-sniffles- I'm not sure if I will continue this fan fic after this chapter… a lot of people have been saying how 'horrible' (my word for it) it is. It all depends on what you think, please, PLEASE tell me in the reviews if I should keep going or not. If not it will just end here and never be continued, my sense of humor will continue no further into this, and I will give up on writing forever. (ooooo, guilt trip, I feel evil now.) No, I won't give up, but I will feel less able to write. –sigh- oh well, enjoy, I hope.
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Keitaro was still rubbing his head from when Naru punched the crap out of him earlier, he was right behind her and the inspector at the moment. The first stop the inspector had wanted to make was in the bathrooms, to see if they were being cleaned. He was very pleased at first, until Yukari came running into the bathroom and kicked everyone out and slammed the door behind her.
Kitsune laughed from down the hallway, "No one can beat me at prune juice drinking!" she yelled, cheerfully. Keitaro, Naru, and the inspector were all on the ground, after being kicked out. Naru about had a fit, trying to go over and strangle Kitsune, but Keitaro made sure she didn't get within ten feet of Kitsune.
The Inspector mumbled under his voice and marked something on his clip board again. It was only until Keitaro suggested they go outside that Naru finally stopped trying to get Kitsune. She gave Kitsune a glare, which sent her running into her room, and then led the Inspector outside. Keitaro followed not far behind, checking from the back for anything else that could get them in trouble.
Once the three of them had made it outside, the Inspector was happy to see everything looked good enough. Motoko was by a tree cutting leaves in half, why Nyamo was talking with Kagura under a cherry blossom tree. The Inspector smiled for the first time and again marked something on his clip board.
It took the Inspector a minute to ask, but he cleared his throat and looked at Naru and Keitaro. "May I please inspect your kitchen next?" He asked. Naru gulped and slowly nodded, while Keitaro led him to the kitchen this time.
As they got closer to the kitchen, Naru and Keitaro could smell the wonderful cooking of Shinobu. "Maybe we will do better this time." Naru whispered. Keitaro smiled, "I have no doubt that Shinobu's cooking can win him over, she always makes great food." Keitaro whispered back. "What are you whispering about?" Su whispered, appearing behind Keitaro and Naru with a remote control in her hands.
The two of them almost screamed at the sudden entrance of Su. They turned to her, and she had her normal goofy smile on her face. "Su! What a surprise… umm, Motoko was looking for you outside, she was wondering if you could help her with something.." Naru lied, as she couldn't think of anything else. "Really? I was looking for Chiyo Chan, maybe she's outside too!" Su smiled and ran out through the back door.
"Why did you lie to Su?" Keitaro asked. Naru looked at Keitaro like it was obvious, "If she were following us around she would end up chasing us with one of her robots or something, you don't want her to pick you up with her Mecha Tama Chan do you?" Naru replied. Keitaro shook his head.
When they finally reached the Kitchen, Shinobu was wearing her favorite teddy bear apron. She smiled and greeted the Inspector. "If you like, I made some curry for you to try, you can have some too Naru, Keitaro." She said, setting the bowls on the dining table. The Inspector flinched as he sat down and looked at his curry. It looked normal enough, at least, it wasn't black. Naru and Keitaro waited patiently for the Inspector to take the first bite.
The Inspector picked up his spoon and slowly put some of the curry into his mouth. He sat there for a moment, emotionless, and finally, another tiny smile grew across his face. "This is great!" he said. He looked at Shinobu who was watching from the kitchen. He then looked over at Naru and Keitaro. "Your cook has just made the best curry I have had in a while!" He said, starting on the rest of his curry. Keitaro smiled at Shinobu and she blushed slightly before turning away back into the kitchen.
Naru started on her curry, with a slight frown on her face as she saw Shinobu turn from Keitaro's smile. She tried to resist whacking him while eating, but she figured she could hit him later, as he was starting his curry.
As they finished their curry, Naru let out a sigh of relief, nothing was going horribly wrong like last time, and she smiled while looking up at the ceiling. But her smile turned into a slight confused look as she heard a high pitched scream coming from down the hall. She crawled over and looked down the hall, and she slowly saw a short orange haired girl with pig tails getting closer and closer. "Chiyo Chan!" Naru yelled.
She could see right behind Chiyo Chan was another girl with a pony tail, holding a large remote control above her head. "S..SU?" She yelled again. Keitaro crawled over next to Naru and looked down the hallway as well. "Wha… What's going on?" He yelled. Chiyo Chan ran right past them, and then a odd looking big-headed robot, followed by Su.
While Naru and Keitaro still stared down the hallway, they heard a new pair of footsteps running towards them, and they looked to see who it was. Motoko had the worst look possible on her face, as she stopped in front of Naru and Keitaro. "Naru, Urashima, you have seen Su and Chiyo Chan, Correct?" She asked. Naru nodded as Keitaro just listened.
"We must get Chiyo Chan before she to is affected by Su's evil contraption." She said softly. Naru's eyes widened as she looked behind her at the Inspector. She then looked over at Keitaro, and she could only imagine what would happen if she left Keitaro with the Inspector.
"Motoko, take Keitaro with you, and don't break anything!" She said, as Keitaro got up, figuring he didn't have any choice in the matter. Naru tried to smile, but she slid back into the dining room, with a fake smile on her face as the Inspector gave her a dumbfounded look.
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I hope you know, I was NOT kidding when I said your reviews meant the whole life of this fan fic, I personally would not like to quit wiritting this fan fic, but people keep saying that it's not much of a story. Anyway, feel free to say ANYTHING about my fan fic, if it goes bad, I don't care what you say about it any more.
Note: I would just like to say, the Chiyo-Chan-being-chased-by-kissing-robot was an idea giving to me by an anonymous reviewer, thank you turki sandwichu!
