CHAPTER VI:
At that point Chris chose to orb in.
"What the He…" Wyatt said running to him and forcing him to the couch, beside him, all the rest.
"What are you doing here?" Piper asked angry out of concern.
"Need some help?" Chris asked cheery.
"Yeah… I need to get a new brain for my brother, cuz apparently the one he has is not working too well!"
"Funny… very good Wy! I knew you had it in you!" Chris smirked, teasing him.
"How did you even wake up?" Wyatt asked confused and not very happy.
"Wy… you used that spell on me so many times, I was bound to figure a way to get out of it eventually." He said smirking at him angrily.
Wyatt looked down shyly.
"Yeah… I don't appreciate it very much." He said dryly.
"How could I stand there and look at you when you were a teenager and you went days and days and days without sleeping?" Wyatt looked at him with puppy dogs, and Chris' heart softened.
"You always worried too much about me, bro." He said with a smile, tiredly laying his head back, to rest on the couch.
"Well… someone has to… cuz you don't worry about yourself at all!" He said in his best older brother tone.
Chris chuckled and looked at him, oblivious of the rest of the people.
"You know… Wy?" He said contemplative.
"What?" Wy asked sitting beside him.
Chris sighed "I know once I feel fine and strong again, I am going to be so angry that you are here, I will worry so much…but right now… having you beside me, in neutral ground… not being forced to fight…it just feels so nice."
Wyatt smiled. "I know…don't worry, bro… you'll be fine soon." He patted his knee.
"Great." He said sarcastically and weakly. "So we can go again to endlessly fight against each other?" He said ever so sadly.
Wyatt caressed his brother's hair and look at him sadly.
"You seriously don't like to fight against me?" He asked Chris skeptical.
"What do you think, Wyatt?" He asked shocked.
"Sometimes I don't know anymore, Chris. I don't know what to think… all you do is going against me… what am I suppose to think?"
"Ok, Wy…if we keep in this line of questioning, we are going to start fighting again and I don't want to fight, I am tired of fighting… please."
"Ok… no more fighting for the spoiled little brat!" Wyatt teased him, smiling lovingly. "So what does the baby of the house wanna do now?"
"I just want to stay here with all of you…just like this is… perfect… without a worry in the world."
"But things are not perfect, buddy… you are sick and that worries us, a lot!" Leo said kneeling in front of his sons.
"Can we just forget about that?" He said dreamingly while he blinked profusely.
"Forget that you are dying?" Paige asked shocked.
Chris looked at them with puppy eyes, like begging them to just let him keep that perfect moment unaltered; his eyes showed for the first time how much the situation he was in, really distressed him, and how he rather be dying and having his whole family being nice to him, than going back to how things were.
Wyatt stroked the hair in the head that was leaning against the back of couch beside him and Chris slowly moved his skull, to rest his head on his brother's chest. Wyatt smiled at his brother's soft purr when he wrapped him loosely in his arms.
"I am sorry sweetie…" Chris feelings were so strong Phoebe's empathy was being able to read him like a book; only after all this time yearning to read the neurotic whitelighter from the future, now that she was able to do it, she wasn't sure she wanted any more; she realized that what he had been hiding all along was just pain. "I know how you feel; but we can't let you die." She said kneeling in front of him and patting his knee.
Piper let go a sob, knowing that Phoebe's words were literal, she KNEW how he felt and apparently he not only was dying, but he didn't care much if he lived.
Phoebe kept on talking, but after hearing Piper's sob Chris' turn his head to her, without leaving the comfort of his brother's embrace.
"Why are you crying, mom?" Chris whispered softly, Wyatt's gentle and rhythmic stroke on his hair was slowly dozing him.
Piper gave him a sad smile. "Honey…do you honestly think we think things are perfect now, with you like this?" She said walking to him. Phoebe moved so she could stand in front of both her kids.
"I don't want to fight anymore, mom. I am so tired!" He practically sobbed. " You can't even imagine how tired and devastated I am…I don't have any strength left, and I know this" He said pointing the space around him. "Seems like nothing to you, cuz you almost take it for granted…but for me… this is the closet to heaven I've been in a really long time!"
Wyatt kissed his temples and stroked his hair lovingly, rocking him back and forth, but without daring to speak. He knew a lot of his baby brother's pain was his fault, and he was scared to say something that might lead them to another fight.
"You just need to sleep, son; I promise…you just need to regain your strength and get better and I promise you'll remember why you are doing all this, and once you are fine, we'll be here to help you." Leo said avoiding Wyatt's look. "Just go back to sleep and try to get better and we'll take care of all the rest, ok?" He said ever-so-lovingly.
"No… I want to stay here!" He pouted stubbornly.
"Please Chris, dad is right…you just feel like that cuz you are not feeling well; you'll see once you get better, you'll be eager to go against everything I ever told you and everything I ever wanted, and ready to fight to destroy the empire I worked so hard to create." Wyatt teased the bundle he was snuggling in his chest.
