To reviewers: thanks for reviewing
Cherie Muto: Yes, its going to make May and Brendan fall in love, that's why I put [Hoennshippy] in the summary, May and Brendan is my favorite couple for Pokemon. And good luck with you and Mike...???
Wandering Gamer: :: grins:: sorry, you lost the bet! I can't beat up Wally yet, Vokteren won't be happy and I need him un-beat up... :: note to self: do not let May and Brendan beat up Wally for the next few chapters (jks)::
Vokteren: I'm not gonna bash Wally, I don't hate him. Plusle and Minun is probably going to be part of their main team when they catch one so don't worry... all you have to worry is that I might have to kick some of their main team members out after they catch the legendaries okay? Thanks for reviewing my GS story... got a note there for you (In the reviews) Your incident about the wasp, that happened to our class too, we were in French and there was a spider right beside the girl in front of me. I told her about the spider and she like ran half way across the room. I was telling the guy diagonal from me not to kill it but he did T.T poor spider.
May: now on to the story!
::Sigh:: say the disclaimer...
May: Disclaimer: Icy-chan does not own Pokemon if she did, the will be stink-en rich and would be able to buy that pilot hat she wants
Okay, just a few more notes:
============== ... ============== Is meanwhile or later
/(...)/ Is translated pokemon language translated while /.../ is just the sounds they make
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"CAN YOU STOP HUMMING?!?!? IT'S MAKING ME GO INSANE!" Brendan yelled.
"I-I'm sorry... I'll stop..." Wally said.
"Brendan, it's only 10 in the morning and you are already yelling at Wally!" May defended.
"So? Isn't it bothering you too?" Brendan asked.
"Ya, but..."
"EXACTLY!" Brendan interrupted
"So? That doesn't give you or me the right to yell at him!"
"Er... guys? Wally interrupted
"WHAT?" they both roared
"See? You yelled at him too!" Brendan said
"So did you and I wasn't yelling, I just was... talking really loudly!" May supported
"No, you yelled at him!"
"Did not!"
"Guys!"
May and Brendan stopped walking and turned to look at the green haired boy.
"Shouldn't you two give it a rest? You two already had an argument last night, aren't you tired?" Wally continued.
"Everyone is tired in the morning, even me..." Brendan started.
"But he was the one started it!" May said before Brendan could say it.
"Did not!"
"Did too!"
"Did..."
"Guys, you are starting up again..." Wally said.
"It wasn't me!" They said and continued to argue
"Hey you there, with the green hair, care for a battle?" A fancily dressed boy asked
"Er... okay..." Wally answered as May and Brendan kept on arguing
"Okay, one pokemon each" The Rich Boy Winston said
"um... sure" he answered
"Go Zigzagoon!"
"Go Ralts!"
============== Meanwhile ==============
A Youngster ran and tapped the arguing Brendan on the shoulder. "You two wanna battle?" the Youngster asked
"Battle?" They asked
"Yeah, two on two" Youngster Billy answered.
They grinned "Go Muddy!" Brendan chose as he threw a red-white pokeball on the sandy floor.
"Go, Blaze!" May sent out doing the same.
"Go Seedot and Taillow!" Youngster Billy called.
============== Back to Wally... ==============
"Zizagoon, Tail Whip!" Rich Boy Winston ordered
"Ralts, er... use um...[ confusion]?" The unconfident boy commanded
The ralts obediently used confusion and made the raccoon like pokemon perplexed but it managed to use Tail Whip to defend itself.
"Zizagoon, now, use tackle!"
"Ralts, um... growl at it"
Ralts growled at the zizagoon, which made it more confused. Now, it was hurting itself.
"Er... Good job, Ralts, use growl again"
"snap out of it, Zizagoon and use tackle again too!"
The zizagoon ran to the green and white pokemon as it growled and knocked it down. The two pokemon's health points are now tied.
============== Back to May and Brendan... ==============
"Seedot use leech life on the Mudkip and Taillow use peck on the Torchic!" Yougster Billy ordered.
"Blaze, counter that with scratch!" May instructed
"Muddy, use tackle!" Brendan said.
Muddy quickly attacked the seedot with his water gun. The seedot swiftly replaced it with its leech seed. Meanwhile, the two bird pokemon lunged at each other and fell back from being damaged.
"Seedot, use tackle on the mudkip again and Taillow, scratch the torchic!"
"Muddy, tackle again"
"Blaze, burn it with ember!"
The seedot and mudkip both dived at each other, knocking each other back. Blaze fired her flames at the taillow causing it not to scratch the fire- type pokemon.
============== Back to Wally... ==============
"Zizagoon, use tackle again!"
"Ralts, um... confuse it"
Ralts quickly got up and used confusion again. It damaged the zizagoon but it ran straight for Ralts and tackled it. The green and white pokemon skidded across the pathway from the impact made from the attack.
"Tackle it again before it gets up!" Rich Boy Winston called.
"Ralts get up now and use confusion again!" Wally ordered.
The two pokemon were in a completion of speed, luckily Ralts won because the zizagoon was confused and attacked itself. Ralts quickly finished it off with another confusion.
