Dark Kaori! I HATE YOU!

Disclaimer: I don't own Avatar. I own Kaori and any Oc's. Yes that sounds about right. Also, -- I went braindead on the Kumi one. SORRY!

Zuko had kept woundering why he wanted to save her so badly. Even after he told himself to stop worrying about her. Everytime he'd think about her, his heart did that THUMP thing. She was strong, beautiful, fast he could go on forever. Was this what it felt like to be in love? That did sound like a good idea. He'd save her, she'd fall for him, it was all way to picture perfect. Mainly because he knew Kaori hated him, he also was awair that when they got to an island that she liked, she'd stay and he'd be continueing on by himself as usual. But It would be a few more months before they got to the next island, possably. He didn't know, that was the helmsmen's area. All he did was order everyone around and search for the avatar. For that moment, finding the avatar seemd more like a hobby than his job. What matterd then was finding Kaori and making sure whoever took her faced a horrable punishment. He wounderd what Kaori was upto while he was sorting out all of this stuff...

"Kaori, have you ever tried to fire bend?" Dark Kaori asked her. She shook her head. They were still in the dark eclips of her mind.

"No way. Father was a fire bender and he killed momma." She snapped. Dark Kaori growled and tried to controle her fustration.

"Try! TRY DAMN YOU!" She yelled at Kaori. Ready to smack her. "If you don't try...by god I'll make you!" Kaori backed away a bit.

"What are you...!"

Her eyes shot open. "Ah. Now. Lets try the basics." Kaori said to herself, raising her hands and training her basic firebending. "oh..how glorious it will be once this wretch has finally got Firebending down! I can finally come out to play!"

STOP!

"Psh. You wish!" Kaori said to herself aloud.

I SAID STOP!

Kaori fell to her knees and took in a deep breath. "What was that.?" She hated her new self, she hated Dark Kaori for taking over her body. No one ever took over Kaori's body except REGULAR Kaori!

Wretch! Mark my words! You will rue the day you were born!"

"Too late!" Kaori hissed to herself, from the side, she saw a guard raise an eyebrow to her. She had looked like she was talking to herself. She blinked and sat on the bed that was in the cell.

It had been a few hours after Kaori had fallen asleep before she was awaken by the soldier. He slipped between the cells, a plate with bread, a slice of cheeze, and a glass of water. Was that all she'd have to eat? Just bread, cheese and water? Well, its better than nothing. She took it and stuck in her mouth. The cheeze tasted terrible and the bread was hard. She missed the rice, Kurigohan, fish, and the other good foods she got at Zuko's ship after she tasted the terrible food given to her. She refused to eat it. She wasn't being picky, but of course, she was only able to get off tiny crumbs of the bread, and the cheese made her feel sick to her stomach. The water tasted normal. That was the only regular thing; but that wasn't enough. She sobbed in her lap, at least Zuko treated her like a human being! these people didn't care what happend to her, and all that she cared about now was escaping with her life. Thats when she thought about it. Zuko really did care, he sat up with her when she commited suicide, but that was about it. His ship was her refuge. His uncle was nice to her, the crew allowed her to join in with them in their inside jokes. But she never really found the jokes humorus. She was too buisy trying to keep her mind away from the dark things in her life. That didn't work out to well did it?

Her head throbbed. Dark Kaori had given her a good kick. Hey! Stop all this mushy stuff! Your making me sick! You've always made me sick! Always so...so...soo...ARG! Damn you woman!

Kaori kept crying as Dark Kaori's scolds sunk her heart. You worthless peice of shit! You can't do anything right! You think your so great don't you? Well, as long as im in your head, I can make you kill whomever I feel you need to. Or whoever I feel like. But I have to admit Little Lady. You have slightly impressed me. You have managed to hide me from that Zuko boy and his uncle. You lier! You deceiver! When Zuko finds out about you he won't ever care about you! He will dump you in the ocean and let you drown! Your lost in your own lies you worthless bitch! I know the truth, I know your a goodie goodie who is totally boring! Your worthless! I make you exciting! I MAKE YOU DANGEROUS! and yet. Your the one in trouble in almost the whole world arn't you? Well thats worked out swimmingly! I just hope you don't blame me for your...misery. If you do, I'd have to take the credit! Having done that is just what I need! Your a loser, mother never loved you! Father rued the day you were born! He rued the day he helped conseive you! Your nothing but a capsol Kaori! Kaori held her head, tears flowing from her eyes. How could Dark Kaori think these things about Kaori? But deep in her heart, she knew it was all true. She knew that what Dark Kaori was saying was true. You never deserved Mother's love! You never deserved to be born! Your what is stopping me from coming out and finally taking my rightful place as you!

"NOO!" Kaori screamed to nothing. She thrashed around the cell. Angry as hell. "you will never be me! I AM ME!" A guard ran in to see what the problem was and saw Kaori throwing a fit and yelling that she is the only her and that someone will never be her. She looked insane. Nice try Kaori! But Im in your head! I can make you do anything! WATCH THE SHOW!

Before her eyes, Kaori saw millions of dead bodies. The bodies of the people she had killed over her ten years of solitude. Bloody, and there were a few new bodies added to the collection. Zuko and Iroh's. She backed up against the wall, her eyes wide and sweat rolling down her face. Her body trembled as she saw the bodies laying before her. So many. Literally, millions of bodies! Even some from Zhou's army that she killed.Which was a good ten or fifteen.She sunk to her knees as the blood ran closer to her. She placed her hand on the ground and the blood ran all up her arm. It was all an illusion, but it seemed to real! It seemed like that was what really was going on.

The soldier ran out of the room and to the captain of the ship.

"Um. Sir? The prisoner girl seems...insane. What do you want I should do with her?" The captain looked through his telescope. I'd be a good few weeks before they got to the island. So he just decided.

"Throw her over board. The prince gave us spacific orders to capture her, and if nessisary, kill her. I suppose this is nessisary. So, take her and throw her overboard. Maybe she'll drownd!" The guard saluted the captain and walked back down to Kaori's cell.

Kaori's visions had stopped. Dark Kaori found it that she had sufferd enough for that hour or so. So Kaori was sitting in the corner of the cell, her legs hugged to her chest, and her head tilted upward. Tears flowing from her eyes down the side of her face. The soldier picked her up and carried her to the deck, where he tossed her overboard. With barely any time to yell, she had already plunged under the water, struggling to get to the surface. But there was a slight problem

Kaori can't swim...

omg killer ending! COMEON PEOPLE! REVEIW! I REALLY WANT A BUNCH OF REVEIWS FOR THIS ONE SO COME ON!