Disclaimer- I don't own beyblade or this poem. This poem you see beneath this disclaimer was kindly written by Jani Rieme. The only things I own are the response to reviewers and the title of this poem.
Broken Wings
Darkness descending
I can no longer move my legs
Everything is fading
My energy is nothing but dregs
Whispering in my mind
The dark phoenix does her best
Numbing my heart and soul
What I wouldn't give to rest
I can see her now
Her red eyes watch my pain
I have nothing left to lose
A world of power to gain
I'm falling in a pit of darkness
My wings are broken and torn
The fire of my soul is extinguished
I feel lost, afraid, forlorn
What is this need that I'm craving?
Their faces keep prodding my mind
I wonder that if they knew me
Would they continue to be so kind?
I'm craving Rei's understanding
Max's sweet smiling face
Kenny's need to help us
Tyson's nonexistent grace
Where are you now that I need you?
I cannot fight her much more
Can't you see that I'm fading?
I beg you, I plead, I implore
Save me, please, I'm crying
Deep within my soul
Tears never shed build within me
My spirit dies to a coal
The raging fire is extinguished
My wings are broken and torn
They don't even notice my absence
My loss they'll never mourn...
Anyway, really cool poem isn't it. I repeat this was written by me, it was written by Jani rieme.
Response to reviewers
Ghost (ghostymangarocker): yep, all good stories must have some torture and/or angst, preferably both. Lol. Man I'm blood thirsty aren't i.
that poem was many an exaggerated version of how I sometimes feel when my parents want me to do well.
SSotD: sadly if Boris died most of the fics would make no sense. So in a way, as sick and twisted as it is, Boris could be one of my fave characters. I mean without him my stories would have no plot and besides we need someone to cause the pain and suffering. lol
Jani Rieme: all credit goes to you. You get to write the responses too. You've done an awesome job.
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glad I inspired you. All your reviews have made me feel really inspired
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