T.T LH! Don't stop writing! You're stories are soooooo good! ::cries::
May:... okay...
::can't stop crying::
May: ... ::sigh:: Okay... let's see what she wrote before she started crying... ::takes out notebook:: er... here it is, always handy when she does this...
To LH, Are you still gonna continue you're stories on you're site instead? And I -as in icy-chan- hope that you will one day come back and write more... okay... that was weird... anyways,
To rest of the reviewers:
Thanks for reviewing,
Pai-chan, Um... what? (Icy-chan is confused by your questions because she gets confused easily)... well, she is going to try her best to answer you're questions (AKA don't blame her if she interprets you're question wrong).
(it says 1 but its for the first 3 questions) 1.This idea of her being a champion already kinda came form the anime. I wanted her to start fresh, so like Ash, she leaves her pokemon behind and starts a new journey. If you are wondering why she didn't bring a pokemon like Ash, it's because I wanted her to start fresh (like I already mentioned before). May could have transferred her pokemon if she wanted though. Also, she needed to get more 'new' pokemon form the region (I'm not sure if it's a country or not...) In conclusion, it is because I WANT HER TO START FRESH.
2. I was thinking that May won't capture the same pokemon twice so I don't think I will use the 'old' pokemon in her team (We'll see in the future).
3. (This one is the most confusing one... but) I said 'I want her to start fresh'. Well, if I am properly understanding this, May left her pokemon behind right? Well, if she wants to become a new trainer, it would be cheap if she just re-used her super strong champion pokemon from Kanto and Jhoto so she would need to be a 'new' trainer' to get her starter's pokemon.
4. I was thinking that she is 'starting fresh' so I thought that I would give her new pokegear.
5. (FINALLY! LAST QUESTION! MY BRAIN IS HURTING!) This was my mistake.... I'm gonna change chapter 2 a bit so it would acknowledge you that Hoenn trainers start at the age 14 okay? It's because I forgot to mention that. Hehehe and I also fixed the mistakes of the faces.
Vokteren, Yes, she plans to give May a Skitty. A Beautifly and a Plulse (so cute!) (she means in her normal team because she will eventually capture all of them) and Brendan will get the opposites (Poochyena, Duxtox, Minun, etc...). And I know it is repeatitive so I was planning to only do this if I want the story to go fast/skip parts. If I want to concentrate on the injury, I will let them go into surgery or whatever. And I'm sorry if this chapter is gonna be kind of repetitive. (SORRY! My brain is hurting!)
Wandering Gamer, at the end of this chapter, there is a note for you (read it after you read the chapter or else it would be kinda weird k?) --------------------------------------------------- Chapter 6 ---------------------------------------------------
They entered the Petalburg Gym.
"Hi Dad!" May called as she hugged her father.
"Hey, sweetie... and who's this?" He said looking at Brendan.
"I'm Brendan Birch, Mr. Maple" Brendan introduced as they shook hands.
"Hi, Brendan, how's your father doing?"
"He's fine, thank you"
"So, are you trying to become the Champion?"
"Yup"
"Ahh... but let me tell you, it will be difficult beating my daughter, she even beat ME when we battled some time ago..." Norman said as May giggled still clinging on her father.
A green haired boy suddenly came into the gym.
"Um... I... I'd like to get a pokemon please..." he asked while gazing at May who was still embracing to her father.
'Who IS that angel? Er... I mean girl? She's so... beautiful... just like an angel...'
May felt the boy staring at her. 'Why do Hoenn boys have weird hair color... first white and now green? What has this world got to?'
"Oh, yes... May, Brendan, this is Wally. Wally, this is my daughter May and this is her friend, also Professor Birch's son, Brendan."
"Hi!" They both greeted.
"Um... hi..." Wally answered shyly.
'May... that is such a beautiful name, just like the flowers of the month of May... I wonder that's why her name is May... Is her birthday on May?' Wally thought.
'Wally? I wonder how his parents came up with THAT name... such a weird name...' May and Brendan thought.
"Now you've met each other, why don't you two help Wally get his pokemon?"
"Okay" They answered
"You can borrow my Zigzagoon."
"Thank you" Wally replied and they left the gym.
'Hey... what's the white haired guy's name again? Brandon? He has WHITE hair? And I thought my green hair was odd...' Wally gasped out loud.
May and Brendan turned to him.
"Are you okay?" May asked.
"Yes... I just... um... kinda choked I guess..." Wally blushed
"Okay..."
