Hey this is B Boi here. This is gonna be my RS (Review Section) where I write an answer to people's reviews.
Voidmoon: Yeah I admit, my chapters are really short. Compared to yours, mine are midgety. Claws wasn't knocked out. Treecko just knocked it to yellow bar hp health. And Claws wasn't battling for 4 years. He was just around for 4 years longer than Silver. Of course Treecko lost his first match. He was attacked by a super buff Haunter. But Treecko put up a good fight too. Thanks for your comments. I'll try to make my chapters longer.
And since no one else reviewed (besides my other friend), here's chapter 5!
(mostly talking in this one)
The Journey Starts
Brian was just about to be squashed like an overcooked squash when a white blur tackled him to the side. Claws got up from beside Brian and snarled menacingly toward Graveler. Graveler threw a Mega Punch, but Claws dashed left and slammed its body on Graveler. Graveler slid back a little. Claws on the other hand, was rubbing his bruised and battered body from hitting the Graveler so hard. Graveler used Rollout and slammed into Claws, sending him flying. He collided with the stone wall of the house. Just when Graveler was about to finish Claws off, Christina stepped in front.
"Please, no more! I'm sure that's enough punishment. Please don't hurt Claws anymore!" The Shade looked at her for a moment, then shot a beam from a crystal he held. The Graveler disappeared into the stone. Brian looked dumbfounded. Then the Shade walked away.
"Brian, that was no ordinary Shade! That was the Rivet Town Noble's assistant! You could've been killed!" Brian stared off in the direction the Shade walked. He made a vow, a vow to free these innocent people of East Omni from this evil.
Brian got up with Christina's help and limped over to Celia. She was ok, just a coupla bruises. They carried her back inside. An old man walked in. He looked at Christina and the guests he had.
"Christina, what happened? I just saw the Rivet Town Noble's assistant walk away FROM OUR FARM!" Christina said, "It was a misunderstanding…"
(Two hours later…)
Brian was sitting under a tree close to the barn with his injured leg laid out in front of him. Treecko was draped over a branch snoozing.
Wow, it's really dark. Christina wasn't kidding about nights longer than days. Good thing she gave me a lantern.
Someone tapped him on the shoulder. Brian turned around and he saw Christina. She sat down beside him.
"Do you know why Claws acted the way he did back there? How he saved you and tried to beat that Graveler although it was clear that he didn't stand a chance?"
Brian shook his head.
"It's because a Shade and his Pokemon killed Claw's family. We found him lying there on this spot right here. He limped all the way here trying to follow that Shade. We had to take him in. He was so full of bitterness and hatred. He decided to take it out by fighting so much. Now all he does everyday is fight against the other Zigzagoon. I guess he takes out Silver so often because Silver reminds him of his weakness and inability to help his family. I wish we could have a happy life too. But that will never change. The King of Shadows is in complete control over the entire realm. There is no possible way…"
"I'm gonna make it possible then!" Brian defiantly yelled. "I've decided what to do and you're not going to change my mind. I am going to defeat all five Nobles, gain access to the Castle, and kick the King of whatever's butt so hard his grandma will feel it!"
Christina chuckled. "Brian, that's very compassionate of you. Right now, your main problem is to find a way to go back to your world. We are cursed with an eternity of darkness. It's not your fault."
"We don't care if it's your fault or not. What matters is that it is wrong and we are going to do something about it." "I might as well tag along too." Brian whirled around to see Celia and Andy. Brian added, "Besides, we just got our starter Pokemon to start our Pokemon journey. Since we're stuck here, we might as well have a journey here."
Christina finally said, "Well, if you insist. Come back inside. I have gifts for you to take on your quest."
Brian, Celia, and Andy walked back inside. A few minutes later, Christina walked in with a bundle in her hand. At her feet were Claws, a Nidoran (male), and a Pichu.
She walked over to Celia. "I'm giving you my baby Pichu. Take good care of it, and later it will take care of you." Celia stared in wonder at the cute little mouse.
Then Christina walked over to Andy. "This Nidoran will be yours to keep. It's a bit shy though, but I know it will open up someday. I have a feeling you guys will be good partners and friends." Andy didn't look so sure.
Finally, she walked to Brian. "I know you and Claws didn't exactly have a good start, but the way it reacted to you in danger, there was a bond there. Claws will be a great help to you. And a special gift for you, Brian." Christina gave him the bundle. Brian opened it. There was a box that had the sun and the moon carved onto it.
"This was my sister's. She gave it to me on my 20th birthday." Brian opened the box. He couldn't believe his eyes. There was a necklace with a sapphire pendant shining with a beauty that warmed his heart. Then he looked at Christina.
"I can't possibly take this! This is too much of a gift!"
"Brian, this pendant will comfort you in the darkest of times. This is a minor gift for you, since you are risking your life for me, and my husband, and all the people trapped here."
Brian was still in awe. When he finally looked up, Celia was gone. But she came back with the three Pokedexs.
"I think Professor Girdon was going to give us these." She passed them around. Brian looked at the device. It had a small strap under it. He slid in onto his forearm. Then it started up.
"… … Pokedex version X online … … registering trainer I.D. … …" A light shot out from a small lens at the front of the Pokedex. Brian lifted it up to his face.
"… … Trainer I.D. registered… … transferring Pokeballs…" The Pokeball at Brian's waist glowed, then disappeared. A small red and white ball icon appeared on the Pokedex screen. Under it, there was a label that said "Treecko."
"Wow, it's so hi-tech." Celia also brought in the case with the Pokeballs. She divided them up and the three Pokedexs zapped them up. More and more Pokeball icons appeared. They all read "Empty." Treecko walked back in. Claws snarled at him. Treecko just snorted.
"Hm… how do I get the Pokeball back out?" He pressed a few random buttons until he finally saw the one that said "Release." He pushed it, and Treecko's Pokeball was highlighted. A sign came up that read "Ok?" Brian said, "Yeah, that one." The front of the Pokedex glowed, and a white light formed in Brian's hand. Then Treecko's Pokeball appeared. He returned Treecko. Then the Pokeball disappeared.
"Cool! Now I need one for Claws." An empty Pokeball appeared, and Brian threw it at Claws. He disappeared into it, and the ball returned to Brian's hand. It then disappeared. Celia and Andy both caught and returned Pichu and Nidoran. Christina's husband walked in with three packs.
"These are for you. They have about a week's amount of food. Then you'll have to get your own. And to make money, you usually beat trainers. They'll give you a little cash."
Christina said, "Now, you three will start out in the morning. And just to let you know, I have a granddaughter about your age. Her name is Lillian. So say hi to her if you meet her. Have a good night's rest." The three went into their rooms. Treecko released itself, and slept on Brian's head the whole night long.
Author's Notes: This was a BORING chapter. So much talking. But I HAD to explain everything or nothing would make sense. Now the three have 2 Pokemon each. Please Review and tell me how boring this chapter is.