Only Chris didn't quite get the joke. "I AM NEVER EAGER TO DOOO THAT! YOU ARE MY BROTHER… I DON'T LIKE TO FIGHT YOU! I WANT TO SAVE YOU… I WANT FOR US TO BE ABLE TO BE BROTHERS AGAIN! I…." He pulled away from his brother's embrace and started ranting agitated; his breathing was getting erratic, and they could hear his lung whistle between words as he panted for air, his face got red and his body was slightly waving back and forth.
"Shh…" Wyatt calmed him down pulling him back to rest against his chest as they all looked scared at the youngest Halliwell. "It's ok bro…calm down, I was just kidding…calm down." He whispered to them man in his arms.
"No…I…" He tried to speak as his lungs hissed for air.
"I know… I know…shhh…calm down, Christopher… I am here now, and mom is here, and dad, and the aunts…we are all here now…everything is going to be fine, ok?" He kissed his forehead as he gently rocked him.
"Everybody…" Chris wheezed.
"Yeah everybody…and we'll make sure everything is fine… you don't have to worry about a thing, ok little brother?" He whispered lovingly, caressing his hair.
Piper held her brunette son's hand, relieved that Wyatt seemed to know what Chris' needed to hear, and sort of delighted of knowing what it was. The kid only wanted his family to love him.
When he felt someone touching his hand Chris looked down and smiled at his mother.
"We'll take care of everything, my love, ok?" She told him.
Chris nodded while he breathed with difficulty.
"Calm down, Chris…you need to breath!" Wyatt said scared.
"In and out, son…in…out…in… out." Leo gently leaded his breathing until it evened out.
"Will you let mommy and daddy and your aunts take care of you now, love? At least until you feel better?" Piper asked caressing his knee.
Chris chuckled at the way his "Mommy" (What was he four?) asked the question and then seemed to think about it.
"Ok" he said not very sure, yet smiling broadly feeling on top of the world due to the fact that everybody seemed to be fussing around him, even if the fussing annoyed him.
"Good boy!" Piper smiled.
"But just to be sure…how long would that be?" He asked skeptical. Wyatt, who was still holding him, chuckled.
"Until I say so!" Their mother said.
"Hmmm…" Chris mocked a scared face and looked at Wyatt with a complicity look and Wyatt shook his head.
"You are doomed, bro." He teased.
"What's that supposed to mean?" She barked teasingly.
"Nothing, mom!" they both faked innocence and repressed their laughter.
"Ok… now off to bed!" Leo ordered.
"NOOOOOO…" Chris whined one more time, hiding his head on his brother's chest as if he was a little kid.
"Hehehe…what's that, you think that if you act like you were four we are going to let you stay here? See I always said you were a spoiled brat!" Wyatt chuckled, being the one that knew him best, he knew when he could tell him he was acting like a brat and when he was in such a bad shape that it was better to tag along with his childish behavior.
"Mommy!" He pouted the magic word, looking at Piper with a look he had thought he'd never use again, a look he had perfected for fourteen years and always worked wonders on her.
Piper caressed his hair, and kissed his forehead.
"You are burning up, baby!" She said sadly as a sole answer.
"I'm… just a very hot guy, mom!" He teased. Leo chuckled. "I take after my daddy… right?" He teased, smiling at Leo with yet another look he had been perfecting all his life to buy his father off.
Leo laughed at looked at him ADORINGLY.
"DAD… you CAN'T fall for that one! Mom… well… no offense mom, but she is a mom… but you… can't you see he is manipulating you two so you won't send him to sleep!" Wyatt told her father.
"WY!" Chris recriminated him, sitting up and looking at him; Wyatt shoved him back to his laying position on top of his chest. "Besides…Dad has always been a lot easier to manipulate than Mom! Ask any of the girls… I guess you just relay on stereotypes too much!" He grinned, snuggling comfortable against his human pillow. The effect of the pain killer was fading away, and he felt more lucid, but the pain was starting to be unbearable.
Phoebe laughed. "Oh Phoebe… don't you laugh cuz you can imagine who is the easiest one to manipulate in this family!" Chris said happily.
"Yeah… Paula and Patience always had it so easy!" Wyatt whined.
"WYATT!" Chris sighed frustrated.
Phoebe understood the implications of what Wyatt just said and was doing her private happy dance, oblivious of the rest.
"Oh come on…look at her face! So happy! Isn't it worth anything?" He said with a huge smile and in such a cute way Phoebe felt like pinching his cheeks.
"No… it's not worth my cousin!" Chris said seriously, trying hard not to wince.
"Ohh you are such a worry-wart!" Wyatt said careless and very brother-like, and the rest chuckled. "look at that."
Chris looked at Phoebe's happy smile and realized it was worth almost anything; He clenched to couch's pillow, to bear the pain better, hoping nobody would see how the pain was clouding his eyes and judgment.
"Tell us about them…about the girls!" Phoebe said excited.
"Phoebe seriously, Chris is sick… I honestly think we should focus in Oprent." Piper told her sister.
