Drabble 3: David
and Goliath
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e-mailed or left in a review.
Disclaimer: Disney owns nearly everything I've ever obsessed over. This is
no exception.
Challenge: Write
about first impressions. (My second crack at the challenge.)
By Angel of Harmony/Harmony/Jen
"David. As in, David and Goliath?"
Their torn breeches and ink-smudged faces drew a sharp contrast with the gilded dome of the building they stormed. They were the absolute personification of dust and dirt, the lowest of the low in a society of beggars and thieves. They had no power. They were children.
But they were ragged and raw, frenzied and fierce, angry and adamant, wiry and willful. And when Bryan Denton saw the determination shining from the intense blue eyes of their nervous young leader, it was no coincidence that his mind filled with images of slingshots and giants.
