This story was made by my friend Tommy in Eng2 today. He is a little bit werid but I said I wanted put it on fanfiction for him and give him his props.
I am editor and consultant of this story.Enjoy:
Curfew
I got home from school with an invitation in my hand. I told my mother so she could decide a curfew. I went upstairs to take a shower. I took off my clothes and went in. The water felt good agains tmy bare body. I dried off and got dressed. My mother called me downstairs. My mom said,"Be home by 11:30 p.m." I drove through the street in my Hummer. The night was young and the breeze was delicious. I reached Melina's mansion. The party was live. Everyone was doing their thing. People were drunk and drugged up. Crack and weed was being passed everywhere. The music was loud and everything was great. And there at the center, I saw Melina. Long blonde hair, C-cupped chest, slender body.We had a chat and we went up to here room. We slowly ripped off each others clothes, then I spread her legs apart and...The bed rocked and rocked! Breathing hard, we spoke."You were great." she said."Thanks I replied. I checked my watch, it was 11:30 p.m.Fear strucked me. But i didn't leave to leave. But I had no choice but to kiss her one last time. I drove home quickly. When I walked in the door, my mom was waiting in the living room. However, to my surprise, she was actually asleep, watching a pornograpic video. I went upstairs quickly and quietly. I went to take another shower again. And again the water felt good against my bare body. I turned off the water and stood. Water was still sliding down my chest, on to my stomach, then on to my...I dried off and walked quickly to my bed. Finally, I made it to my room and went to sleep.
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