Wyatt felt his chest was getting soaked, he didn't really care, his brother had a high fever, it was obvious he was going to sweat, but in the last five minutes, the moist emitting from his brother had seemed to triplicate. He looked down at Chris worryingly, caressing his face gently. He closed his eyes when he touched him, and didn't open them again. Wyatt looked at him, he was even paler than before, if that was possible, his face was soaking wet and his fever was certainly off charts. He saw Chris' grip on the couch, worried, he signaled his father to come examine his brother.
Leo barely touched his son's forehead and started yelling desperate. "CHRIS… do you understand you have to tell us when you start feeling worst?" He said angrily. Everybody stopped talking and look at them.
Chris opened his eyes and looked at his father with a weak smile, but he looked back at him with "Don't mess with me, I am worried sick!" eyes.
"I am feeling worst, dad." He said really weak, tried to appease his father with a meekly tone.
"Yeah great when we already realized that and your fever is probably 200 degrees!" He said angrily, but couldn't resist Chris dismayed look much longer. Leo sighed. "So what are you feeling, right now?" He asked him in a doctor-mode, caressing his burning forehead.
"Like I've been stabbed in my back with a power blocking athame." He smiled and his voice was getting weaker in each word.
"So funny, Christopher!" Wyatt tried to scold him, but he was too worried to sound like a real scold.
Leo gave his youngest a stern look.
"I don't know dad… it hurts…a lot more than before!" Chris said weakly.
Leo looked at Piper's watch (he didn't have one) and seemed to be thinking for a while.
"Can we just give him something for the pain?" Phoebe asked desperate.
"That's what I am thinking… I mean…we shouldn't be giving him any pain killers or even the medicine to lower the fever for at least another two hours… I mean what's the point of saving him from the stab if we are going to kill him with an OD?" Leo said worried.
"So? What are we going to do?" Paige asked.
"Well… we can apply him some conjoint healing that is probably going to help him at least a little and then" He looked straight at Chris, making sure he heard him "your brother is going to cast the same spell he cast on you before and you are not going to get out of it until I wake you up, ok?"
"I have a better idea... you apply some conjoint healing on me, and then we stay here…all of us… just talking! Ok?" Chris said with a smile fighting to keep his eyes opened.
"No…not ok, son… I am sorry!" Leo said caressing his hair.
"Ohh… come on… I'll tell you whatever you want to know about the future… anything you wanna know… I'll tell you!" He said so weakly it was hard to understand, he started coughing by the last line.
"I will stay here, I can tell them anything they want to know… so it won't work, bro!" Wyatt said.
Chris' coughing fit got more severe and Wyatt had to help him lift his head, so he wouldn't choke, because he didn't have the strength to move and cough at the same time.
"Phoebe… go get baby Wyatt, please." Leo told her while he glowed golden on top of his son, Wyatt and Paige helped him.
"Come on…we are always better when we tell the stories together, Wy." Chris mumbled with his eyes closed.
"I know… that's why I am trying to make sure we can tell many more… can you help me here, trying not to die… you know?" Wyatt was getting desperate.
"I don't want to go to sleep!" he whined.
"I don't care, Christopher, you are going to go to sleep in like two seconds and a half one way or the other… so its your call, you just go to sleep or we'll find a way to make you sleep. Do I make my self clear?" Piper said firmly, trying to restrain the tears.
"Ok, mom!" He mumbled sadly.
"Good boy…you'll see everything is going to be fine… don't you worry, my sweet baby!"
"Mom?" He said sheepishly.
"Yes, sweetie?"
Chris looked shyly and looked like he was about to say something but then he changed his mind.
"Nothing… forget about it." He ended saying.
Wyatt looked at him and restrained his laughter, knowing that would embarrass his brother even more.
"He wants you to stay with him for a while." Wyatt said with a smiled.
Chris blushed.
"Is that what you want honey? Do you want me to stay with you for a while?" Piper asked drooling at her baby boy that had just asked HER to stay with him.
"If you insist…" He said pretending not to care.
Piper kissed his temples "I insist, sweetie." She said lovingly caressing his hair with one hand, while Chris held the other with his.
With a caring smile Leo orbed them to the bedroom.
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"Mom?" Chris mumbled with his eyes closed.
"Sleep, honey…it will make you feel better."
"Mom… is it wrong?" Chris asked weakly.
"What honey?" Piper asked knowing he wasn't going to give up until she answered.
"That I can't hate him … that I care about him and that I am somehow happy that he is here with me."
"How can that be wrong, honey?" Piper caressed his hair. "If it makes you feel better I can't hate him or think I will ever be able to hate him either, what's more… I love your brother, as much as I love you."
"Mom…I know you can tell there is something odd with him; but trust me…when he is not around us he is a different person! He is a lot worst! He is…he is…he does really bad thing, mom! But then… things like this happen… and I don't care about all the awful things he did! I mean… I want to save him more than everything…but…I swear sometimes I think I want to save him more so I can be able to be with him without fighting… or because I know how much he suffered and suffers than because I really care about the world and it's fate…Do you think that I am horrible?"
