CHAPTER V:
"Where did they go?" Piper said freaked out.
Leo sensed his kids. "To your bedroom." He sighed relieved as they all orbed downstairs.
Wyatt was caringly tucking Chris into bed while he whispered comforting words to him. He seemed to be unaware of the other people in the room, though they all knew he was probably ignoring them.
Once Chris was comfortably settled in bed Wyatt tried healing him.
"It won't do much… I tried zillions of times already, Wyatt. He specially prepared his magic to be resistant to yours and mine." Leo said softly realizing that probably Wyatt hadn't been tricking them into anything, and was genuinely worried about Chris.
"Did you try a conjoint healing?" Wyatt spoke, still not looking at them.
"Conjoint healing?" Phoebe asked.
"Yeah… did you try to canalize baby me's healing powers and Paige's? It's usually stronger and more effective if we all use our powers together." He said softly, no traces of the angry man they had met a while earlier.
"No… we didn't try that, honey…Paige go get baby Wyatt and you two can get started." Piper said walking to her son and putting a hand on his shoulder. "He will be ok, Wyatt." She reassured her, he might have been evil, but he certainly didn't look all that evil right now, and after all… he was her baby.
Wyatt swallowed hard and nodded devastated, squeezing the hand on his shoulder with his own, desperately.
Leo and Wyatt started healing him and a few minutes later Paige and baby Wyatt started helping them, Chris slowly began to relax more, he seemed in less pain and his breathing got easier as he stopped groaning and twisting. After a while they knew that was as good as it got for now.
"He should have killed me … I deserved to die… not him!" He said heartbroken. He kneeled beside his brother, looking at him. "Chris knew… Oprent knew…hell…everybody knows…that without him, I am unredeemably lost… I don't know if that's good or bad… but without him… I will cross the last border."
"What happened to you, Wyatt?" Piper asked sadly concerned, caressing her son's hair.
"Life happened, mom, life made me realize it's all about power." He said softly with a sad resignation moving towards his mom's touch.
"Where we so bad with you, sweetie?" Piper asked with a bitter sweet feeling; seeing how her evil son was so eagerly receiving her caresses.
He shook his head. "You were great, ask Chris…"
"Then why… son?" Leo asked softly.
"I was fifteen, dad…you were all gone… and I had to make sure that didn't happen to the kids… I was fifteen and I had to protect four kids that were the favorite bounty for half of the underworld! I wasn't going to let them take them…and that's when I realized." Wyatt said heart broken.
"Then why did Chris came so far back into the past?" Paige asked in a hoarse voice, wondering if any of the three other kids where hers.
Wyatt shrugged, he leaned back to where Piper was sitting down, his back almost touching his mom legs, his head barely touching her lap, he looked like a little abused kitten, searching eagerly for contact, yet dreading it. "I donno…ask Chris." He said.
Piper caressed his hair and gently leaded him to rest his head on her lap.
"I did what I could, mom…I tried… I just couldn't let what happened to you, happen to them… they were just kids… I promised to myself that I wasn't going to let anyone hurt them ever again…no matter what…I was going to make sure nobody hurt them." He said with a broken voice and his eyes closed.
"But there were other ways, Wy!" Chris said weakly with his eyes closed.
"Other ways I could use to protect them?" Wyatt howled devastated "You are saying that cuz I wasn't powerful enough? Cuz I failed you all, Chris? I let them die? Cuz all I did was wrong? That's what you mean?"
The present people restrain their gasps of horror.
"No… there were other ways… the right ways, Wy…and you did a lot of things wrong." Chris suddenly opened and pierced his brother's gloomy eyes with his feverish ones and spoke as firmly as his state allowed him to "But you didn't let them die… you never failed us and you always did your best to protect us… and we all knew it and were thankful for that…so go on with your insane rant about power all you want…but get that straight, bro! All of us knew you did your best to make sure we were fine! Whatever your ways were!"
"You just can't see it!" Wyatt jerked up angrily "It's all about power…but you still can't see it… and that's what put you in the situation you are right now!" He yelled at Chris.
"Last time I checked…I was in this situation cuz my insane overlord of all power brother killed Oprent's brother!" Chris yelled angrily, with every intention to hurt his brother, until he saw the look on Wyatt's face …then he regretted his words and wished he could be swallowed by a giant jelly-fish. "I am sorry, Wy. I didn't mean to!"
