Will nick die part two?
Chapter two
As nick is looking down the barrel of his own gun and all he could hear is luca saying you will be sorry for putting my little brother in jail you little fu*ker
This is the time you beg for your life as he pleaded with luca to stop and I can make a deal with you luca please stop you don't have to do this .
Its to late for a deal its pay back time what do you wan me to do I will do any thing just say I will do any thing please just tell me what I can do.
Good there is some thing you can do phone your girl friend Sara to come hear I have a score to settle with hur as well as you I can kill two birds with one
There is no way in hell I will phone sara you can never get me to phone sara
Fine I will page hurl * page * hey sexy can you please come and help me please sara I really need some help
She will never come luca I no sara to well
Sara was driving down a long desart road to get to nick's crime sceen as she was on hur way she seen 3 suv's at nick's crme sceen sara was worried whats going on
As she arrived at the crime scene she seen nick tied to a chair and she was going to help nick but some one hit Sara over the head with a metal poll
As sara came to all she could see is a lot of men around hurl and nick she was getting scared of what they are going to do to us
Luca said do you rember me sara how could I I forget you you brother kill all they children no it was me you stupid bit*h
I have a surprised for you and he pulled out sara's gun and shot nick so the csi will think It was sara that killed nick
Sara let out a big screem of hurt and nick was bleeding and the men left them but no be for shoting nick agen .
This is my first chapter that I have done on my own please give me advice on how to in prove on my this thanks
I would love 10 reviews thanks
Chapter two
As nick is looking down the barrel of his own gun and all he could hear is luca saying you will be sorry for putting my little brother in jail you little fu*ker
This is the time you beg for your life as he pleaded with luca to stop and I can make a deal with you luca please stop you don't have to do this .
Its to late for a deal its pay back time what do you wan me to do I will do any thing just say I will do any thing please just tell me what I can do.
Good there is some thing you can do phone your girl friend Sara to come hear I have a score to settle with hur as well as you I can kill two birds with one
There is no way in hell I will phone sara you can never get me to phone sara
Fine I will page hurl * page * hey sexy can you please come and help me please sara I really need some help
She will never come luca I no sara to well
Sara was driving down a long desart road to get to nick's crime sceen as she was on hur way she seen 3 suv's at nick's crme sceen sara was worried whats going on
As she arrived at the crime scene she seen nick tied to a chair and she was going to help nick but some one hit Sara over the head with a metal poll
As sara came to all she could see is a lot of men around hurl and nick she was getting scared of what they are going to do to us
Luca said do you rember me sara how could I I forget you you brother kill all they children no it was me you stupid bit*h
I have a surprised for you and he pulled out sara's gun and shot nick so the csi will think It was sara that killed nick
Sara let out a big screem of hurt and nick was bleeding and the men left them but no be for shoting nick agen .
This is my first chapter that I have done on my own please give me advice on how to in prove on my this thanks
I would love 10 reviews thanks