Good luck for you people. My brother now wants me to update. Due to a breaking a collar bone, I wasn't able to update the Saturday before last and then last Saturday was my birthday. So now, you see my problem. Luckily my arm and shoulder isn't as stiff as it was when my collarbone was first broken so I can actually write and type. Trust me, it wasn't easy at first…I had to type with my left hand. GOD! People keep helping me! I hate it…if I need help I will ask, but otherwise I want to do what I can by myself…mutters stupid teachers…
June 7, 2005
Hehe….that above note was written 6 weeks ago…god….thank god school is over….yes! no more finals….no more martina poking me….hehehe…..well umm I will write another page today…(thank martina…and my other persistant reviewers who insist on me writing more…can you believe that…?)
Anyway here are answers to the reviews….
snowmouse( )- alright you are entitled to your own opinion…Thank you for telling me it…to be honest I get tired of hearing "This was really good. Write more" from my reviewers…after awhile it doesn't really mean anything…it makes me feel as if people are just trying to be nice…I would like constructive criticism like this more often.
AmnarRanma- I agree…Hiei and Joey are definitely cuter…but I like Kaiba's attitude…though personally I feel that the American version doesn't serve him justice…they show he is evil but they hardly show the other side of him. They always make him act mean to Mokuba and they never show him being nice…I am going to attempt to show his nice side as I always do but here…he's a little different…
AmnarRanma- Thank you!
AmnarRanma- YUM! HOW DID YOU KNOW I LIKE BURNT STUFF! ESPECIALLY DONUTS! LOL! Yeah he did waste a lot of money on the new mansion…he wastes too much money…for someone who used to have barely enough money to scrape by, he sure does spend a lot…
Tolea- umm was that meant as a joke or are you really mad at me? I think I mentioned your reviews in a different chapter…or maybe I got logged off the internet before I could copy and paste your review to MS Word…either way…sorry…
Moon'sHope- Thank you!
Tolea- hmmm maybe it was this review…hmmm smack dab in the middle of all my Guilt reviews…oh well I am answering it now! The crossover sounds interesting…will you send me the link to it when you have it started? I would like to read it. I am staying away from your sister…I hate vampires…EVIL! Your friend is right to not want to admit it…I wouldn't either! LOL!oh and I have a few FMA one-shots if you want to read them… and my friend jess and mel and I are writing a FMA, Yu YU Hakusho, and Inu- yasha crossover. It is set at the dark tournie…FUN! Anyway…we have to think of the rating and title and stuff before we post it and it will be on jess and mels joint account. So it will be awhile…
Nicole( )- Thanks. I was wondering why you picked a vent…They are really too cramped to run away in a hurry…and although Kaiba sits in an office all day, he probably still gets his exercise…LOL! Well thanks for that bit of revenge…it tastes good doesn't it…but Kaiba's not a bad guy as you will see in this chapter.
Iluvevilyamis- well Nicole! WELCOME TO Yes…cool I'll take a look at your stories sometime…
dragon shadow( )- THANKS! But you're in luck. Martina said that I have to write at least seven pages this time…boy that's going to take awhile. I have finals coming up… Studying while typing yeah…evil science! And tomorrow I have to work on a biography report due on Monday (I haven't even started reading the book) and a final report for humanites do sometime.
dragon shadow( )- Ahhh how I make my friends…all sorts of annoying people…every one loves to bug me…but that's ok. I never would get done if they didn't. She was only up one floor so it was pretty easy to find her way down…if it had been farther, she would have gotten lost… She is not too good with direction and big places…
dragon shadow( )-wow…I am glad all my reviewers are persistant…yes it will be up soon…I know I haven't updated in over a month…
OK! WOW A LOT OF NEW REVIEWERS! YOU SHOULD SEE HOW MANY REVIEWERS I GOT FOR MY FMA ONE-SHOTS! Oh and everyone who likes yu yu Hakusho…please go to my profile and read my story called THE EYE OF THE DRAGON. I haven't gotten any reviews for it and I really need some to get going…PLEASE!
Anyway…LET US UPDATE!LOL!