"Yes, you did." Wyatt said coldly. "But It doesn't matter… they didn't brought me here to discuss politics… we are going to find that bastard and a way to heal you…and we are not discussing this topic again until we do that, clear?" He commanded his brother.
"Crystal, mommy!" Chris teased him.
"Not funny, Christopher…now go to sleep."
"You are sure fun, grams!" Chris teased him one more time.
Wyatt grinned and crossed his arms on his chest "Behold everybody… my brother the comedian!" He said sardonically, evidently trying to hide his amusement. "Pity your band of cheerleaders hasn't been born yet… cuz if not the would be cheering you happily right now, Chris!"
Chris smiled a smiled that seemed full of memories. "I missed you, Wy." He said plainly.
"You were the one that left." He said harshly, the pain that that caused him obvious in his eyes.
Chris jolt up from bed in rage. "Because you…AHHH" He screamed in pain from the sudden movement. His face remained pale, eyes wide open while he fought to hide the agony he was going through, but he couldn't articulate another word.
Piper ran to him yelling "ENOUGH!" she helped him back down worried. "You two stop this RIGHT NOW, clear? I don't want ANYBODY fighting about their opinions regarding that subject until we heal Chris, did I make myself clear?" She said in a "don't mess with me" tone, her eyes searched everybody in the room, but mainly focus on Wyatt and Chris, they both nodded obediently at their mom.
"Do you always fight so much? When it's obvious that you care deeply about each other?" Paige asked them exasperated.
"And you don't fight with your sisters, Paige?" Wyatt teased her sarcastically arching his eyebrows.
"And don't lie to us! Remember we grew up in this house." Chris whispered in pain, but evidently amused by his brother's come back.
"Rest Chris… we'll take care of everything." Leo said, though it sounded more like a plead.
"I feel better dad…I promise…" He said.
They all looked at him in disbelief.
"I don't what you guys did…but after I woke up a while ago I was feeling stronger, with more energy."
"After the conjoint healing?" Wyatt asked.
"You know they always worked wonders on me…"
"No… I know you are always such a kamikaze you always needed those cuz regular healing is never enough for you!"
Piper eye balls almost pop out of their sockets when she heard that.
"Don't worry mom…you'll learn soon enough that Wy loves to exaggerate!" Chris said comfortingly, holding her hand.
Wyatt grinned at him. "And that Chris loves to go on suicide missions!"
"Ok, can we stop this stupid competition of why mommy should love me better than my brother and focus people, please?" Paige demanded.
"I think you've been spending too much time with Chris, Paige!" Phoebe smiled.
"Ok…I know I shouldn't ask, but what is killing me…is…" Leo said pensive looking at his sons. "When Chris first got stabbed he acted like in his future his mom was dead, but I was alive…but now you said you were left alone with four kids under your care! Did we all die? Did I bail on you?" He asked horrified.
"I am sorry, we can't tell you that future consequences…" Chris began.
"Yeah… future consequences for Saint Christopher over here… luckily for you… I was always the black sheep of the family!" Wyatt grinned "I said I was left to alone to PROTECT four kids, I wasn't left alone with four kids, grandpa was there with us… he was always there with us till the end… right Chris?" Wyatt eyes got sad; you could tell he had really cared about his grandfather.
Chris nodded as sad as Wyatt.
"So dad was a good grandfather?" Phoebe asked smiling, she had been always the one that insisted on giving Victor another chance.
"He was awesome…the best!" Chris said weakly.
"Until he died… like everything I ever care about… because I was still too bound to the "good side"…it was my mistake… my fault, as always… if I wasn't sure about the right path till then… that's was what defined it… it was the elders fault…" He said angrily though his voice was calmed and soft, it sounded like a frozen anger.
"Some of the elders…and you decided to kill them all!" Chris stated plainly.
"Well… they deserved it! They wouldn't let me heal him… of all the things they could have denied me! They denied me the power to heal him! We needed him…we loved him… we had lost too much fighting in their names… and they wouldn't let me HEAL HIM! Because he wasn't a witch and he had mortal illness? Chris… for god sake… you were the closet one to him; How could I looked at you in the eyes and tell you everything was going to be ok, when I let them do that to you? How could I face my little girl after that? She had already lost so much, and she was so young… I had to do something!"