"I think you are wonderful, honey." She kissed his forehead, his fever was so high, it almost made her cry.
"I am being so selfish!"
"No…you are not… I haven't seen anyone that fights so hard against evil as you do! We even hate you here for that, remember? Neurotic you?" Piper smiled and Chris chuckled. "You are not selfish, honey, you care and you love him, and it makes me so happy and proud that you do!"
"He is not always that bad, right? He was really good once…I promise, mom… you were so proud of him!" He coughed his way through that line.
"Everything will be fine, honey…we'll solve everything, now the important thing is that you get better… so rest." She caressed his hair.
"I don't know if I want to get better, mom" He opened his eyes and looked at her.
"WHAT?" Piper screamed horrified.
"Everything is so perfect right now…I mean… I know…the girls are not here right now…Actually I know I shouldn't be even talking about the girls…but Wyatt can't keep his mouth shut…it's that god complex he has…anyways… the girls are not here." He smiled sadly, remembering his cousins " You'll see them one day and understand why we both loved them so much! And I know that I haven't been conceived yet…but everything it's so perfect right now… and everything is so rough usually!" He said heartbroken; with a pain Piper never even guessed existed in her unemotional whitelighter. " Everybody thinks that I don't care… that I am so strong, that I can take anything…and its such a big lie! I don't like to have to be always the strong one…for Wyatt, for the girls, to keep on going here… not to show anything…I wish that for once, I could be the one doing the crying!"
Piper kissed his forehead. "You can cry baby, whenever you want… you don't have to be strong for everybody else."
"Yes… I have… I have to be strong, I have to put on an unemotional mask and resist all the blows and punch, and take the ones for them too…I HAVE TO… I care too much not to …"
"My sweet little hero…"
"No, mom…I had to…I have to…Wy might be strong physically and have the powers… but you've seen him… he is not strong psychically or emotionally…I needed to be stronger… he would have lost it a lot sooner if not…or he could have been a lot worst, he could have lost all touch with reality…and I know the world would have been happier… but he is my brother! And the girls… they were so little… and grandpa…he had so many worries… he didn't need to worry about me." He looked so sad, Piper couldn't believe he was opening up to her like that, a part of her couldn't help feeling sort of glad.
"The three of us died at the same time?" Piper said with a hoarse voice, not really knowing if she wanted to know the answer to that question.
"No…Phoebe died a few months after you and Paige, though I probably shouldn't be telling you this."
"I can always ask Wyatt and he will tell me… so…"
"Mom… that's manipulating me!" He chuckled and coughed.
"yeah… were did you think you learnt to do it so good? Cuz you honestly don't think you got that from your angelic father, do you?"
Chris chuckled " ok…and my uncles…" He went into a violent coughing fit.
"See… you can't even risk the future consequences when you want to!" She joked to hide her fear. "Just rest, my baby boy… I promise everything will be just fine this time around… we won't let any of this happen… I promise." She hid her tears by kissing his forehead. "You won't have to pretend to be strong for anyone."
Chris closed his eyes and focused on his unsteady breathing.
"Mom…" He tried to say, but it sounded like a whispered whistle.
"Hush, baby…"
"This time around… promise me you won't let me pull my tough macho act in front of you and you will force me to tell you how much I love you more often, cuz some day… I will really regret not having told you all the time who much you meant to me." He said with an asphyxiated and weak voice.
Piper thanked the powers that his eyes were closed so he couldn't see the tears running through her face.
"I am going to know, honey… even if you don't tell me…I am sure I knew how much you cared. Now rest and try to get better."
"I am scared…" He hissed
"Of what, sweetie?"
"Of being all this being a dream… it hurts so bad to think you all hate me." He whispered, Piper could hear the air going in and out his lungs with tremendous effort.
"Everything is going to be just fine, honey. We'll save you and everything will stay perfect, I promise!"
"I love …" He words got choked as he suddenly felt how his lungs failed him; Piper screamed for her ex-husband in horror when she saw his vain struggles to incorporate air into his lungs.
In less than a nanosecond Leo and Wyatt were there.
"What happened?" Leo asked concerned, orbing besides his son's bed and checking his vital signs. "He is not breathing! We are loosing him." He said on the verge of a nervous brake down.
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A/N: A few of you has been asking me what happened to the different Halliwell members. So for the ones that are interested, here I will do a time line with the main events, since I don't know how much Wyatt will tell and I am sure his comments will be disorganized. It would be nice to know if you want him to tell a lot of details from the future, or not.
I will put the year and Chris age as a reference in brackets. This is the super condensed version.
2004- Chris is born. Baby Wyatt is kidnapped by Gideon, who can't kill him, but manages to traumatize him for life. After two month of being trapped, baby Wyatt manages to escape by himself. Nobody finds out that it was Gideon who kidnapped Wyatt.
2007 (3)- Phoebe gets married to Austin, a mortal without powers.
