chunkypuff:heyas! im not much of a detailed story novel writer person, more of a fanatic of EE&E sharing his ideas with the rest of the fanfiction world. well, ok im done jabbering. just dont expect alot from me people.
GravyD took out the last rounds from his old shot gun and admired the gun. He grabbed and opened the ice shotgun, putting the rounds he had in his hand in, and watched as the bullets got frozen over. "Wow." He took it and placed it in his backpack (I forgot to mention they had backpacks) "Ready for liftoff Captain Mr. Sir Commander Leader Double-D" "Hehehehe." Edd giggled at Ed's soldier formality. "Yes soldier!" Edd chuckled as he set the coordinates to Thunder Peak.
"Man, this place is-" While Cojay says this he gets struck by lightning. "shocking." "Well, that was unlucky." "Ok then, now where do we go?" "How would I know sockhead?" "Hey guys-" "Not now Ed!" "But-" "I said shut-......" Everyone gawked at the giant mountain rising out of the ground as they talked ".....up." "Hmm, it seems to be made up of rubber, which I'm guessing is used for repelling the lightning that is obviously in the air. The rubber repels the electricity because it is an insulator and-" Edd stopped and looked over at everyone only to find they all fell asleep. "Oh boy...." Edd sighed. Edd woke them all up and Cojay led them to a crack in the rubber. Sate found a switch and flipped it, and the crack widened into a door. There were 4 tunnels, each one a different size: large, medium-large, medium-small, and small. "Oh great what now?" Eddy said as the tunnels came into sight. "Hmm,I say we split up." "Ooh ooh, I'm with Double D!" Ed proclaimed. "Ok, anymore requests?" "I want to go alone, I need some peace and quiet after all this mess." said Sate. "I'll go with GravyD," said Cojay. "I need to keep him in line." "So I guess Eddy's going by himself." "Hey, how come I don't have a say in this!?" "Well Eddy, Ed wants to go with someone, and GravyD does too, so if you want to go with someone, pick either Ed or GravyD." "Uhhh, nevermind then." "Ok, now that that's settled, we now need to pick tunnels." "Can we get the humongous one because GravyD needs his space." said Cojay. "Ok, then me and Ed will get the medium-big one, as long as Ed can keep from moving too much" "I am a good boy Double D!" "That's good Ed." "Eddy should get the small one because he's sho- I mean vertically challenged." "Ok then, Ill get the medium-small one. I need room to study anyway." "Alright let's go!" Cojay and GravyD: GravyD and Cojay were walkng and walking and.....you guessed it, walking. "Coooojaaaaaaaay..... I'm so bored!" "Not much longer GravyD, then we'll be on our waaaaaaaaaaaay!" A big thump was heard as they fell into a big hole and landed on solid ground. "Owch" Cojay moaned as he took in is surroundings. "What the-!"
chunkypuff: hehehe, clifffhanger, though its not very good. anyway, please review, thanks!