Chris looked at Wyatt and didn't know what to do, what to say… Wyatt always honestly thought that what he was doing was the best for his family; and he had suffered so much, truly suffered; But so had Chris, and that hadn't turn him into a monster.
Chris closed his eyes and sighed tiredly and Piper caressed his hair gently.
"Just sleep a little, baby." She asked; but Chris gently shook his head.
"I am sorry, bro… I didn't mean to get you all worked up with all those memories. I am sorry… I am sorry for all I did…for all I didn't do… for letting everybody die… for all you want me to be sorry about…now… just rest and get better, ok?" He said what he assumed Chris wanted to hear.
Chris chuckled sadly with his eyes closed. "Hehe… if I'd knew it was so easy to get you to apologize I would have gotten stabbed a lot sooner!" Wyatt rolled his eyes at him, but Chris eyes were closed, so he didn't see it. He continued " Unluckily, you don't mean it…unless not what I want you to be really sorry about… the only thing you are truly sorry about, is letting everybody died…and that's the one thing I don't blame you for…cuz it was never your fault… you did your best and more, Wy…and your obsession with blaming yourself and thinking that if you would have been powerful enough none of that would have happen is one of the things that is seriously wrong with you… how can I make you understand it was not your fault? There was nothing you could do!" He was trying to stay awake to finish what he was saying but the last words came out as a mere whisper; He had fallen asleep and they all turned their gazed to Wyatt.
He was kneeling down, his arms hugging his legs, slightly rocking himself, his eyes were glassy.
"It was all my fault… I am sorry! I should have been powerful enough…"
"Sweetie… Chris said it wasn't your fault… it wasn't!" Phoebe who was the nearest to him, kneeled in front of him and caressed his hair.
"Yes it was!" He said unfalteringly 'I let them all die… and I will have to live the rest of my life with that burden on my shoulder… but they will ALL pay!" He said almost insanely standing up, his eyes went cold and unemotional again
"Buddy… seriously…" Leo walked to his son.
"Dad… don't!" He ordered "I never answered your question…what happened to you…we don't exactly know…like a month or so before…The event…you found out something… you didn't tell us, you told mom…but you didn't tell us much… for what I know… you found out something about someone that had done something with me when I was a toddler… I don't know what the big deal was all about… but you were seriously angry…I've never seen you so angry in my life! Mom tried to stop you…but you left…I don't know what you did…but you came back late that night…you dragged me to Chris' room and you told us that you really loved us, but that when the elders find out what you have done, they were going to go after you and after all of us if you stayed home… so you had to leave until it was safe. You gave us a letter to give to mom, you said we had to be strong for her; you told me to protect her… and I failed you, dad… you said he had been planning to attack me in my birthday…to get to me, finally after years of planning…you said you though you had neutralized the danger, but we should still be careful during my birthday…only it wasn't in my birthday, dad…it was in Chris'… they came to get me in Chris' birthday…" Wyatt's face was covered with tears. "It was all my fault…you had to ran away because you did something to protect me…mom, the aunts… they all died because me…grandpa… the girls…If I've only been powerful enough! And now Chris…Why is that everybody bows before me… that I can have anything I want by just snapping my fingers… anything but the one thing I really want…that I lost it all, in front of my and because of me! You said my birthday…and I tried to protect them…"
Leo hugged his son. "It's ok, son… it wasn't your fault…it was mine…I gave you the wrong date!" He said; not really knowing how to help him, Wyatt didn't say anything he just cried in his shoulder.
"I just missed you all so much…you have to understand me…this stupid quest of good versus evil just took it all away from me…even my baby brother…but if I had been powerful enough!" He said wrapped in his father's arms.
Seeing this Leo didn't really know how to answer, because he was not going to accept his son's ways, but didn't really want to fight with him either. Wyatt continued "So after I killed all the elders, Chris and I went looking for you… I mean…you did come to us when we needed you for the first years… but you had been MIA for over a year, it was as if you just vanished…we were scared to look for you, cuz we thought if you were hiding so well was because the elders were looking for you…but now the elders were dead so, we went looking for you… "
"Only when we found you…we realized Barbus had found you first… and had been feeding of your fears for over a year… you lost your mind…sometimes… just sometimes for a few minutes you are yourself again…but most of the time, that bastard locked you up in a personal hell inside your head." Chris continued for his brother. "I went to see you just before coming to the past… and you were almost coherent for a while… you told me the spell would know where to take me…you told me something happened to Wyatt before I was born…and that's what started all…you told me you avenged it… but too late; and it had cost you your family…when I asked you who, why, what happened… you got delirious again."
