a/n: this is during a 'training session' with yours truly and his 'favourite teacher'

disclaimer: I don't own beyblade

Will Midnight ever End?

My muscles scream in agony
As they pray for me to stop
But Boris will not let me
It is his evil plot

He drives me harder and harder
I cannot carry on
But still he keeps on pushing
I pray it won't be long

Finally I fall my
My body cannot bare
All the stress and all the pain
Defeats me then and there

I collapse onto my knees
Trying to catch my breath
Trying to get up again
My heart banging against my chest

I know the consequences
And I greatly do fear them
For failure isn't accepted
But a failure I am

I couldn't control my weaknesses
I couldn't gather my strength
I couldn't keep up fast enough
At least not at this length

Bile rises up my throat
Blood drains from my face
Sweat pours from my broken body
My pulse quickens it's pace

I am nothing now
Nothing but a weakling
Every moment I'm drifting away
Further my strength is slipping

Unconsciousness greets me
An empty wave of black
Where I can't feel anything
And everything I lack

Slowly I wake up
Boris is approaching me
A sadistic glint is in his eye
As he fingers his whip lovingly

I know what is coming
It happens all the time
I brace myself for the pain
As evil's power destroys mine

The pain rakes through my body
It courses through my veins
It sets my nerves alight with fire
Attempts to resist are in vain

It bruises my battered body
Numbing my lost soul
Trapping me in the void of my mind
Will I ever again be whole?

Wounds sear down my back
My shirt is bloodied and torn
This must be one of my darkest hours
Butcould the light still dawn?

I'm soooooooooooooooooooooo sorry I missed last weeks update but I kinda got a bit side-tracked. I have no decent excuse except that… ok I don't have a decent excuse -.-U. anyway, at least I updated today.

I'm doing a pole vote. What type of poem do you want me to do next?
1) a rhyming one like the one above
2) a non rhyming one that has a rhythm

3) a non rhyming and has no rhythm

4) one like faceless

Response to reviewers

ghostymagnarocker: I wrote Happy Birthday in the sand lol. My mate had a beach party

SSotD: it made you feel empty? Wow I must be getting better.

Tio Hiwatari: thanks for telling me. Does that mean that every female character is a mary-sue of some sort because they all fall into one of the categories

Roni: poor ickle childwen

Jani Rieme: I know what you mean. You think 'Faceless' was my best poem? I thought everyone would say it was really strange and stupid but everyone liked it. YAY.