage before we are sent into the world Noah prepared for us."

"Sapphire, you know something?" Tea hesitated and continued slowly "You always seem to know everything going on here while we don't have a clue of what's going on. Can we have some explanation? Like where those wings came from, and how did you know about this virtual world, or why are you the ex-CEO of Kaiba corp.??"

"Tea, we haven't got time for them, would you just be quite like serenity? I think there's something over there, let's check it out."


In the clearing stood a duel monster and... Kaiba???!!!

Noah's voice spoke from nowhere "In this world we use a system with chief card; you chose a monster as your duel master which stays off the field. In this case the virtual Kaiba chooses the lord of dragons, and this particular monster Shield Guardian is something I created for this duel (I can't remember the name so I just pick one at random) is the chief card itself. The virtual Kaiba put his lord of dragons on to the field and equipped it with two flute of summoning dragons to summon three BWEDs and fused them together, and to the effect of certain card here he may attack immediately."

Everyone watched as the BWUD attacked its opponent, but it was reflect back and though virtual Kaiba's life points haven't been wiped out he was shattered just like all the cards do when they are destroyed; and Noah carried on explaining.

"As you see, as soon as the chief card is destroyed the player loses, even though if the life points were not wiped out. Due to Shield Guardian's effects the attack was reflected, and destroyed the lord of dragons which resulted in the Virtual Kaiba's defeat. The other new way to lose is if you were attacked too many times and the pain is too great to bear you lose. And if you do, you are stuck in this virtual world forever."

Suddenly the world around them disappeared and they were separated into separate areas in a world that's totally under a boy's control, a world of chaos.


With the Kaiba brothers...

Mokuba woke first and rushed to his brother's side, trying to wake him up.

"Seto, are you all right?"

"I am, are you?"

"Yeah, should we go and looking for the others?"

"Yes, let's go."

In Kaiba's thoughts 'Who is that girl? She refuses to say anything important, though I don't think she is involved with that Noah. She is dangerous in all measures, but I don't think some answers will hurt. I think she knows everything that's going on here, including how to get out of here. I need to find her before anyone else does. '


In another area, four people landed in a pile in a room in a random building somewhere...

"You two get the hell off me!"

"Umm, Mai? Can you get off me? You know three people tend to be quite heavy."

Duke got off from the top of the pile, then Tristan and Mai; Serenity was offered three hands, she sweat dropped and took Mai's hand up.

"Should we go look for the others?"

"Yeah"

After 15 minutes of separate searching...

"Duke, Tristan, did you two see Mai?"

"I thought she was with you."

"No, she disappeared five minutes ago. Let's stick together for now, this building is bit spooky."

Tristan and Duke (-)


In a deserted town of mud houses...

('...' represent thoughts)

'Where am I? This place looks like Egypt, but not quite. Everything is so realistic, is this really a virtual world? Even the water in the river has a taste, the ground is solid, and I can feel pain when I tripped over. I must find the others, I must. '

Tea turned to the sound of foot steps, she turned expecting a person. But only to find herself being chased down by a clan of Hitome - Giants.


Somewhere in the middle of a forest...

"Yami?"

"Yes, Yugi?"

"I think there's someone over there."

In the clearing, a deep sea warrior hovers over the body of water.

"Well met, Yugi Motou, we should duel for your body and freedom. I am Gansley, the big one. My chief card is myself, the deep sea warrior. Please choose your cards by touching them." A slid of cards appeared, and Yugi starts to choose cards from his deck and some other cards he knew and in the mean while at somewhere unknown...


"Camera was removed, pinpointing system recovered, but security password was rejected...I need time, that means I need Kaiba brother's help. And it looks like they are near. " The figure took flight with her BEWD, knowing her presence is safe from Noah.


With Noah... "Where is she? I shouldn't have brought her in; I should've killed her on the spot. It's her system after all, but she isn't as cleaver as some thought her to be, she will leave traces of her presence and then I will obliterate her mind...


Ice Hell fire: Since I don't live in an English speaking country I haven't got access to English version of Yu-gi-oh so please don't blame me for forgetting some card names. Review pleaseeee, coz I really don't know why my story sucks so badly