Hey Serena here, for some odd reason when chapter 2 didn't want to go threw... . so i'm rewriting it.
hiei: ur stupid you know that, you had to delete your fic. now something is going wrong. hn. bakka nigen...
me: thank hiei .
hiei: on with the fic onna
me: yeah yeah, the remake of chapter 2
enjoy!

Last time: "Thank-You!" You said happily. Hiei just hned and vanished. You blinked a couple of time then sighed happily "I'm so glad!" present You just finish cleaning your wounds with the water next to the tree you were under.

Hiei Pov.

I've been watching the onna for some time now,...bakka nigen didn't let me sleep at all. With her screaming...
I edge myself closer to her, curiousity seems to get me all the time, damn. I leaped from the tree I was in to the tree above her, to get a closer look. ' Hn why would a man want to do anything to her,...she doesn't seem so special. Hn.'
I lean closer to catch her scent, to see if it were any different,...she smells live vanilla, and lavander...nothing so special about that...
I leaned in closer, but as soon a I did, the tree branch ticked and leaves fell. I saw her look up then shrugged it off.

Your Pov.
I heard something move in the tree branches above me, but quickly ignored it. 'Probably a squirrel' I thought.

Hiei Pov.

I tried to catch my balance, but ended up falling on the ground with a "thug"
I quickly got up and looked at her...I smirked at her expession. I heard her ask in a shocked voice "Are you ok?"

Author Pov.
Hiei replied with a "Hn", and you got ticked off "IS Hn the only word word in your Vocabulary! What is your problem?" "Hn. Bakka onna..." "So your know, these words too, huh?...Hey you called me a stupid woman, how DARE you call me stupid, shorty!" Hiei quickly lost his temper, and with the speed of lighting, quickly unshealth his katana and pinned you to the tree, with the tip of his katana to your neck.
Hiei said in a venomious voice. "I grow tired of your Questioning...do you want to die!" "Why are you doing this..?" "ENOUGH WITH THE QUESTIONS BAKKA ONNA!"
You stare at him in total shock,...first you were chased out your loving home...almost raped by a crazy man...got saved,...by a guy with a bad attitude, and now was about to die for just being curious. This all to much for you to handle so you fainted. Hiei looked at you Dumbfounded for a moment, but quickly recovered. "Hn. might as well take the onna to Genkai's..." With that said he picked you up bridal style, and headed his way to Genkkai's temple.


me: the remake of chapter 2, not so bad if I say so myself!
hiei: you made me carry the onna
me: . i know because i'm the author/director what i say goes!
kurama: review please
me: yes yes yes yes please review, i love you all!