I've had a few reviews that didn't really shock me, saying I should add more detail, and one person said my chapter were to short again I get it, you don't have to keep telling me! One person also said that I didn't add a lot of detail, but I more referred to the characters talking, I'm not great with detail, so sue me. Btw, don't double post the same thing in my reviews, I'll read them all, thank you.

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Tomo and her friends had been there a week, and things had gone pretty smoothly she thought. The only thing that would scare them were the random explosions they sometimes heard when Su wasn't around. Of all the people in Hinata, other then Tomo's friends, she had gotten along well with Su and Sarah. They were just about as energetic as her, so she enjoyed running around with them.

Tomo was up earlier then the rest this morning, and she was still a little sleep, her hair looked like a bird's nest. She walked into the kitchen and about collapsed on the sink. She held herself up and began to make some cereal, she was still sleepy she couldn't read the name of it. As she poured the milk in, she was hoping she hadn't grabbed the carton of orange juice. She walked over to the table and sat down on the ground and began to eat her cereal.

As Tomo finished her cereal, she was fully awake. She went over to the sink and started to wash the bowl out when she heard a thump from the dining room. She looked around the corner of the doorway to see Osaka laying on the ground on her stomach. She even sounded like she was snoring! Tomo laughed and started poking her with a chopstick.

Su looked around the corner and saw Tomo poking Osaka and smirked. Su stepped back a little then jumped in, hoping to kick Tomo in the back of her head, but Tomo moved her head down, just missing Su's foot. Su did a little twirl and landed on the ground. "I…I missed her!" She spouted. Tomo looked up, the grin from poking Osaka still on her face. "Good Morning Su" She said, cheerfully. "Did you just get up? I already had breakfast" She said.

"Tomo, do you know any cool skills like Karate?" Su asked. Tomo thought for a couple minutes as Yomi walked in. "Don't strain your brain to much Tomo, it might blow up" She said, laughing softly. Tomo glared over at Yomi, "At least I'm not on a diet all the time" She shot back. "I…I am not on a diet ALL the time!"

Su got up and poked Yomi's stomach, "I could fix that, I have a weight remover." Su said, happily. "Are you sure it's safe? Naru says some of your machines tend to have a lot of mistakes.." Yomi said. "Of course not, all my creations are very safe, everyone has tried at least one. Motoko wasn't actually fond of my kissing robot, but it sure liked her!" Su said, smiling.

"Well, next time I need help I'll come to you first." Yomi said, rolling her eyes. Osaka stirred slightly on the ground and shook her head as she started to get up. "Did I miss anything? I heard someone eating breakfast, and then I just kinda woke up here.." She said. "I don't think Tomo could do anything other then bug you to death." Kagura said, walking in with her toothbrush. She smiled and sat down. "Shinobu said she was going to come out soon and make breakfast." She continued. Tomo gave her a nasty glare and stuck her tongue out.

After everyone had woken up and had a nice breakfast with often snarls around the table, and yelling for seconds, everyone seemed to be off in different worlds. Why Su and Sarah seemed to disappear, they ended up being found coming out of drawers saying that they found another secret passage. Motoko was practicing sword fighting, while Keitaro cried as he was tied up to a rock as the target.

Naru was studying quietly in her room, not strange at all for her. Yukari was talking to Kitsune about nonsense in her room, almost distracted by the wide variety of bottles she saw everywhere. Nyamo was outside playing games with Chiyo Chan, Osaka, Sakaki, Tomo and Kagura. While Yomi watched from the sidelines with Shinobu, Matsumi, and Tama Chan who was often joining the game.

Naru yawned and stretched, the phone downstairs in Keitaro's room rang a few times before she climbed down and answered it. "Hello?" She said. She was quiet for a moment as the person on the other end spoke. "WHAT?" She screamed, it was so loud everyone almost froze what they were doing and all you could hear was the sound of birds flying away.

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MUAHAHAHAHAHA! The oh-so-dreaded sudden ending. Doesn't it just feel horrible? No. not really. Okay, anyway, I'm a little sorry for yelling at you before, but seriously, In your reviews I would at least like you to say SOMETHING nice if not anything at all. Thanks '