A/N: thanks 'guys' for all your reviews! Speaking of reviews 'thanks' Michael reviewing my new story ('What If It Meant More?') Another story called (and she will belong!)Is up! So please review!
And, now to respond to your reviews.
Dragonfanman: I'll tell you one thing, let's just say that their both goanna get in a little sweet revenge on Gantu, and Hamsterville. You're goanna see those two do something I've always want to see in a fanfic namely: work together to kick some evil ass! I love your work, thanks for reviewing!
Xoverguy: Yes, yes, and yes to your first three questions! Yes she find will find a way, but it will be tough going emotionally, and physically. Yes you will see that pairing in the story, but Lilo will realize her love in chapter 4 (or 5). Stitch will realize it in chapter 6,7(or 8).
Michael: I'll try and work on that! As for your annoyance about my dislike of Angel in my story you reviewed. I think if Lilo were in love with Stitch she probably would be irritated with Angel because she thinks that she(Angel ) is trying to steal Stitch away from her.( I don't mind her,( I like her)but I'd rather her have a romance/friendship, then a serious relationship.) Thanks for the neat tidbit of information. It's very interesting. I might use it at some point!
Anonymous But Interested: I will try, and work on that! Thanks for the review!
(#1)Hamishwarfare: I am very honored that you're using this story as a possible springboard for, ideas, and research. So therefore, In accordance with that, I'm going to attempt to list the very best (L/S) pairing stories 'I' know.
(#2)STITCH! By: Hawk the Azapper. I love this story! This is very funny, and action packed. a great read!
My Best Friend! By: Cryptim Egyptian. Sweet, and funny. The inspiration for this story.
The Final Solution! By: PIcaRDMPC . Very sad, very violent, very funny, and very sweet.
The Adventures of Lilo & Stitch! By: Final Cosmos the Ultra. One of the three greatest L&S stories, I've ever read.(#3) Yours is included in this list)
Sorry about that, just trying to help a fellow author.
And, now for the story.
Ch 3: First Step, First Fight!
It was raining. 'Perfect whether" Lilo thought. She was still crying when
Suddenly … she noticed piece of paper on the on the ground. She picked it up.
It Read: Dear. Stupid, little, earth girl with the very annoying talking-like-manner.
I the greatest 'evil' genius the galaxy has ever known, have taken you're poetic little artificially created ally and have in him on one of these poetic landmasses. The first step to finding him is to go to another island, namely the one you insignificant, earth, people call 'Oahu'. They will be a danger there 'defeat' it, and you shall get another note, signed doctor Hamsterville.
Lilo thought "Rotten little jerk, now how am 'I' going get all the way over there"?
Her watch 'beeped', she then remembered the communicator built into it.( she pushed the button, and heard Jumba's voice.) He said. "Little girl 'have' good news, and bad news"! "Good news is, I will now tell you all the functions of the suit!" (He did, but I'm not telling what they are 'until' their are actually used) Bad news is doctor Hamsterville, and a small army of evil Internet-galactic criminals have escaped from the same jail he was in.
I'm in deep mud now. Lilo 'thought'. Jumba signed off, as he went to his convention. She took off her clothes,( She put them in the backpack) and put on the armored suit. It was black, skintight, and covered in armored plaiting. (?) She then activated the suits jet-boots, and zoomed off into the sky. When she landed (twenty minutes later) there was nothing 'there'.
(Meanwhile in doctor Hamsterville new (twice the size of his regular spaceship, and shaped like him.) spaceship. "But lord 'Tire-iron N-daba' I"…. (the fiend on the screen he was looking at had a terrible, simmering, red, face, hypnotic slanted yellow eyes, and green pointed teeth.) "Silence" it roared. ("Don't call me again") It said. The boss is a-a-angry A voice said. "Shut up you nonsense like-talking moron." doctor Hamsterville screamed. "Send the first danger… Now". He screamed. (Again)
(Lilo's)POV. "I started crying again, 'suddenly'… it appear. An ape-like robot dropped down from the sky, its jet boots allowing it to land safely. "Hamsterville…I thought. Has good taste in robots.( The robot in question was silver, with a will build muscular frame, 4 yellow eyes, slightly skinny arms, pointed ears, and a circular shaped hatch, toppled it's head, with black pointed fangs in its mouth. The robot ran towards me, roaring viciously. I smiled, and activated the suits force-field by snapping my fingers, and then I activated the strength function of the suit by cracking my knuckles. The robot punched with a fury, but it couldn't get through the suits force-field. I blocked a punch, and grabbed the robots arm I, then threw it several feet.
It didn't appear to be scratched as it fired missiles from its finger tips. I rolled out of the way. I activated my jet boots, and shot up in the air. I punched the robot in its chest to no avail. It fired laser beams from its eyes; I dodged them until it stoped firing, and I punched the robots eyes, and shattered them. It then fired missiles from an opening in its chest, and fired lightning from its fingertips.
I zoomed out of the way, and landed on the bot's head. I ripped off the hatch. I looked in, and saw a Jumba sized creature of the same species as Gantu with a panel of blinking lights facing it. I jumped down, and landed on the control panel. I showered the panel with punches, and kicks causing it to burst into flame, and explode. I jumped up, and gave the stark-likealien a roundhouse kick, and an uppercut to its head knocking it unconscious. I delivered a haymaker to the wall behind the alien causing it to cease to bar my way. I tossedthe alien out of the hole in the wall, and against a large rock several feet away. I leaped out of the hole, landed, and ran away just as the robot fell, and exploded. I went over, and used the laser handcuffs to capture thefiend. (Normal POV)She reached into the alien's pocket, and found a note that told her to go to another island namely 'Molokai'. She left for her destination. There was no strain on her face at least… Not yet!
Meanwhile …. Stitch was in his barren cell, he was bored, and was longing for his best friend… and perhaps more (though he didn't know it… 'Yet'!
To Be Continued…
(A/N): in answer to Ironsct's questionLilo is 8 in my story, but she is 7 in the show. Thanks a lot for the encouragement. Dragonfanman I find a commentary you give refreshing, thanks a lot for the review. HamishwarfareI hope the list above helps. I have a suggestion, if you decide you're not L/S person than please at least try, and make her in fall love with another experiment if at all possible. This is merely a suggestion/ request.By the waythe'yet's'are hinting at two things that emportent plot points,try andguesswhat they mean!
