I just wanted to say, please R/R. I need input.
Chapter 15
Lizzy is walking down a long white hallway; there is a door that never seems to get closer. The door has a blinking light on top of it. It seems like forever but Lizzy finally reaches the door. Every step the light blinked more and the sound got more annoying.
Lizzy pushed the button on the wall to open the door. As the door slowly opens, she can see a girl with wires and tubes everywhere. Lizzy enters and slowly walks to the bed. The girl looked just like her, (it is me but not). Lizzy thought as she came closer to the girl. Lizzy is standing at the foot of the bed and all of sudden she feels light headed. She falls to the floor, out cold from fright.
Lizzy is in a different world these things that move faster then horses, wait the word is car. How did she know that? She seemed to know everything, the names the people, but most important she can feel their feelings in this weird world.
Lizzy is standing on the corner with trees and the sun was so bright. When she see a car that is trying to slow down; so it can stop at the red light. It stops and the girls are laughing, before Lizzy could scream, "Watch out." The speeding car piles into the smaller car with the girls in it.
Lizzy slowly goes limp falling to the grass below her, the pain was too much to handle. She screams in pain and her own blood is covering her. That is when she looks towards the car and the girls are screaming too. Lizzy watches the car as it rolls over and over like leaf in fall. Lizzy feels it all, the pain, her fears and the numbing of her body as she loses consciousness. This mystery girl that looked like her.
Lizzy wakes and gets to the girl in the bed quickly. This girl looked like her, but she had cuts and bruising all over. There are hard white things on her legs and arms; she looks weak and all of a sudden she opens her eyes.
Lizzy rushes back towards the door, she stops. The machines that were so loud now are quiet. The one that was in her mouth and down her throat is gone. Lizzy turns slowly; the girl looks straight at her and says, "This is your density."
Lizzy runs to the door but it keeps moving, and the girl keeps talking. She finally slides down a wall, and still the girl talks. "You can't run from your density."
Lizzy screams, "I AM IN HELL, HELP ME"
Lizzy wakes when Mrs. Smith pokes her in the chest.