Ok.. I just realized that I completely messed up on the first chapter. Marissa doesn't leave for Hawaii, Ryan just never comes back from Theresa's.. and I was going to get more in depth and stuff. But I'm really stressed out with school and family stuff.. So I think I'm just going to plan it all out in my head, then start writing and posting when I can so I don't feel pressured to post. It might sound stupid but yeah, maybe the chapters can be better now. Sorry for the inconvenience. Or anything.. I don't know, I'll try to post the real chapter 1 soon.