Chapter 9
Martina walked into the door of Kelsey's house eating a chewy bar. "Got anything?" she asked her mouth full.
Kelsey slammed her head on the desk. "No!" she yelled "Nothing…just a bunch of useless information…turns out the sight is run by some dork that lives in California. DEAD END!"
Martina finished off the chewy and said "well move onto the next website…we don't have time for this."
Kelsey hit her head on the desk again. "I have been at this for 12 hours straight. It's your turn. My head hurts."
"Not surprising. You keep hitting your head. By the time you're done, you won't have any brain cells left." Martina joked.
Kelsey groaned. "I'm going to bed."
Martina grinned. "Are you sure you don't to keep searching. I'm not going to share any juicy details that I find!"
Kelsey groaned again. "I never thought that I would hate my computer so much."
So Martina continued the search, guzzling down a couple of sodas in the next few hours.
Seto Kaiba walked into the room he had provided for Renata. He saw her sleeping peacefully in the corner, attached to the closet door with a hand. He did feel regret that he had had to do this, but he had to reach his potential and she had been in the way. She had been too close to finding out everything. She had the potential as well. He had to find the fourth Egyptian God card before she did or she might just beat Yugi and become the next Champion. He couldn't let that happen, not after all his hard work and not when she could become even stronger than Yugi.
She was one of his best students. Though she did have this annoying habit of reading in his class, she still passed. Come to think of it, he had done that in school too. Hmm, he really didn't know it was that distracting to the teachers.
He couldn't keep everything a secret for too much longer. He had to hurry. Someone might become suspicious that all the teachers and students had started disappearing about the time of his arrival. If a student could figure out that Mrs. Benshoff wasn't dead than any teacher could as well.
Hopefully, she would co-operate and tell him the names of the students who played Duel Monsters since he had been unable to find out through his teaching job. Suddenly his cell phone rang. It was one of his security guards. "WHAT!" he snapped.
His security guard, Phueron, hearing his tone of voice and noting that he didn't sound as if he was in a particularly good mood said nervously, "Sir, there are intruders on the grounds. They tripped one of the alarms but we have been unable to spot them and capture them."
Kaiba scowled. "Fine, let them be. I have a feeling that I know who they are. I want you inside the mansion though. I may have need of you if I am mistaken about their identities."
"Yes, sir."
He closed the door, locking it behind, and nodded toward the guard who was standing watch outside. Descending the staircase he saw a group of 3 kids, the same kids that he had given detention yesterday. The one with chains hanging from her belt launched herself at him as soon as he was at the base of the stairs, but didn't make it very far with the other two holding her back. "We want to beat him as much as you do but we need to know where she is first. This place is too big to search." He heard the girl with blonde hair say.
The last girl inserted her own comment as if she was holding a grudge. "Yeah, almost as big as the Internet."
The girl with the chains waited with her arms folded across her chest. "Can we find out where she is so I can kick his ass? I want to see some blood and bruises!" (a/n: Good old Mel! Melanie: Who are you calling old? I'm not that much older than you!)
The blonde girl grabbed Kaiba by the shirt collar and, though he was taller than she, managed to lift him a foot of the ground. "Look," she said, "I know martial arts and if you don't tell us where Renata is I will use it on you. I don't care about the rules."
Kaiba smirked. "I have no idea what you mean. Renata isn't here. In fact, she's probably home sick…either that or she played hooky."
"She's not home, I guarantee. Her mom was frantic when I was at her house." The last girl said with a smirk; knowing that they had him right where they wanted him.
The girl in chains smirked as well, loving the look on Kaiba's face. "I suppose that you didn't know that Martina and Kelsey live down the street from Renata? He, you didn't think out your plan thoroughly before you carried it out."
"Not only do we live down the street from Renata but we also happen to know where her locker is, being her friends." Kelsey said grinning widely. "Her locker had her book bag with the completed homework due that day and her jacket."
Martina had her right hand ready for a punch. "We've spent hours trying to figure out everything and finally it payed off. We know about your entire plan…everything. Next time, don't publish your plan on your live journal account. So are you going to tell us where she is?"
Kaiba looked nervously at her then glanced towards the front door. Where were his security guards?