"Ok… I think you seriously have a problem with the concept of sleeping and resting, my dear brother… can you seriously close your eyes for more than five minutes?" Wyatt acted motherly.
"I said I was feeling better!" Chris stated.
"Yeah too bad nobody believed you!" Wyatt smirked.
"Yeah… I think you guys should give him a little more conjoin healing and then we should go to the attic to see how to solve this while we let him sleep!" Piper proposed and all but Chris and baby Wyatt nodded.
Everybody with whitelighter blood applied healing to a very grumpy brunette witch-lighter; once they were done.
"I am fine… I am not tired… and I want to help…I don't even understand why you called Wyatt, that was insane and risky! What were you thinking? I swear once all this is over, I am going to have a SERIOUS talk with all of you!" He said angry, sitting down and crossing his hands on his chest.
"ONE- lay back down." Were Piper's orders "
Two- you are NOT fine;
Three- I don't care if you are not tired, you'll sleep.
Four- I care even less if you wanna help, you are going to sleep and rest till I say so.
Five- You are better thanks to the fact that Wyatt thought about conjoint healing you and because he was here to give you a whole lot of healing power himself, so at least that is ONE good thing about it.
Six-when you are delirious, you howl for your brother like there is no tomorrow, and it's pretty heart breaking… trust me anyone with a heart would have tried to bring you your brother back." At that Wyatt smiled at his brother broadly and Chris couldn't help smiling back at him.
"And last but not least, until your brother thought about the conjoint healing we couldn't get a straight coherent word out of you… so… we couldn't get any information about the demon that stabbed you…we needed him to tell us something about him."
"And that's what we are going to do now, so Chris… rest while we go to the attic to figure all this out, ok?" Leo said while Wyatt unceremoniously forced him back to a laying position and with a swirl of his hand, Chris was deeply asleep.
"What did you do?" Piper asked worried.
"Oh, don't worry he is just asleep." Wyatt said calmly.
"What about personal gain, Wyatt?" His mom asked him.
Wyatt looked at her like saying "Do you remember who you are talking to?" but just answered "I am more worried about his personal tantrum if he finds out what I did." He said with a smile.
"Isn't it risky? To use a spell to force him to sleep?" Leo asked worried.
"Nahh… Chris always had trouble sleeping, I used it a hundred times on him, he never even realized it. So… shall we?" He said walking to the door.
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"So what do we do now?" Fifteen minutes later Paige asked pacing around the attic.
"Well… you said Oprent did this, right? Are you sure?" Wyatt said thinking out loud.
"Yeah… we went through Chris' memory when he was stabbed and that's how he called him. You do know who he is, right?" Phoebe asked confused, he had sounded before like he knew pretty well who he was.
"Yeah… as I said, Oprent is a half witch, half demon." Wyatt said.
"That is Paula's age cuz they went to school together… just out of curiosity… who is Paula?" Phoebe said trying to look casual.
Wyatt laughed and looked at her caringly. "You know Pheebs… you were never good at hiding your emotions…Who do you think Paula is?" He said with a huge smile.
"I am thinking right?" Her smile was even bigger looking at Wyatt expectantly.
"You would have been so proud of her." He said tenderly "Now… Oprent never particularly got along with my cousin, mainly cuz he was a sleaze-bag and was jealous of her; still the point is… he came from the future to kill my brother, and he probably has been planning this for almost three years… since I killed his brother when Pry was about to turn fourteen, so that's almost three years ago! And he is a smart one… sleaze-bag, but a smart sleaze-bag! And he knows TONS about us…I mean… not only text book things about us… but real stuff…Railey used to come home a lot when he was a kid, and Oprent always envied us so much he probably asked him everything about us. And Chris… he had to be always nice to everybody… and so he would always be patient with Oprent and pity him and hung out with him and answer his questions and this is how he repays him… the BASTARD!"
