disclaimer- i'll make it short and simple for you mortal minds to handle. I DON'T OWN BEYBLADE


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Taken Over

I can't control the evil

I can no longer keep it a bay

It's consuming my mind and soul

I'm slowly slipping away

I can't control my moves

I can't control my actions

A foggy mass has blanketed my mind

Destroyed all my judgment

I feel my senses dulling

But there's nothing I can do

I'm darkness' icy grip

And away my spirit is drifting

As my soul is leaving

My lust for power deepens

My want for strength is getting stronger

And away my mind is seeping

All that is now left

Is a great mass of hate and rage

And my thirst for triumph

I'll destroy all in my way

I want to become the best

The world shall ever see

I will obliterate everyone

All will learn to fear me

But in the back of my mind

But very deeply hidden

A bit of me still resides

But it's lost and imprisoned


Not much to say except for WHAT THE HELL IS A MARY-SUE? -.-U
Note to reviewers
Angelic4Eva:
I bet you can write them even better

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