"M-my v-very first victory!" Wally cheered
/Rararau! / His Ralts joined.
Wally hugged his Ralts "We did it! We beat him!"
/RaRu! / Ralts agreed
"Yes, you did beat me, here's your money" Rich Boy Winston handed over the money.
"Thank you!"
/Ruru Ra! / Ralts followed
"Hey, where's May and Brendan?" Wally noticed
/(I dunno)/ Ralts said
"Okay... lets go see..."
============== Back to May and Brendan... ==============
"Are you okay, Taillow?" Youngster Billy asked
The taillow nodded
"Use scratch then, and Seedot, use leech life again!" he ordered
"Good job, Blaze, use peck now!" May commanded
"Muddy, use water gun!" Brendan instructed.
The two flying typed pokemon flew to each other trying to attack. Blaze managed to peck the taillow a few times before it scratched her. On land, Muddy shot Seedot with its water gun and made it roll away before it used leech life.
"Taillow, use pecks this time and Seedot, use tackle!"
"Muddy, use water gun again!"
"Counter it with an ember, Blaze!"
Youngsters Billy's pokemon began to run at Muddy and Blaze but before they reached them, the two long distance attacks damaged them and finished them off.
"Yes!" May and Brendan cheered and high-fived as Youngster Billy gave them their money and walked away.
/Tor! / Torchic shouted.
/Mud! / Muddy joined in.
"Our second two-on-two battle won!" Brendan stated
"Good job, Blaze and Muddy!" May congratulated and the two continued cheering
/(Hey look, they're finally agreeing for once!)/ Muddy said to Blaze.
/(Well, looks like battling is the only thing they agree on!)/ Blaze said.
"There you are!" Wally said
"Wally, we won!" They told him.
"Really? So did I!" He said
"I think we should get going, I'm hungry" May said
"To Rustboro City we go!" Brendan said as they walked off.
============== Later ==============
They have finally finished walking Route 104 and had reached Petalburg Woods. There, they each have beaten 2 of the 6 wurmples of Bug Catcher Lyle and Brendan had beaten Bug Catcher James.
"Help!" They heard a man call.
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[ ]- For the attack Confusion, I wasn't sure if Ralts had it when he's around level 6-8 so yeah...
May: The attacks Icy-chan put for the battles aren't really accurate because she doesn't have my game with her... (she can't find it!)
I just felt like only doing a battle scene for this chapter but if you think there isn't a point, there is one, it is that May and Brendan can agree on battling okay?
So... who do you think it is? Cast in your vote! (Team Magma or Aqua) by reviewing!
Cherie Muto: Yes, its going to make May and Brendan fall in love, that's why I put [Hoennshippy] in the summary, May and Brendan is my favorite couple for Pokemon. And good luck with you and Mike...???
Wandering Gamer: :: grins:: sorry, you lost the bet! I can't beat up Wally yet, Vokteren won't be happy and I need him un-beat up... :: note to self: do not let May and Brendan beat up Wally for the next few chapters (jks)::
Vokteren: I'm not gonna bash Wally, I don't hate him. Plusle and Minun is probably going to be part of their main team when they catch one so don't worry... all you have to worry is that I might have to kick some of their main team members out after they catch the legendaries okay? Thanks for reviewing my GS story... got a note there for you (In the reviews) Your incident about the wasp, that happened to our class too, we were in French and there was a spider right beside the girl in front of me. I told her about the spider and she like ran half way across the room. I was telling the guy diagonal from me not to kill it but he did T.T poor spider.
May: now on to the story!
::Sigh:: say the disclaimer...
May: Disclaimer: Icy-chan does not own Pokemon if she did, the will be stink-en rich and would be able to buy that pilot hat she wants
Okay, just a few more notes:
============== ... ============== Is meanwhile or later
/(...)/ Is translated pokemon language translated while /.../ is just the sounds they make
--------------------------------------------------- Chapter 7 ---------------------------------------------------
"CAN YOU STOP HUMMING?!?!? IT'S MAKING ME GO INSANE!" Brendan yelled.
"I-I'm sorry... I'll stop..." Wally said.
"Brendan, it's only 10 in the morning and you are already yelling at Wally!" May defended.
"So? Isn't it bothering you too?" Brendan asked.
"Ya, but..."
"EXACTLY!" Brendan interrupted
"So? That doesn't give you or me the right to yell at him!"
"Er... guys? Wally interrupted
"WHAT?" they both roared
"See? You yelled at him too!" Brendan said
"So did you and I wasn't yelling, I just was... talking really loudly!" May supported
"No, you yelled at him!"
"Did not!"
"Guys!"
May and Brendan stopped walking and turned to look at the green haired boy.
"Shouldn't you two give it a rest? You two already had an argument last night, aren't you tired?" Wally continued.
"Everyone is tired in the morning, even me..." Brendan started.
"But he was the one started it!" May said before Brendan could say it.
"Did not!"
"Did too!"
"Did..."
"Guys, you are starting up again..." Wally said.