The all looked at him confused "OK Wy… now the version for the people that never lived in the future, so they have NO clue about what you are talking about!" Paige smirked.
"Well, cliff note version, his magic is probably very resistant to ours… we proved that already… and probably the best thing would be to summon him here; he can't be very far so it shouldn't be hard."
"But don't you think he is probable back in the future?"
"No… I think he will stay here in the past till he is sure Chris is dead, so he can go back to the future to gloat with me!"
At that point Chris chose to orb in.
"What the He…" Wyatt said running to him and forcing him to the couch, beside him all the rest.
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teal-lover
"WHERE'D THEY GO!oh, so much suspense. I love it:)" Heheh I was just torturing people for the sake of it! I am not that flashy to send them to an exotic destination.
"And you promised me so good Wyatt/Chris moments--and I was not disappointed. That was so awesome." GOOD, I am glad to know!
"I adore Wyatt's softer side, and when his powers went all crazy hearing that Chris was dying. He's going to nurse him back to health before he punishes him for being a bad boy, isn't he:)" Kind of… what I am trying to pull out here is that people can even start to understand why Wyatt did all he did and then realize but… he is EVIL… but still… he can be so cute… contradictory feelings about the source of all evil, and understand why Chris still cares about him despite all.
"Cant wait for another update. Glad this one was so fast." I am in a roll aren't I?
Ceres217
"Still love it. I loved the talk between Chris and Wyatt and that Chris orbed to Wyatt :)... The fact that Wyatt just didn't want to belive his family that Chris was dying - perfect... " So happy you like it! Yeppi!
"I like that fact that he still loves his family." what I am trying to pull out here is that people can even start to understand why Wyatt did all he did and then realize but… he is EVIL… but still… he can be so cute… contradictory feelings about the source of all evil, and understand why Chris still cares about him despite all.
"Just a guess, but is Paula, Paiges daughter and maybe Oprent or his borther killed or hurt Paula, so Wyatt got angry? Just a thought." Well Paula is Phoebe's daughter… but you are so very close to what happened… you'll find out soon.
zandra
"wow i jus read ur story and wow i mean wow its was really great. omg im cryin ok yea it was freakn awesome! wow i jus i have no other words for that... "Gosh… that is flattering! I swear… such a nice review… Thanks!
Wwolf
"Me ha encantado el detalle de Wyatt al quitarse la camisa para k su hermano no le vea vestido de negro, adoro estos pequeños detalles que te lo dicen todo..." Gracias… a mi tb me encantan los pequeños detalles y por suerte alguien se dio cuenta… es com tu dices, un pequeñin algo… pero denota que piensa en lo que su hermano quiere!
"No se con cual de los dos me quedaría..." Es ficcion, nos podemos quedar con los dos : )!
"Chris enfermo es ver el lado mas humano de Chris, en la serie no nos lo enseñan mucho. Por eso creo k todas sus fans nos encanta!" Si yo creo que si, es poder bajarlo a un nivel mas sensible, sin cambiarlo y ademas el hecho de que todos esten re preocupados por el y el preocupado por conservar su hero complex!
"¿Ke paso entre Paula, me imagino k la hija de Paige( suposicion) y el hermano de Oprent?" Dun, Dun… aunque en realidad entre Paula y Oprent no paso mucho, pero entre la hija de Paige y el hermano de Oprent… bue… tampoco te esperes la historia del siglo…todo el mundo me esta preguntando y no esperaba tanta reaccion, ahora me da miedo de decepcionarlos…pero si… ya vendra la historia de cómo empezo el problema entre Oprent y Wyatt…lo que pasa es que me parecio mas interesante para una historia donde hay tantos sentimientos enfrentados (digo por lo evil de Wyatt y lo que Chris viene a salvarlo y que el no es malo con la familia y todo eso) que la historia de la venganza sea un poquito mas que el hermano de Oprent era otro demonio que Wyatt estaba un dia aburrido y lo volo en pedazos, no te parece?
" me gusta ke esta Wyatt tambien se precupe por syus primitas. ( En la mayoria de tus historias Wyatt malvado las masacra) Ahora me diras k tambien las ha matado y todas mis soposiciones al garete." No… no las mato ni mucho menos…de hecho Wyatt adoraba a sus primitas… no se… yo no entiendo porque alguien queria a muerte a su hermano y odiaria al resto de su familia y seria capaz de matarlos… no me parece que tenga sentido… entiendo que te lleves mejor con unos y peor con otros o que odies a UNA persona de tu flia y al resto lo quieras… pero que quieras solo a tu hermano y que seas capaz de matar al resto de tu familia me parece que no tiene sentido!