2009 (5)- Phoebe gives birth to Paula (Polly). Paige marries Mark, a witch.
2010 (6)- Phoebe gives birth to Patience (Pat). Paige gives birth to Pryanna.(Pry)
2012 (8)- Austin dies in a car accident.
2014 (10)- Victor (grandpa) gets cancer, they don't allow Leo to heal him.
2015 (11)- Victor beats cancer with traditional medicine.
2018 (14)- Leo finds out that Gideon kidnapped Wyatt, and runs to torture him and kill him. He finds out Gideon's allies are planning an attempt on Wyatt's life on "the birthday" and incorrectly assumes it's Wyatt's birthday. Leo kills Gideon and runs away to protect his family. Piper and Paige die in Chris' birthday. Seeking revenge Mark dies three month later. Victor moves in to the manor.
2019 (15)- Phoebe dies searching revenge, eight months after her sisters.
2020 (16)- Paula (11) dies, after having a premonition about some demons that were after them, she convinces Wyatt to let her go to the underworld with them and gets killed. Wyatt almost gets killed trying to protect her, but Chris manages to save him. Victor's health can't take all the deaths and has a relapse, his cancer comes back. Wyatt is denied the power to heal him. Leo disappears from the face of the earth, Chris and Wyatt don't dare to look for him, fearing the elders might find their father and do something to him.
2022 (18)- Patience (12) (Wyatt's favorite) is kidnapped by demons to get to Wyatt and his powers, she gets turned into a banshee and gets killed by a demon. Victor weakened by his illness can not overcome Patience's death and dies soon afterwards. Wyatt, who has been turning slowly, now really looses it out of grief and kills half of the underworld and all the elders (except Leo). Chris and Wyatt find Leo and discover Barbus drove him insane. Chris can't take it anymore, and finally admits there is something seriously wrong with his brother and moves out of the manor. Nevertheless, Leo and Pryanna stay at the manor, and Chris has unrestricted access to it and to them. The manor is considered a neutral ground for the brothers, were they can be civilized to each other, and sometimes even nice.
2024 (20)- Pryanna (14) dies at the manor, shot by a darklighter. Wyatt turns the manor into a museum. He moves with Leo to an extremely secure house, Chris still has unrestricted access to visit his father.
2025 (21)- Chris goes to the past to save his brother.
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"Ah...creías que no iba a leer esta? Obvio que sí! Todo lo de los hermanos me encanta, y todo lo que escribís vos me encanta, así que como no lo iba a leer?" No… asumi que estabas ocupada, o que esta fic era muy corny, porque lo es… esta es mi veta comercial, vio? La soap de la mañana, esas cosas que uno lee cuando tiene ganas de leer como chorrean las emociones. Un corin tellado cualquiera como diria mi mama, aunque yo nunca lei un corin tellado y mi mama nunca leyo ninguno de mis cuentos.
"Me gustaron las reflexiones de
Chris...pobre, que irónico estar pensando en suicidarse y que justo lo ataquen." Be careful with what you wish!
"y el mensaje que le mando al hermano ah!" Hay empieza el soap opera.
"Pero la parte en que estaba con Leo y Piper fue la que más me gustó...como deliraba...me pareció muy triste...creyendo que estaba en el futuro, me encantó como lo pintaste con las defensas bajas y cómo quería ver al hermano y hablaba con el padre. Y lo sentimientos de Leo me parecieron fantástico." Si… yo esta fic me dan ganas de abrazarlos a todos… hasta Oprent, porque gracias a el son todos tan cornies! Atacados por el Mushy-Mushy demon como dice Chris en "Chris' diary"
" y Leo, me fascina como lo escribís, es realmente superdad!" Tengo una escena escrita, todavía no se si la voy a poner o no porque es del futuro, la muerte de Pryanna, que Leo esta loco y te lo morfas a Leo que no da pie con bola y a Chris cuidándolo. Son dos segundos, pero a mi me pareció re tierno. Que no tiene mucho que ver con el super dad, pero leer a los dos hijos adultos que se estaban peleando y se dan vuelta y son todos softy con el papa, te dice que el papa tiene que haber sido bueno.
"Ahh, pobre Chris. Me encantó como le volvió el conocimiento cuando recuperó la conciencia..pobre..se siente mejor cuando no está consciente, eso seguro." Hehehe… si yo creo que no se quiere curar, no porque no quiere volver a la situación de antes, sino porque esta aterrado del ataque de PANICO que le va a agarrar cuando se cure, no? Hehehe.
"me gustó la reacción de Piper y Leo..metete el personal gain en...ah no, no dijeron eso? Pero casi!" Si, si.. eso es lo que dijeron… pero se perdio algo en la traducción… vos viste que chotos que son traduciendo del español al ingles a veces… estos malditos traductores… hehehehe.
"Esta versión de Wyatt me encantó, aunque no pidiera por cookies in the garden, je" No pierdas la esperanza!
