Hi again, I am here to continue a masterpiece and to give a few answers to GrimMoody's reviews.

1:Ben Shizlak is not angry at the shield, but at the fact that Khaled knocked him out (again). However, he understands that it was the only possible move

2:no matter what person the story is set in, I always write prologues, interludes and epilogues in the 3rd person

3:whilst you say the plot makes no sense, I've read some fics that make even less sense then this one

4:the name Khaled is far better than Brian Mcook

5:however, I am pleased that you have stuck with the story so far.

To everyone else, when you review, suggest a girl's name, as I am making a new character in one of the coming chapters.

Disclaimer: if you recognise anything in this fanfiction, I don't own it'

From our vantage point, we could see the entirety of the Zerg forces bombarding the base, and it was easy to believe that the Queen of Blades was directing the entirety of her forces against it. There was approximately 2,000 Zerglings alone, far more than even 4 cerebrates could control. With such a solid wave of Zerg attacking the Terran stronghold, even its excellent defences were quickly deteriorating.

"Look." Said Jim. "With all those Zerg down there, if we even show a glimpse of our faces we will be dead in 10 seconds flat. As sad as it is, there is nothing to do about the Base."

"No." I replied. "The zerg are attracted to the mental signature of the psychic mind. They're already heading in our direction. Ill shield us and try to distract Kerrigan away from controlling the Zerg, but you will have to defend yourselves." As I spoke, an Ultralisk managed to make it to the command centre, and used its enormous tusks to carve a large hole in the wall. As I put a Shield around us, I noticed a Zerg Queen heading towards the command centre. I blasted it with a psychic energy ball and put another shield around the command centre, whilst my companions sprang into action. I then considered the best way to distract Kerrigan. I realised that if I were to take control of an Overlord, making as much mental noise as possible, could divert her attention. I told Ben to guard me, and entered the mental world.

As I entered the cyber world of the minds, I considered how important it was that I learn to see both sides at once. I searched around for a few minutes, and then found the mental signature of an overlord. I pushed my energy into bringing it under my control. Almost immediately, I felt a powerful mind concentrate on me. Though I had never felt it before, I instantly recognised it as the mind of the Queen of Blades. As we started battling for the control, I felt another mind, withdrawn. I realised that Kerrigan did not, as her body led everyone to believe, willingly join the Zerg. Instead, her physical form was taken control of by I different version of the Overmind. Suddenly, I realised the best way to distract the Queen of Blades. I shattered as much of the mental cage surrounding the real Kerrigan's mind as I could, and then departed from the mental world, releasing a fake death signature.

As I returned to the Physical world, I saw a scene of utter chaos. Jim and his marines were gunning down as many zerglings as possible, while Ben had brought out 2 swords from who knows where, and was using them to slash several ultralisks into obliteration. The Zerg were moving around as if lost, while the infested Terrans were using their temporary freedom to get their revenge on the Zerg. I walked over to Jim Raynor and told him that the Zerg were under control, and he alerted the Command Centre that it could now escape from the Zerg. The entire base lifted off and flew away, stopping only to send out a couple of dropships to pick us up. We then flew into a large natural cave, and rested. By the time the Queen of Blades regained control, there was no trace that Humanity had ever been there

In the next few days, we repaired the buildings and tended to the wounded. After all tasks were done, I went to my room to contemplate over recent events. After a few minutes, Ben came into the room to tell me that we were heading out into space. As the Command centre prepared for takeoff, I wondered if the next planet we stopped on could be as disastrous as this one

Well, I hope you enjoyed this so far. I've got a hoard of other ideas, so keep reading if you wish for I riveting story.

Goodbye for now!