The battle between Sora and Axel

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'Sora, don't you remember me?' I cried, shaking him with my fists. 'What the heck is wrong with you?'

'Hey! Lay off me!' he said, and summoned his keyblade. 'Or, I'm tempted to use this.'

That was the keyblade used to kill Heartless as his eyes grew menacing, as he drew the Keyblade close to my chest.

I could hardly breathe as he made it disappear again. Donald and Goofy stared at me, then Sora.

'Sora, what's wrong with you?' asked Goofy. 'You seem so mean now.' The air was tense and silent, no one heard Goofy say anything like that. Sora approached Goofy (they are about the same height now)

Kairi thought Sora was going to attack as she begged him to stop but in his eyes, there was dark flames…

Sora summoned his Keyblade as Goofy stared, his mouth open. He didn't know what he did wrong. Sora started to materialize his Keyblade as Goofy gulped and took out his trusty shield. He smirked and looked evilly at Goofy and he drew his Keyblade for the kill as he came down, I ran in front. Trying to tell him to stop as I ran towards him, he struck me on the back…

Time froze as I felt unbearable pain in my chest and body; I fell on my knees. Body trembling and tumbling, I managed to say 'Sora, turn back.' Before I saw nothingness and Donald yelling.

Battle with Axel

Sora: Are you ok, Goofy?

Goofy was nearly knocked out, as he managed to kill more Heartless to defend Sora. Donald was firing fireballs, ice and thunder. At every Heartless he could see or find, the battle was going not bad.

Sora jumped and slashed many Heartless as they vanished but more replaced. Goofy was usually the easygoing sort but this time, his face was in determination (I know, its hard to picture!)

Suddenly the Heartless disappeared with smoke as the Three was amazed, what on earth happened? A figure appeared from the smoke and haze, he had piercing eyes and flaming red hair.

Sora: Who are you?

: You're nightmare. You're Sora.

Goofy: Uh, what do you do want to do?

: This!

He jumped in airborne and using a mysterious weapon, he attacked Goofy. Goofy didn't even have time to respond before he was knocked out with one single blow!

Donald: Cur…

Before he could finish the sentence, he too was knocked out. Axel was quick and strong as a sniper.

Sora: Geez, its all up to me.

: I'll tell you my name, if you defeat me.

Sora: You're on.

The battle was bloody, they slashed back at each other and even mystery man (Axel) was amazed at the power of the Keyblade. Sora wouldn't give up, he had faith in Kairi to return back to her and her lucky charm: Oathkeeper.

After 2 hours of fighting, they both were very tired. Axel was trying to defeat Sora by using the 'ring thingy' and Sora was leaping and attacking. Both were equally matched but Axel suddenly laughed a strange laugh.

: Ha hah haha

Sora: What's so funny!

: I'm going to end the battle and you would lose…my name is Axel.

Sora: Wanna bet?

: I'll tell you about it.

Axel smiled a menacing smile as he walked over to Sora, Sora had his Keyblade ready in case, Axel approached, taking large steps. As he went over to Sora, Sora heard Donald croak,' run Sora…'

Sora started to run but it was too late, Axel advanced as with a quick jerk. Sora was pinned to the ground and wasn't able to move. His keyblade was knocked to the ground and Axel's face was so close to his.

Then using his spinney fingers he touched Sora's forehead, Sora trying to bite but cant. 'Memories in, memories out. Lose his memories…' he poked Sora's forehead as Sora suddenly felt a cold sensation. A barrier was coming into his head as he tried to expel it, but it was very strong. He could feel himself getting weaker and weaker, as his thoughts getting erased (not a goof feeling!)

Sora: Stop Axel!

Axel: Say your prayers.

Sora fainted on the cold battle ground as Axel left…