Disclaimer- I don't own beyblade
A/n- this view of Voltaire is very different to the one in spirits within so I hope you don't get confused
Voltaire
Walking down the corridor
Heavy footsteps echo
His stride strikes fear into the hearts of young
For he obliterates their soul
He drives them till they cannot move
But still he carries on
Pushing them out of life
Singing deaths evil song
This man is beyond evil
He is the devil himself
He has no drop of good in him
All he cares is for himself
He does not think of family
He does not think of friends
He does not care for the innocent
All his sins bare no end
He beats the young and weak
Corrupting there sweet minds
He disposes them as rubbish
Like disgusting pieces of slime
He is the true king of hell
His darkness has no limits
He brought his evil down on earth
No-one can surpass it
The people are his puppets
Just there to do his bidding
Being controlled; they've lost all will
While he pulls all the stings
His kingdom is the abbey
Hells perfect reflection
It's the living death on the earth
An inescapable prison
And all who enter will be his slaves
No-one can ever resist
He shall spread his evil seeds
His seed of eternal darkness
Response to reviewers (wow so many YAY: D)
Ghostymangarockers: thanks for telling me what a mary-sue is.
wow I made you cry O.O . I was aiming for that but I didn't think they were good enough. Thanks for putting me on your faves. I think black Dranzer should live because if you took him out of this fic I wouldn't be able to writ half my poems. Lol but yeah, he is pretty mean
Roni: of course I'll keep updating
Shadow Samurai of the Darkness: better now than never. Writing poems aren't that hard. I think writing songs like you do would be really tough
Catseyes77: here's your update. Hope you like it
Jani Rieme: I know what a mary-sue is now. Look though my reviews for ghostymagnarocker's review. It says in there. I hope this poem was a little bit more well rounded
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See ya
wouldn't wanna be ya