"PD:Postees tan rapido k me cuesta escribir un post para cada capitulo!( estaba leyendo HP y...)" Lo se… estoy escribiendo mucho últimamente.
"PD2: Me haces sentir mal por escribir tanto y tan rapido y yo ir TAN LENTO. Lo siento de verdad." Por un lado te diria que no importa… yo tengo tiempo ahora y me divierte, por eso lo hago. Por otro lado quiero hacerte sentir culpable para que postees y yo pueda leer tu fic..que muero por el proximo capitulo, es mas… ya creo que debo haber releido la historia 4 veces.
Missing Whisper
"Dude... this story makes me cry almost every chapter!" Seriously? Woww!
"I love it! It's so emotinal. Keep it up. " THANKS… that's cute.
"I loved chapter 4, the Wyatt and Chris interaction was great. " Awesome… they are sort of cute… aren't they? (I always write this comments and I feel bad cuz they are my characters… but well I re read my stories once ina while, and I swear my characters have a mind of their own… so I don't consider them mine so much!)
"Why can't I have a relationship like that with my brother? Lol maybe because brother and sister are destined to be enimies." Hwehehe well… first of all is fic… but trust me… if it makes you feel better, if you go to the underlining their story sort of really sucks… so you wouldn't want it! Come on… you don't have to be enemies with your bro… I get along pretty fine with my bro… but yeah I must say I can share a lot more with my sis… its always easier!
Here is your update and I hope you like it… you can see them fighting a lot more in this chappie… so I hope it makes you feel better :P!
Karen
"Yay Wyatts back! now save Chris please.:" Hehehehe…I will, eventually… if I save him write now… my fic will end in like 2 chapters.
"This has to be my favourite story that i'm reading not only is it very well written." Ohh that is super cute… thanks I feel so flattered… specially since I KNOW my English sucks…but well… I try… so I am glad you like it so much! It makes me sooo happy!
" it has my two favourite characters (big Wyatt and Big Chris) and they're together! Yay, more soon please x" Yeah they are my all time big fav too… kind of obvious if you go through my fics…! I always find a way to have them both there!
Altaira
"Yep! I did like their reactions. But now I'm annoyed coz I'm desperate to know where Wyatt has gone with Chris..." Hehehehe I am sorry I annoyed you! I am just being mean… cuz he didn't do anything with him…I just thought I torture you guys instead of Chris for a while!
Chris-Halliwell
"Keep writing The internet is all working now so i can now review all your chapters as they come out." Awsome!
"Where'd Wyatt take Chris?" Hehehehe I was just being mean… he took him to Piper's room…I just thought I torture you guys instead of Chris for a while!
Thanks…
phoebe turner
Thanks!
Piper Chris fan
"I am at work but i saw that you updates and i had to read it. " Heheheh I love corrupting people… it must be my inner Wyatt!
THANKS! I am glad you liked it
"I liked the part when Wyatt said that his mum is flawless and untainted. That was sweet. And i also liked the part when Wyattbroke down and Chris orbed upstairs and then they talked." what I am trying to pull out here is that people can even start to understand why Wyatt did all he did and then realize but… he is EVIL… but still… he can be so cute… contradictory feelings about the source of all evil, and understand why Chris still cares about him despite all.
"Bytheway, thank you how you review our review. That is really sweet. In that way you show us thay you care and we write more." That is nice… Thanks! I do care… a lot… I don't understand how someone wouldn't, I mean… you take the time to read what I write… should I do the same? I am the one that is thankful for all the nice words I get to read, I never thought anyone would be interested in reading what I wrote! So It probably means even more to me than to you… so thanks again!
shyeye
Very, very soon… here it is… I hope you are still liking it!
midnite-magic
"YAY! (midnite hops up on her chaair and celebrates the update, only her chair has wheels so she falls)" Hehehe you made me laughed so much ! And then I felt I was being mean… I hope you didn't hurt yourself :P!