"Y sí, Wy todavía cree que hizo lo que tenía que hacer...algo de razón tiene. Pero por supuesto, se le va algo la mano." Ese es el punto, que hasta un cierto punto se comprenda lo que hizo Wyatt… y ademas si le preguntan a el, el no va a decir "Y si…todo lo que hice esta mal!" Wy esta convencido de lo que el hace esta bien, es lo que debe de ser hecho…
"Leo..volviéndose loco, no sé por qué pero no me cuesta mucho imaginármelo así." En serio? No me jodas! Hahaha…no pero si pongo la escena del futuro, vas a ver que se le zafo la chapita mal…aunque no es un loco violento…cambia de estado, obvio…pero en la escena esa parece como si tuviera alzheimer. Pero bueno de algun lado tenian que sacar Wyatt su insania y Chris su neurosis obsesiva!
"Malo Operet, como puede alguien conocer a Chris de antes y todavía matarlo?" No se… yo creo que es porque es hombre… y estaba celoso :P!
"ambién quiero ver que salió mal entre el hermano de Operet y Paula!" ha ha ha la pregunta del millon que ya se contestara y ni siquiera es tan interesante… no esperaba que tuviese tanta repercusión. Igual no es entre Oprent y Paula, que no se llevaban… solo daba la casualidad que iban al mismo grado de colegio. Si es entre Railey (el hermano) pero no y Paula.
Wwolf
"Siento molestarte con tonterias, al final me vas a vetar...
Pero es ke la historia anterior ademas de ser patetica estaba incompleta:
"Wyatt:-Callate Christopher, ademas ¿Tú no te estabas muriendo?
Chris: Sí de verguenza ajena"
la que debería sentir yo para escribir estas burradas...
Pd:Entendere perfectamente k ignores este review..." Ahhh.. DIOS! Como me escribes esto? No sabes lo que me hizo reir tu review anterior, te iba a escribir que era la mejor review que habia leido en un largo tiempo y después me mandas esto! No seas tonta… la review fue BUENISIMAAAAAAAAAAAA… me hizo reir tanto… I loved it…so… no entiendo como te puedes sentir mal al respecto! Fue probablemente lo mejor de ese dia…tan divertida! No te limites a escribir cosas asi, porque fue en serio, en serio, muy divertido y me encanto. Y menos pedirme disculpas por lo que escribiste…la idea es que expreses lo que te provoca y me alegra que lo hagas!
Ahora a la otra review.
" Wyatt, me ha echo casi llorar, probrecito( ya se ha echo cosas horribles) pero es tan tierno, kiero abrazarlo, me encanta esa idea de ke a alguien se vuelva un monstruo porque cree ke es la mejor forma de salvar a su familia.lo vuelve todo mas dramatico k si te kedas en la idea ke Wyatt es malvado puro y simplemente." Esa es la idea…. Me encanta saber que ha tenido efecto.
".Cuando ha estado dormido 15 minutos! ese es mi Chris." Aquí explica porque.
"Me gusta ke Wyatt no tenga tantos perjuciosos sobre el futuro y ke hable en voz alta dejando a los otros sin entender nada.;)" hehehe aquí clarifique para los que quieren saber. Y es el god complex…el cree que puede con todo y contra todos!
"Me gusta ke los dos hermanos, no pueden parar de peelearse aunque obiamente se precupan el uno del otro mas que su propia vida." Si, yo creo que ya seria demasiado irreal si no se pelearan, porque en definitiva si, tienen visiones radicalmente distintas acerca de cómo debe vivirse la vida.
Ok… te voy a poner de nuevo tu review… para que veas que es TAN comica, es buenisima! "que la historia de la venganza sea un poquito mas que el hermano de Oprent era otro demonio que Wyatt estaba un dia aburrido y lo volo en pedazos, no te parece?"
Si, pero tendria su ironia si Wyatt ni siquiera se recordase de kien o cuando mato a ese demonio.jajajajEs ke me imagino la conversacion
Wyatt-Ohh mate a tu hermano?
Oprent-si le assesinaste,le volaste en pedazos ,le masacraste
Wyatt-Y esto...¿Como se llamaba?
O-Railey
Wyatt- Ok..vale...Esto... Puedes decirme exactamente como y cuando lo hice?.. es ke ahora mismo...
o-"Superando el Shok" ¿No recuerdas haver assesinado ami hermano? A mi unica familia..
W- EEi, yo mato mucha gente, demonios principalmente,... la memoria tiene un limite.
Chris-Genial voy a morir por un assesinato k mi hermano NO RECUERDA!
W- Que esperabais ¿k tuviera una archivo con todos mis asesinatos?.
O-"aun en estado de shok"No recuerdas a mi hermano
W- no pierdas la esperanza. Puede k si me das algunos detalles mas sobre el echo y tu hermano... me acuerde
C-Esto es patetico.
