To reviewers
LH: ::pats LH's sholder:: it's okay, at least you fixed the fanart secetion and have a web site, I don't even know how to make a website and I'm moneyless too... and thanks for the advice/whatever you're supposed to call it... encouragement?
Vokteren: ::sweatdrops:: ehehe sorry!
May: you better be!
I am!
May: sure you are
...well, to he rest of the reviewers: thanks for reviewing!
May: okay, start the fic!
Do you're job then!
May: fine... Disclaimer: Icy-chan does not own pokemon. If she did, Ash probably wouldn't be there, neither would Max or Brock (not that she hates them but they are annoying), Drew's name would remain Shuu (it sounds cooler!), Brendan would be in the anime, the storyline will have to change a bit... and she would be rich and live in a mansion that is made of reflecting glass.
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"Bye Mom!" May waved.
"Bye Mom, bye, Dad!" Brendan followed.
"Bye kids, we'll miss you!" the parents answered.
"Bye! We'll miss you too!" They said as they left for Oldale.
May sighed. "Why do you have to be my traveling partner anyways?" She asked
"You think I want to be your partner?" Brendan said.
"No"
"Exactly, its not my fault, our parents planed it"
"This is torture"
"You think this isn't torture for me too, being stuck with you?"
"Ya, sure..."
"Hey! Look, there's Oldale!"
"Well, how long are we going to stay here?"
"I dunno... let's just heal our pokemon and leave for Petalburg..."
"Okay" May said as they went into the pokemon center.
"Hello and welcome to the pokemon center. We restore your tired pokemon to full health. Would like to rest your pokemon?" Nurse Joy asked
"Yes please" They both answered as they gave Nurse Joy their pokemon.
"Okay, I'll take your pokemon for a few seconds."
::DING!::
"Thank you for waiting. We've restored your pokemon to full health. We hope to see you again!"
"Thank you" They said as they left.
"Lets get going" May said.
"Okay" Brendan answered
"Hey, you there" Two youngsters called.
"Who, me?" They asked
"Yes, I challenge both of you!"
"You're on!" May and Brendan answered as they let out their pokemon
Youngster Calvin sent out a Zigzagoon while Youngster Allen sent out a Poochyena.
"Use water gun, Muddy!" Brendan commanded
"Blaze, use ember!" May instructed
"Ziggy, use tackle!" Youngster Calvin called.
""You too, Poochy!" Youngster Allen agreed.
May and Brendan's far distance shots got the other pokemon first. They were damaged by the attacks and flinched.
"Good, now, use tackle to finish it off!" Brendan said
"Use scratch, Blaze!" May said
"Ziggy, counter it with your own tackle" Youngster Calvin ordered.
"Poochy, you do that also!" Youngster Allen said.
The four pokemon clashes against each other doing damage to each other but May and Brendan's force finished the two other pokemon.
"Yes!" May and Brendan cheered as they received their money and continued to fight other pokemon.
As they got to Petalburg, they each caught Wingull, Lotad, Poochyena, Ralts, Seedot, Surskit, Wurmple, and Zigzagoon.
"Hello and welcome to the pokemon center. We restore your tired pokemon to full health. Would like to rest your pokemon?" Nurse Joy asked
"Yes please" They both answered as they gave Nurse Joy their pokemon.
"Okay, I'll take your pokemon for a few seconds."
::DING!::
"Thank you for waiting. We've restored your pokemon to full health. We hope to see you again!"
"Thank you" They said as they left.
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Review!
LH: ::pats LH's sholder:: it's okay, at least you fixed the fanart secetion and have a web site, I don't even know how to make a website and I'm moneyless too... and thanks for the advice/whatever you're supposed to call it... encouragement?
Vokteren: ::sweatdrops:: ehehe sorry!
May: you better be!
I am!
May: sure you are
...well, to he rest of the reviewers: thanks for reviewing!
May: okay, start the fic!
Do you're job then!
May: fine... Disclaimer: Icy-chan does not own pokemon. If she did, Ash probably wouldn't be there, neither would Max or Brock (not that she hates them but they are annoying), Drew's name would remain Shuu (it sounds cooler!), Brendan would be in the anime, the storyline will have to change a bit... and she would be rich and live in a mansion that is made of reflecting glass.
--------------------------------------------------- Chapter 5 ---------------------------------------------------
"Bye Mom!" May waved.
"Bye Mom, bye, Dad!" Brendan followed.
"Bye kids, we'll miss you!" the parents answered.
"Bye! We'll miss you too!" They said as they left for Oldale.
May sighed. "Why do you have to be my traveling partner anyways?" She asked
"You think I want to be your partner?" Brendan said.
"No"
"Exactly, its not my fault, our parents planed it"
"This is torture"
"You think this isn't torture for me too, being stuck with you?"
"Ya, sure..."
"Hey! Look, there's Oldale!"
"Well, how long are we going to stay here?"
"I dunno... let's just heal our pokemon and leave for Petalburg..."
"Okay" May said as they went into the pokemon center.
"Hello and welcome to the pokemon center. We restore your tired pokemon to full health. Would like to rest your pokemon?" Nurse Joy asked
"Yes please" They both answered as they gave Nurse Joy their pokemon.
"Okay, I'll take your pokemon for a few seconds."
::DING!::
"Thank you for waiting. We've restored your pokemon to full health. We hope to see you again!"
"Thank you" They said as they left.
"Lets get going" May said.
"Okay" Brendan answered
"Hey, you there" Two youngsters called.
"Who, me?" They asked
"Yes, I challenge both of you!"
"You're on!" May and Brendan answered as they let out their pokemon
Youngster Calvin sent out a Zigzagoon while Youngster Allen sent out a Poochyena.
"Use water gun, Muddy!" Brendan commanded
"Blaze, use ember!" May instructed
"Ziggy, use tackle!" Youngster Calvin called.
""You too, Poochy!" Youngster Allen agreed.
May and Brendan's far distance shots got the other pokemon first. They were damaged by the attacks and flinched.
"Good, now, use tackle to finish it off!" Brendan said
"Use scratch, Blaze!" May said
"Ziggy, counter it with your own tackle" Youngster Calvin ordered.
"Poochy, you do that also!" Youngster Allen said.
The four pokemon clashes against each other doing damage to each other but May and Brendan's force finished the two other pokemon.
"Yes!" May and Brendan cheered as they received their money and continued to fight other pokemon.
As they got to Petalburg, they each caught Wingull, Lotad, Poochyena, Ralts, Seedot, Surskit, Wurmple, and Zigzagoon.
"Hello and welcome to the pokemon center. We restore your tired pokemon to full health. Would like to rest your pokemon?" Nurse Joy asked
"Yes please" They both answered as they gave Nurse Joy their pokemon.
"Okay, I'll take your pokemon for a few seconds."
::DING!::
"Thank you for waiting. We've restored your pokemon to full health. We hope to see you again!"
"Thank you" They said as they left.
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Review!