'You moron! Why did you do that? You embarrassed yourself in front of her! ... Wait... what made me gasp again? ... Oh yeah! The stupid white haired boy... is he May's boyfriend or something? Well she's MINE!'
"Wally, look, there's a Ralts right there" May said, pointing to a Ralts.
"A Ralts? That's the one I really want!" Wally said.
"Go for it" Brendan said impatiently.
"Er... okay, I'll try my best! Um... Zigzagoon, use... um..."
"Tell it to use tackle" Brendan said in a bored tone
"Um... okay... use tackle then..."
The Zigzagoon looked at Wally unconfidently but it obeyed.
The Ralts growled at it.
"Er... do I use tackle again?"
"Yes" Brendan said in an annoyed tone
"Okay... use tackle again" Wally ordered
The Zigzagoon damaged it some more.
"Now use a pokeball to capture it" May encouraged.
"Um... okay..." Wally said "Er... go pokeball" he said as he threw the pokeball.
The pokeball wiggled. When it stopped, Wally picked it up.
"I... I finally caught a Ralts!" He said.
"Good job!" May optimistically
"That took you long enough" Brendan said.
"Don't be even more heartless than you already are" May defended
"I'm not heartless, that's your job."
"I am not heartless!"
"After being so mean to me, you say you're not heartless?"
"I wasn't heartless in the first place!"
"Yes you were, when you meet me?"
"That was your fault, you were the one that made me mad"
"Ya, well, how was I supposed to know?"
"I told you, remember?"
"Even if you did, you are still heartless"
"I am not, you are!"
"Fine, let's not count heartless. You don't have manners!"
"I do too!"
"No, ya don't"
"Na- uh!"
"Ya-huh!"
"Na- uh!"
"Ya-huh!"
"Na- uh!"
"Ya-huh!"
"Er... you guys, shouldn't you break it up?" Wally asked
"I'll stop when he stops, he started it!" May answers
"No, I'll stop when you stop because YOU started it" Brendan said.
"I didn't start it!"
"Yes you did"
"Na- uh!"
"Ya-huh!"
"Na- uh!"
"Ya-huh!"
"Hey, hey, break it up" Mr. Maple suddenly appeared
"Dad, he's the one that started it" May said
"No I didn't, Mr. Maple"
"Hey... can I ask an question?" Wally asked
"Okay..." They answered.
"How did you two get stuck together for the whole journey if you hate each other so much?"
"Hmm... I would like to know the answer to that too..." Norman said.
They sighed "Mom's/Dad's idea" They answered
Norman chuckled. "I knew it! Only April and Bryan's ideas would be like this."
"Ohh... no wonder you two have to travel together..." Wally replied
"Hey, Wally, you will start your journey tomorrow right?" Norman questioned
"Hopefully..."
"Why don't you travel with May and Brendan? May has been the champion of the Kanto and Jhoto leagues and Brendan is Professor Birch's son. You would benefit from traveling with them."
"Well... if they want me to"
"WE don't mind" May said
"Not, we, you don't mind but I mind. Its already bad enough to be stuck with you, and now, a rookie" Brendan muttered
"Well, it's decided. All of you can going to traveling together under two condition each." Norman said pretending that he was unable to hear Brendan
"What?" They asked
"Wally, you have to break up their fight and help make May and Brendan get along with each other. May and Brendan, you two have to get along with each other and you can't be mean to Wally. Okay?"
"Okay" May and Wally answered.
"Joy..." Brendan said.
"Well, it has been a long day. You two are probably just cranky after the day. How about you two go take a bath, have dinner, go to sleep and start a brand new day tomorrow?"
"Okay..." They answered while giving each other death glares.
"You should go home too, Wally."
"Yes Mr. Maple."
Mr. Maple sighed. 'Good thing I got Wally to travel with May and Brendan, what will happen if get into a really big argument if Wally or anyone wouldn't be there?' He thought relieved.
'Yes! I get to travel with May!' Wally thought as he walked home.
'Yay... I get to travel with a weird timid green haired kid and a evil old man now... what were my parents thinking?' May complained to herself in bed.
'IS MR. MAPLE INSANE? That 'Wally' guy is so inexperienced that he doesn't even know how to tie his shoe!' Brendan criticized before he went to sleep.
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T.T ::continues to cry::
May: ::reads out Wandering Gamer's note:: You're note, Wandering Gamer! (well, it's not like private but it was something he said in my review k?) You know how you said in the last review that they would begin their quest to brave the wilds and conquer their foes...unless they don't kill each other first? Well, this is the reason why Wally is joining them! To stop the madness that they may cause in any way! (if he isn't too timid to!)
