-Yes,they would have found her.But you're looking a bit away from the big picture here.The point was that she had to be away for years.If they did found her,this story wouldn't happen!
-Renee could become an easy Mary Sue,but I think that I've been writing long enough not to turn a character into one like that.And yes I have been writing for quite a quite now.But in diffrent acounts here on Fanfiction.But you did right hinting.It alerted me to pay more atention.
I never wrote you off as someone that wrote this because they had nothing better to do.I never did that.I do appriciate you doing this,and if I didn't you would know.I've recieved alot of flames,but I hardly ever recieve one that tells me I'm a bad writer.So I got very angry,I did.But I took it as a chance.If I still was angry,trust me,by now you'd be angry too.And I owe that to my temper,and knowing my self well,I have a terrible problem with facing critizism,so don't say I didn't take you seriosly.Because I did.
I didn't put alot of effort to the last chapter.I know,it's terrible,but I didn't.But I find it helpful to have such chapters,for personal reasons.I wanted to make sure that people understood that they would have an akward thing between them.And trust me,someone else is going to yell at Ginny.Soon,possibly in the next chapter.And yeah,I already know who it is.Did you really think she was off the hook?Honestly!I believe that wehn'd you have alot on you're mind,there's not really time to angrue with anyone.But there will be some swearing soon.It takes some time for larger reaction to come.And John and Nigel will grown personalities.But this is my way of starting something.I can't just go CABUM and show them like that.There are alot of parts of us,that can't just be descrieved,with or withou showing.I need time to think them over,and how to show them.Harry's part will be coming soon,too.
I did like eir of Jesus Christ.But like I said,it's not my type of humour,but it's really fun!I don't believe that you should flame someone just because they send you a review where they say the truth about you're fic.That's very nasty and immature.
Ps:I've already read the sixth book.lol
SL
Moonlightwitch:I actually like the History channel...lol,but it can be extremly boring at times.Oh,thanks.lol
Chapter Eleven
Nigel's fingers were touchinh thr chair ever-so-often(...I think that's the way to write it...)making that annoying sound of trum...trum...trum...trum...
His eyes flickted nervously around the room and his mouth opened and closed in a gesture of impatience.John passed around the room signing(sp?) loudly from time to time.
The boys were alone in they room,the room they shared on the second floor of the house.It wasn't a huge room,but it was fairly big.Two beds on both opposites of the room.The right side,was covered with Quidditch posters.Two pictures of the famous band The Weird Sisters,music lyrics and a few painting.Under the bed you could find lost pants and T-Shirts,and books about Magical Creatures,Quidditch and Astronomy.On the nightstand,there was a iron lamp and an alarm clock,and a big book that read: "Nimbus:The Raising of an Impire".
On the other side of the room,the bed was covered with a deep red sheets(...how do you spell it?),and the wall beside it has a number og shelds nailed to the wall with a number of large books,and themain subject was trains and Magical Monsters/Creatures such as Werevolves,Vampires,Centacaurs(sp?) and Water Creatures.There were also some books about spells and charms but not alot of them-In front of the bed you could find a big box,with the words "J.R.P." incraved in it.On the floor there was a nice,big rug,white coloured,and in front of Nigels bed tehre were two chairs,and behind it,a bookcase,filled with all sorts of books and a large collection of The Quibber edictions.
Nigel and John had stayed home while Harry,Ginevera and Renee had gone visit Mrs and Mr Weasely,and possibly Ron and the rest of the Weasley clan.
"It's just not right!"
Nigel looked at his brother atht seemed closed to be having a fit.His eyes we're teary,but he didn't seem or sound sad,and while his cheeks were flushed his hands pressed hard against one and other.
"Really?Took you long to get to that conclusion?"The sound coming from Nigel throat was hard but low.His eyes didn't show the usual glint of amusmant but a glint of rage and hurtful hate.
"She shouldn't have abandon us!And did you see the way she acted?All snotty and bitchy!She dosen't want us,she never did!"John's voice was now on a hysterical level,leaving Nigel suprised,because he had never seen his brother like this,well...not this hysterical,at least.
John sat on his bed,covering his face with his hands.He was shaking slightly and all of a sudden he got up.
He grabbed the nearest book he had to him and threw it to the door,making a few angry noises while doing it.Next he trew everything he had close to him,to the floor,the walls,every where.
Nigel sat in shock.This wasn't the first rage fit the John had.His brother had a temper problem,a very serios one.But he usually took longer to start breaking everything around him.And like always after he had destroyed half of his things,he sta back on the bed,covering his face once more.
End of Chapter
