I'm back from Minnesota! I went to Cass Lake, It was so freakin' fun! I (sorta) learned how to water-ski and I went tubing, and fishing! (Yes I know I'm a vegetarian, but i eat fish) I cuaght a buttload of perch and one rock bass. It was so fun! Well, I'm ranting now, so ON WITH THE STORY! And I have an idea brewing for the future, but I don't know how exactly it will will happen. (as always, reviewer responses at the end)
xXOne Month LaterXx (Eliza's now 16, she had her birthday)
"Ed?" Eliza asked nervously.
"Hm?"
"I have something to tell you." She started playing with the hem of her shirt.
"Well, what is it?" He asked, growing slightly annoyed that she was bugging him while he was reading.
"Um, I...I...I'm...um...I'm" She stuttered.
"Well, spit it out!" He was growing angry.
"I'm pregnant!" She finally yelled.
"WHAT! Are you sure? How do you know?" He jumped up and yelled.
"Yes, I'm sure. And I know because I haven't had my period this month!" She yelled, causing him to blush.
"Really! That's great! I'm gonna be a dad!" He yelled, hugging and kissing her.
"Ed! I'm only 16!" She yelled.
"So?" He asked. She sweatdropped.
"Nevermind." She sighed, and started to walk away.
"Oh, Eliza?" Ed asked, putting a hand on her shoulder and spinning her around.
"Yes?" She asked.
"I have something to ask you." He said.
"Ok, shoot." She said. He bent down on one knee and took her hand in his.
"Eliza, I love you." He started, taking something out of his coat. "And I was wondering..."
(i would be so mean to end this here)
"I was wondering...if you would marry me, Eliza?" He said as he opened the box, revealing a diamond ring.
"Oh, Ed." Eliza sighed. "I would love too." She said as he put the ring on her finger and kissed her. He nibbled on her lip, asking fo entrance and she happily obliged. He explored her mouth and soon their tongues were in a fight for dominance.
-end chappy!
awww, how sweet! They're getting married! And Eliza's pregnant! Doesn't it just make you want to go Awwwww. :D want to know what makes me go FUCK DAMNIT! The fact that these end up being so freakin' damn short!
reviewer responses:
Lilith the Destrroyer: So, do I escape your wrath? And thanks :D
Fire Bearer Kite: Well, I'm a little nuts, so I guess it works! And I had an AWESOMELY AWESOME time on vacation! (as I said before:-)
crimson moonlight and rain: No, it's not the end. And yes, I am putting the chapter up soon, as in now. XD
Kat: HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAFTA TELL YOU? YOUR writing is the best! XD ...wanna know a secret -looks around to make sure we're alone- Sometimes I wish I was Eliza, too! XD
