Incarnated soul: Chapter 4 and 3 were looking back on what had happened but chapter one is basically what happened after chapter 5. Do you get what I mean? Chapter 3 was Dorian looking back on what had happened and chapter 4 was Brianna remembering what had happened. And chapter 1 and 2 is what happened after that. And now this chapter is the present again. Sorry! It is quite confusing! Thanks for your review by the way!
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Chapter 5
Though his vision was still hazy, Dorian got off the bed he'd been lying on and began to make his way to the door. She had seen his memories…and he'd done so many terrible things. I have to make her see, Dorian decided determinedly, that I'm not a monster. I can change. I have too. I'll do anything…if it means Brianna will love me. I don't want to be alone anymore.
Striding confidently down the corridor, Dorian soon came to the guard post, which was empty apart from Mateo.
'Dorian, are you-' Mateo began but was cut short by Dorian.
'I'm fine. But where is she?' Dorian asked, ignoring the doubting look on Mateo's face. Mateo should have recognised the wild desperate look in Dorian's eyes but he didn't notice the warning.
'Who?' Mateo replied, in an aggravatingly confused voice which pushed Dorian's temper to the limits.
'The girl!' Dorian yelled through gritted his teeth, causing Mateo to step back. 'What have you done with her?'
'Are you sure you're all right? Because you don't seem-' But Mateo's questioning was interrupted by Dorian, this time by force. Dorian had grabbed him by the throat and pushed him up against the wall, ignoring Mateo gasping as he struggling for breath.
'Mateo,' Dorian began, in a strangely calm voice. 'If you don't tell me where the girl is within the next five seconds, I might do something which you would regret. And you don't want that to happen, do you?'
A petrified Mateo quickly nodded.
'Good. Now tell where she is and we'll forget all about this little mishap.' Dorian's tone was patronising and the smile across his face was threatening.
'She's in one of the cells-' Matteo spluttered, clawing at his neck, desperate for a chance to breath.
'Thank you. Now that wasn't so hard was it?' And before Mateo had a chance to reply, Dorian had left the room, leaving the body of a crumpled up Mateo on the floor, veering on the brink of unconsciousness.