"It wasn't me!" They said and continued to argue
"Hey you there, with the green hair, care for a battle?" A fancily dressed boy asked
"Er... okay..." Wally answered as May and Brendan kept on arguing
"Okay, one pokemon each" The Rich Boy Winston said
"um... sure" he answered
"Go Zigzagoon!"
"Go Ralts!"
============== Meanwhile ==============
A Youngster ran and tapped the arguing Brendan on the shoulder. "You two wanna battle?" the Youngster asked
"Battle?" They asked
"Yeah, two on two" Youngster Billy answered.
They grinned "Go Muddy!" Brendan chose as he threw a red-white pokeball on the sandy floor.
"Go, Blaze!" May sent out doing the same.
"Go Seedot and Taillow!" Youngster Billy called.
============== Back to Wally... ==============
"Zizagoon, Tail Whip!" Rich Boy Winston ordered
"Ralts, er... use um...[ confusion]?" The unconfident boy commanded
The ralts obediently used confusion and made the raccoon like pokemon perplexed but it managed to use Tail Whip to defend itself.
"Zizagoon, now, use tackle!"
"Ralts, um... growl at it"
Ralts growled at the zizagoon, which made it more confused. Now, it was hurting itself.
"Er... Good job, Ralts, use growl again"
"snap out of it, Zizagoon and use tackle again too!"
The zizagoon ran to the green and white pokemon as it growled and knocked it down. The two pokemon's health points are now tied.
============== Back to May and Brendan... ==============
"Seedot use leech life on the Mudkip and Taillow use peck on the Torchic!" Yougster Billy ordered.
"Blaze, counter that with scratch!" May instructed
"Muddy, use tackle!" Brendan said.
Muddy quickly attacked the seedot with his water gun. The seedot swiftly replaced it with its leech seed. Meanwhile, the two bird pokemon lunged at each other and fell back from being damaged.
"Seedot, use tackle on the mudkip again and Taillow, scratch the torchic!"
"Muddy, tackle again"
"Blaze, burn it with ember!"
The seedot and mudkip both dived at each other, knocking each other back. Blaze fired her flames at the taillow causing it not to scratch the fire- type pokemon.
============== Back to Wally... ==============
"Zizagoon, use tackle again!"
"Ralts, um... confuse it"
Ralts quickly got up and used confusion again. It damaged the zizagoon but it ran straight for Ralts and tackled it. The green and white pokemon skidded across the pathway from the impact made from the attack.
"Tackle it again before it gets up!" Rich Boy Winston called.
"Ralts get up now and use confusion again!" Wally ordered.
The two pokemon were in a completion of speed, luckily Ralts won because the zizagoon was confused and attacked itself. Ralts quickly finished it off with another confusion.
"M-my v-very first victory!" Wally cheered
/Rararau! / His Ralts joined.
Wally hugged his Ralts "We did it! We beat him!"
/RaRu! / Ralts agreed
"Yes, you did beat me, here's your money" Rich Boy Winston handed over the money.
"Thank you!"
/Ruru Ra! / Ralts followed
"Hey, where's May and Brendan?" Wally noticed
/(I dunno)/ Ralts said
"Okay... lets go see..."
============== Back to May and Brendan... ==============
"Are you okay, Taillow?" Youngster Billy asked
The taillow nodded
"Use scratch then, and Seedot, use leech life again!" he ordered
"Good job, Blaze, use peck now!" May commanded
"Muddy, use water gun!" Brendan instructed.
The two flying typed pokemon flew to each other trying to attack. Blaze managed to peck the taillow a few times before it scratched her. On land, Muddy shot Seedot with its water gun and made it roll away before it used leech life.
"Taillow, use pecks this time and Seedot, use tackle!"
"Muddy, use water gun again!"
"Counter it with an ember, Blaze!"
Youngsters Billy's pokemon began to run at Muddy and Blaze but before they reached them, the two long distance attacks damaged them and finished them off.
"Yes!" May and Brendan cheered and high-fived as Youngster Billy gave them their money and walked away.
/Tor! / Torchic shouted.
/Mud! / Muddy joined in.
"Our second two-on-two battle won!" Brendan stated
"Good job, Blaze and Muddy!" May congratulated and the two continued cheering
/(Hey look, they're finally agreeing for once!)/ Muddy said to Blaze.
/(Well, looks like battling is the only thing they agree on!)/ Blaze said.
"There you are!" Wally said
"Wally, we won!" They told him.
"Really? So did I!" He said
"I think we should get going, I'm hungry" May said
"To Rustboro City we go!" Brendan said as they walked off.
============== Later ==============
They have finally finished walking Route 104 and had reached Petalburg Woods. There, they each have beaten 2 of the 6 wurmples of Bug Catcher Lyle and Brendan had beaten Bug Catcher James.
"Help!" They heard a man call.
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[ ]- For the attack Confusion, I wasn't sure if Ralts had it when he's around level 6-8 so yeah...
May: The attacks Icy-chan put for the battles aren't really accurate because she doesn't have my game with her... (she can't find it!)
I just felt like only doing a battle scene for this chapter but if you think there isn't a point, there is one, it is that May and Brendan can agree on battling okay?
So... who do you think it is? Cast in your vote! (Team Magma or Aqua) by reviewing!