W-callate Christopher, ademas¿Tu no te estabas muriendote?" Heheheh lo leo de nuevo y me descostillo de risa! Me encanta… si sabes que estuve a punto de hacerlo asi, que Wyatt no tenga la mas perra idea de quien era… Pero Chris ya habia dicho el nombre de Oprent en la primera escena y no me parecio logico que Chris supiera quien era y Wyatt no.
" Si no escribire idioteces y me centrare en mi fic, todo y esto casi no hay fics de humor con Chris bien echo(Y se echan en falta)" Yo tengo una pseudos comica pero no esta terminada. Es the three menaces. Y después una MUY, MUY buena comica es la de Pukah, creo que se llama to trust or not to trust. Es LA MEJOR que he leido, no esta terminada y Pukah desaparecio hace un tiempito…pero estaba muy ajetreada últimamente y con problemas de familia, asi que puede ser que en un tiempito vuelva a aparecer. Ella tambien es española, leiste esa fic? Sino, te la recomiendo, realmente vale la pena.
teal-lover
"sorry I didn't get a chance to read/review this yet, but I'm still catching up for the week." Don't worry about it! I know you've been busy and I've been updating like crazy!
"He's got a strange way of viewing things." Wyatt? NAHHHH (sarcastic)! A very particular way of seeing things and he is very convinced he is right. "but he's so convinced that he's only ever done it for the kids (and what happened to the others?)." Yeah that's how it started, eventually is more like he is very convinced he had to protect his family and he failed, he thinks if he gets to be powerful enough nothing will ever hurt him again. I wrote a whole time line with what happened to each of the Halliwell members. Basically they all died and not in a very nice way. That's why Wyatt can't use the excuse…"I have to be powerful enough to protect them" anymore… now is more like "If I had been powerful enough!".
"I just love how caring he is for Chris, and the playful bantering between them when Chris is actually lucid." I am glad you do!
"Oh, and I'm glad Wyatt is the black sheep of the family ;) That way, we can find out more about the future than with that tight-lipped-paranoid kid from the future." Yeah I don't know how much people want to know about the future, so I don't know if he should talk or not.
Beleninwe
"As always, I love your stories, you keep me hooked!" Thanks… that's nice.
"Now... Chris is really funny, orbing everywhere even when he's so weak, it's funny to read how he appears everywhere orbing, this stubborn guy!" Hehehe. Yeah actually I figured that he knows that if he actually walks all the way up the stairs, he is not going to make it, he is going to faint somewhere in the middle. Aside from the fact that is Chris… Chris doesn't walk…Chris orbs everywhere.
" He reminds me of myself, lol!" Stubborn girl? Yeah me too… I am terrible.
"I've also always loved the interaction between both brothers, I love that stuff a lot!" Thanks… glad you liked it.
Cassi
"Chris is the most sturbborn person on earth. He couldn't just stay in bad. But thinking about, this one of the things I love about him..." yeah… we all love how he is always restless and has to play tough… he is so cute!
JadeAlmasy
", you made me speechless, that takes a lot to do congrats." THANKS… I feel flattered!
"how he can be very emotional one second and then cold as ice and uncarring as it all in the same second beautiful!" Hehe well… he is the insane lord of all power, after all. And I stress the INSANE…there is something not quite right about Wy.
Thanks… here you have more.
Nikki14u
"Another wonderful chapter and I can't wait to see how they make that bastard pay!" WOW… you hubby would be soo proud of you! He would be like YEAH that's what I am talking about, that's my girl!
"And out poor, sweet darling Chris just doesn't know how to sit still for one moment. Does he?" Not his forte…definitely.
"Gees, cant' you control that little hubby of yours? If not I'm going to have to let mine loose on him and trust me, you don't want to see Wyatt angry." Nooo… I don't and I bet Chris knows how he looks like and doesn't either. Though I can't control that beautiful boy of mine…he is too independent, and even though I know I like it, sometimes it gets me on my nerves! Heheh boys… you can't with them…
Victorious Light
"If you get two reviews for this chapter I apologise, but it seems FFN is screwing with me. Onto review number two." If I get 2 reviews I'd be happy, don't worry! But no… I just got one… but FF has been doing that lately! (And obviously when you wrote the longest review ever!)
" I like your Wyatt too. I actually felt sorry for him and it was a good way to describe the reason for why he is the way he is." Thanks the advantage of writing Wyatt is that you can created the character. And I am glad you sympathize with him, that's the idea, seeing that there is still some good left in him, and he had some reasons… or at least he believes he had some reasons.
" The brother's banter was great, especially when they teased the sister's about their own sisterly relationship!" Glad you like it… I mean…it wouldn't be reasonable if they don't fight, because of all the things that happened, but I thought I'd include the sisters things, cuz all siblings fight, and that doesn't mean they don't love each other.
"I also liked the fact that Wyatt had to put Chris to sleep and just the way that he changed the topic, as if he's so used to putting his own brother to sleep." Heheh I found that funny, don't ask me why… but yeah… he is Wyatt, he is used to have things his way, and Chris is actually the only person that defies him, but still… Wyatt likes to have things his way!