"This is still one of my favv fics. I havn't read a single one of your that I don't like!" Ohhh I am so like AWWWWW… see I write a lot, I speak a lot…but sometimes an AWWWWW just covers it…
Julia Adele
" Well exciting as this chapter was I am looking forward to when Chris is finally coherent enough to realize what has happened." OH… you'll see… he'll have 200 reactions according to his level of pain and coherence before he gets healed and then probably realize what happens and go commit suicide somewhere… Heheh no.. that's not going to happen… don't worry.
Here you have more brotherly interaction I hope you enjoyed it!
Nobody but ME!
Thanks! I so happy are liking everything so far… I hope you still do!
" I had one question though. Wyatt started telling thema bout what Orpent's brother did, but he never said. Are we going to find that out? " Yeah… don't worry… Wyatt will tell them everything about the future without any kind of remorse! I just thought I would give everybody glances of what was life like for Chris and Wyatt.. I hope you like the idea… and make the whole Oprent story a little more complicated than Wyatt just randomly vanquished a demon whose brother wants revenge… I hope people agree with me that is more interesting that way.
JadeAlmasy
I am glad you think so… thanks
jumping-jo
THANKS… I feel dandy myself now! I am glad you liked it… hope you still do.
Nikki14u
"AWW. That was just too damn sweet! I just love Wyatt,evil or not!" You just have to love him…I think there is something about Wyatt… I was watching it's a bad bad world the other day and I thought about you when Wyatt stabs Leo… Yeah… I think he should definitely leave his hair long, the real goatee and the muscles… definitely works for him… and I don't complain about the black outfit… but that's me…then… shirtless doesn't look so bad in my mind either.
"And did I read that correctly? Did Opret's brother killed Paige and that's why Wyatt killed him?" Not exactly what happened... you will see soon. But what you read is that if Paige dies right now, none of this would/will (or whatever tense suits you better) happen…
"Anyways loved the new chapter and like always please update soon!" Thanks… I hope you are freer with work… or at least that you are enjoying your work.
Starry Sky 44
I hope you are having a great time on your vacations.
"I really liked Phoebe's reaction to Wyatt. It's so her. lol That was funny." Hehe thanks… I try to stay loyal to the characters… I am glad you noticed : )
"I liked how Wyatt thinks of his mother and Chris, even if he's evil he's still got some good." Thanks! I just figured it doesn't make a lot of sense that Wyatt LOVES his brother but hates the rest of the family… so if he loves Chris so much, he has to love the rest of the family.
Well I hope you enjoy the chappies when you come back.
The Halliwell's little Angel
Here is a fast update so you don't stay thinking about the evil cliffie for too long… that actually it was cuz I wanted to be mean… vcuz Wy didn't do anything poor boy! I hope you like it.
Emma15
"Yeah! Wyatt's here! And I sense some Chris/Wyatt bonding time coming-- which pleases me A LOT!" Glad it does… I hope it didn't disappoint you that they didn't orb to some weird cave in nowhere… still I promise they will have lots of chances to talk with people around and alone.
I"... Oh! when Chris just waved his hand and let Wyatt out, after the big fuss the sisters and Leo had made of keeping him in there! That was hilarious; Chris had no qualms about it. " Hehe… I never thought about it as funny, so you make me so happy… I love when people think I do/write/ say funny things and I am not even aware of it! But absolutely… its like you spent half an hour making sure Wyatt wasn't a risk and Chris in half a second spoils it all.
"I enjoyed seeing how much family means to Wyatt, despite everything he does; and how the bond Chris and Wyatt have trumps all their problems in the end." Thanks! I just figured it doesn't make a lot of sense that Wyatt LOVES his brother but hates the rest of the family… so if he loves Chris so much, he has to love the rest of the family too, and I am trying to have the readers understand Wyatt in a way… why he did all he did…even if he is evil… that there is still a chance to save him.
So I hope you like it!
BiancaHalliwell
Glad you like it… I just always pictured that is more or less how it had to happen… even if he killed you, Wyatt will apologize about it soon… promise… but I figured Chris wouldn't have thought it was possible to save him, or that something happened to him, if Wyatt hadn't been all that bad all the time.
adpi24
"okay you made me cry." I am sorry… I guess… unless you liked crying..
"oh i love this story. i cannot wait to read more." Thanks… here is more… hope you liked it!.