May: and.... review!
May:... okay...
::can't stop crying::
May: ... ::sigh:: Okay... let's see what she wrote before she started crying... ::takes out notebook:: er... here it is, always handy when she does this...
To LH, Are you still gonna continue you're stories on you're site instead? And I -as in icy-chan- hope that you will one day come back and write more... okay... that was weird... anyways,
To rest of the reviewers:
Thanks for reviewing,
Pai-chan, Um... what? (Icy-chan is confused by your questions because she gets confused easily)... well, she is going to try her best to answer you're questions (AKA don't blame her if she interprets you're question wrong).
(it says 1 but its for the first 3 questions) 1.This idea of her being a champion already kinda came form the anime. I wanted her to start fresh, so like Ash, she leaves her pokemon behind and starts a new journey. If you are wondering why she didn't bring a pokemon like Ash, it's because I wanted her to start fresh (like I already mentioned before). May could have transferred her pokemon if she wanted though. Also, she needed to get more 'new' pokemon form the region (I'm not sure if it's a country or not...) In conclusion, it is because I WANT HER TO START FRESH.
2. I was thinking that May won't capture the same pokemon twice so I don't think I will use the 'old' pokemon in her team (We'll see in the future).
3. (This one is the most confusing one... but) I said 'I want her to start fresh'. Well, if I am properly understanding this, May left her pokemon behind right? Well, if she wants to become a new trainer, it would be cheap if she just re-used her super strong champion pokemon from Kanto and Jhoto so she would need to be a 'new' trainer' to get her starter's pokemon.
4. I was thinking that she is 'starting fresh' so I thought that I would give her new pokegear.
5. (FINALLY! LAST QUESTION! MY BRAIN IS HURTING!) This was my mistake.... I'm gonna change chapter 2 a bit so it would acknowledge you that Hoenn trainers start at the age 14 okay? It's because I forgot to mention that. Hehehe and I also fixed the mistakes of the faces.
Vokteren, Yes, she plans to give May a Skitty. A Beautifly and a Plulse (so cute!) (she means in her normal team because she will eventually capture all of them) and Brendan will get the opposites (Poochyena, Duxtox, Minun, etc...). And I know it is repeatitive so I was planning to only do this if I want the story to go fast/skip parts. If I want to concentrate on the injury, I will let them go into surgery or whatever. And I'm sorry if this chapter is gonna be kind of repetitive. (SORRY! My brain is hurting!)
Wandering Gamer, at the end of this chapter, there is a note for you (read it after you read the chapter or else it would be kinda weird k?) --------------------------------------------------- Chapter 6 ---------------------------------------------------
They entered the Petalburg Gym.
"Hi Dad!" May called as she hugged her father.
"Hey, sweetie... and who's this?" He said looking at Brendan.
"I'm Brendan Birch, Mr. Maple" Brendan introduced as they shook hands.
"Hi, Brendan, how's your father doing?"
"He's fine, thank you"
"So, are you trying to become the Champion?"
"Yup"
"Ahh... but let me tell you, it will be difficult beating my daughter, she even beat ME when we battled some time ago..." Norman said as May giggled still clinging on her father.
A green haired boy suddenly came into the gym.
"Um... I... I'd like to get a pokemon please..." he asked while gazing at May who was still embracing to her father.
'Who IS that angel? Er... I mean girl? She's so... beautiful... just like an angel...'
May felt the boy staring at her. 'Why do Hoenn boys have weird hair color... first white and now green? What has this world got to?'
"Oh, yes... May, Brendan, this is Wally. Wally, this is my daughter May and this is her friend, also Professor Birch's son, Brendan."
"Hi!" They both greeted.
"Um... hi..." Wally answered shyly.
'May... that is such a beautiful name, just like the flowers of the month of May... I wonder that's why her name is May... Is her birthday on May?' Wally thought.
'Wally? I wonder how his parents came up with THAT name... such a weird name...' May and Brendan thought.
"Now you've met each other, why don't you two help Wally get his pokemon?"
"Okay" They answered
"You can borrow my Zigzagoon."
"Thank you" Wally replied and they left the gym.
'Hey... what's the white haired guy's name again? Brandon? He has WHITE hair? And I thought my green hair was odd...' Wally gasped out loud.
May and Brendan turned to him.
"Are you okay?" May asked.
"Yes... I just... um... kinda choked I guess..." Wally blushed
"Okay..."
'You moron! Why did you do that? You embarrassed yourself in front of her! ... Wait... what made me gasp again? ... Oh yeah! The stupid white haired boy... is he May's boyfriend or something? Well she's MINE!'
