The Song of a Falling Pheonix

by storm-of-insanity

They say a pheonix always rises from the ashes. They say good will always pervail. They say that where there's darkness there's always light but they say a lot of things. Are they always true? set in first series black dranzer bit.

5. Forgive Me

Disclaimer- I only own this poem but not the characters

Forgive Me

Cold and clammy hands
Grab my confused and weakened form
They drag me into who-knows-where
And throw me into a wall

The wall is made of steel
Ice cold and freezing to touch
But not as cold as my frozen heart
Made with the power and knowledge I'd lust

Something whips through the air
Landing hard across my back
Blood leaks through my gaping wound
But that something keeps up it's attack

That something is long and lethal
Cutting swiftly through the air
Slicing through my skin and flesh
Inflicting the pain I try to must bare

I must not utter a single sound
For weakness that will show
I must not dare to cry aloud
Even though I bare the pain alone

Dranzer why did you leave me?
Don't you know I need you now?
But in the my heart I know the reasons why
For the reason's clear and loud

It's my own fault that you left
It's because of the action that I chose
It's because I let the darkness take over
It's because you, away I drove

The pain is becoming unbearable
It burns with a fiery heat
The agony rips through my body
As metal and flesh meet

All this pain I never knew
Because I always had someone there
I always had someone to pick me up
To give me hope when it wasn't there

I must keep on fighting like a pheonix
I must rise from my bloodied ashes
I won't give up, I won't give in
I must earn Dranzer's forgivness

this is a more normal poem for ya but I think I'm gonna switch to the more traditional poetry (the one that describes feelings and thoughts rather than action) because this style isn't working for me. I'm experimenting with different styles trying to find one that suits me so bare with me if I do some good ones, then some crap ones, another haiku, poems based on songs, poems that don't rhyme, poems that make no sense what so ever etc.
One more thing before I reply to your reviews, this is what happens after the first happy. The second chappy was how Kai felt being consumed by black Dranzer and the third was a load of crap about black Dranzer's evilness

Note to reviewer

Jani Rieme: they were the 3 words that describe the chosen subject. Thanks for reviewing again. it means a lot to me that to like or hate it enough that you bother to read my updates. I was worried that all my reviewers would think that that last poem was such a load of crap that they'd just leave.

See ya
wouldn't wanna be ya