Well, I wasn't exactly sure if poetry was still allowed here…

I haven't seen Evangelion poetry posted for ages…and I didn't want to get in trouble or anything.

This is a poem I wrote rather quickly on a prompt to write a poem about a certain moment in a series. So I chose Evangelion, and I think as you read, you'll realize the moment and the perspective and all that…

I feel odd just posting a small little poem like this, but looking back I've seen tons of these done, and I rarely write Eva poetry so I felt like sharing this.

Disclaimer: I don't own Evangelion or its characters. Gainax does, and they rock. Who else could create both Evangelion and FLCL!


Kom Susser Todd (Come Sweet Death)

The lonely boy leaned against the rail

His fists clench and shiver

He loves the girl, but hates himself

His soul cannot be delivered

For all around him, he hurts

And deep inside him, he cannot repent

Cannot lie back slowly, or begin his own end

For he is a coward, tried and true

Although he'd rather hurt himself, than hurt you

That's what he tells himself as he moans and cowers

In his corner, corner of gloom

That's what he repeats as he groans and shivers

In the darkness, the darkness, awaiting the doom

For although death gives birth to nothing, nihil is true

For often times nothing is better than life

And often death is the way one pays tithe

So come sweet death and free the mind

Come sweet death, cold and kind

In the kiss of a bullet, straight through the skull

He finds peace and beauty in nothing at all.


Well, that's it folks, my one and only Eva poem…eheheh…hope you didn't think it was lame, I sort of wrote it in two seconds.

I love writing poetry, but I rarely do poems based on anything but myself, so you probably won't see anymore Eva poems from me…ehehe

Well, later, go off and check out my real fanfics…