"Wally, look, there's a Ralts right there" May said, pointing to a Ralts.
"A Ralts? That's the one I really want!" Wally said.
"Go for it" Brendan said impatiently.
"Er... okay, I'll try my best! Um... Zigzagoon, use... um..."
"Tell it to use tackle" Brendan said in a bored tone
"Um... okay... use tackle then..."
The Zigzagoon looked at Wally unconfidently but it obeyed.
The Ralts growled at it.
"Er... do I use tackle again?"
"Yes" Brendan said in an annoyed tone
"Okay... use tackle again" Wally ordered
The Zigzagoon damaged it some more.
"Now use a pokeball to capture it" May encouraged.
"Um... okay..." Wally said "Er... go pokeball" he said as he threw the pokeball.
The pokeball wiggled. When it stopped, Wally picked it up.
"I... I finally caught a Ralts!" He said.
"Good job!" May optimistically
"That took you long enough" Brendan said.
"Don't be even more heartless than you already are" May defended
"I'm not heartless, that's your job."
"I am not heartless!"
"After being so mean to me, you say you're not heartless?"
"I wasn't heartless in the first place!"
"Yes you were, when you meet me?"
"That was your fault, you were the one that made me mad"
"Ya, well, how was I supposed to know?"
"I told you, remember?"
"Even if you did, you are still heartless"
"I am not, you are!"
"Fine, let's not count heartless. You don't have manners!"
"I do too!"
"No, ya don't"
"Na- uh!"
"Ya-huh!"
"Na- uh!"
"Ya-huh!"
"Na- uh!"
"Ya-huh!"
"Er... you guys, shouldn't you break it up?" Wally asked
"I'll stop when he stops, he started it!" May answers
"No, I'll stop when you stop because YOU started it" Brendan said.
"I didn't start it!"
"Yes you did"
"Na- uh!"
"Ya-huh!"
"Na- uh!"
"Ya-huh!"
"Hey, hey, break it up" Mr. Maple suddenly appeared
"Dad, he's the one that started it" May said
"No I didn't, Mr. Maple"
"Hey... can I ask an question?" Wally asked
"Okay..." They answered.
"How did you two get stuck together for the whole journey if you hate each other so much?"
"Hmm... I would like to know the answer to that too..." Norman said.
They sighed "Mom's/Dad's idea" They answered
Norman chuckled. "I knew it! Only April and Bryan's ideas would be like this."
"Ohh... no wonder you two have to travel together..." Wally replied
"Hey, Wally, you will start your journey tomorrow right?" Norman questioned
"Hopefully..."
"Why don't you travel with May and Brendan? May has been the champion of the Kanto and Jhoto leagues and Brendan is Professor Birch's son. You would benefit from traveling with them."
"Well... if they want me to"
"WE don't mind" May said
"Not, we, you don't mind but I mind. Its already bad enough to be stuck with you, and now, a rookie" Brendan muttered
"Well, it's decided. All of you can going to traveling together under two condition each." Norman said pretending that he was unable to hear Brendan
"What?" They asked
"Wally, you have to break up their fight and help make May and Brendan get along with each other. May and Brendan, you two have to get along with each other and you can't be mean to Wally. Okay?"
"Okay" May and Wally answered.
"Joy..." Brendan said.
"Well, it has been a long day. You two are probably just cranky after the day. How about you two go take a bath, have dinner, go to sleep and start a brand new day tomorrow?"
"Okay..." They answered while giving each other death glares.
"You should go home too, Wally."
"Yes Mr. Maple."
Mr. Maple sighed. 'Good thing I got Wally to travel with May and Brendan, what will happen if get into a really big argument if Wally or anyone wouldn't be there?' He thought relieved.
'Yes! I get to travel with May!' Wally thought as he walked home.
'Yay... I get to travel with a weird timid green haired kid and a evil old man now... what were my parents thinking?' May complained to herself in bed.
'IS MR. MAPLE INSANE? That 'Wally' guy is so inexperienced that he doesn't even know how to tie his shoe!' Brendan criticized before he went to sleep.
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T.T ::continues to cry::
May: ::reads out Wandering Gamer's note:: You're note, Wandering Gamer! (well, it's not like private but it was something he said in my review k?) You know how you said in the last review that they would begin their quest to brave the wilds and conquer their foes...unless they don't kill each other first? Well, this is the reason why Wally is joining them! To stop the madness that they may cause in any way! (if he isn't too timid to!)
May: and.... review!