"You're really updating fast, I wish I could do the same." Yeah I know… I am having a lot of free time nowadays and its sooo cold outside!
Missing Whisper
" Why did he orb in? Damn stubborn boy can't stay in bed." Basically, a little more deeper and emotional in the sense that he wanted to be with his family, but yeah… he just couldn't stay in bed.
"Again, loved the Wyatt/Chris interaction! And the fact they argue too!" They are cute, aren't they! Yeah well I assumed that it would be kind of weird if they didn't argue, being that they are brothers and they have radically different opinions in how to live life.
"I loved it, it's deffinatly a situation I've been in where it's the heat of an arguement and you just throw something in someones face, because you want to hurt them and then wish you hadn't." Absolutelly! I am glad I am not the only one that seems to feel like that!
phoebe turner
"wow! this chapter was really long!" Actually no… the first 5 chapters where 10 pages each, this one is longer, though! I hope you still like it !
Karen
"Aw Yay! Wyatt's not evil evil, if you get what i mean." Of course I know what I mean… That´s exactly how I wanted to pictured him, I am glad you got it and liked it ! Thanks
Piper Chris fan
"I like how Chris and Wyatt argued about who is worse and whom Piper should love more. :) " Hehehe I am glad you liked the Why mommy should love me better contest!
Thanks!" And you gotta love Chris - he is already in the attic:)" Absolutely.
adpi24
THANKS!
" I loved the history you gave and your reasoning behing Wyatt and his turn to "evil"." Glad you did! I was trying to do and understandable Wyatt... but yet not a real monster, someone that Chris could actually care about, and know that he wasnt really evil deep down inside.
"Mucho Gusto on your Espanol:) My favorite epsanol line is "no habla espanol" (I just love saying I don't speak spanish in spanish)" Heheheh Gracias! Heheh I can teach you a few more lines in spanish, but that one is always useful! Hmm my favorite line in english would be...that´s a hard one... whenever I say something that then I am like OOPPSS... i so should have said that and I go "I am a foreigner, I don´t speak english very well!" With my best naif, inocent face (the Opps... you normally do them with a guy, you know:P!) That is my favortie line, definitely!
I hope you liked this too. Gracias!
Nobody but ME!
Thanks! I am glad you like Wy... I really like him too (Sometimes I sound like a lunatic... talking about my characters as if I wasn´t the one that wrote them!)"you almost want to believe him, and be like "o its ok that you're evil."" Cool... cuz thats my goal. Like having my readers say ahhh he is so cute, it´s ok that you are evil and then Chris speaks and you are like ahhh ok... you are really evil and a little insane... but well... we still can save you
" I hope Chris gets better soon, cause eventhough I love when he's sick, I can't wait to see what happens when he's all well!" I am still planing that, but I had an idea this morning that I think we´ll be quite a shock. I like happy yet unpexpected ends. So I hope I can pull it out here.
Thank you again, and always... (Love your nick by the way... did I tell you?)
The Halliwell's little Angel
"i definately lke it, very good, im not usually keen on fics where wyatt comes back but since i started one of my own im beginning to quite enjoy them," I know... Wyatt is an adquire taste. I wasn´t very keen on Wyatt till I wrote my first fiction and after that...I can´t help it... I have to bring him or have him there! You kind of develop a taste for Wyatt after you write him.
" yours is the best so far!" Thanks... I am blushing here! I feel flaterred.
"another great cliffhanger but i still have a week!" A week for what? This is another cliff hanger... though I guess it´s pretty obvious too.
Ceres217
"a pretty long one :)" you know you are the second one that told me... no that chappie was 10 pages long, as the other four. This one is longer...
"I like this Wyatt very much, that he cried in Wyatt's arms and of course I liked the talking between the two brothers :)" Arent the Halliwell brothers kind of cute? It could be so cool if I could take them out of my head and bring them home!
"the explanation what happened to Leo - this going insane and all that - I think that was pretty clever..." Thanks I am glad you like it, and specially I appreciate how it was planned so the plot would fit, and to explain why Chris knows that whatever happens to his brother happens before he is born, but he doesnt know what is it. Cuz I always thought that was something that didn´t make that much sense.
"Only this Paula thing is confusing now - what has Paige to do with it (expect that she is her aunt)" Dun dun...nahh not so dun dun... I put the whole time line up there... so people can see what happens and who is everybody. But yeah... Paula doesn´t have much to do with Railey either. She just happened to go to school with Oprent. But I am going to give you a few small hints. When Wyatt starts talking about Railey´s death (Oprent´s brother) the first name that comes to his mind, what he uses as time reference is someone elses age, not Paula. So which person´s age would it be logical that he remembers? The person that was implicated in the problem. Right? Ok... that was a BIG clue...
" she lives in this story, right? I mean she didn't die because of the Titans..." No... I always assumed the Titans thing was a big lie, something Chris said so he could get into the manor.
Julia Adele
"Well I am going to be late for work but when I got the email that your story had been updated, I just had to read." I am sorry... just blame it on me and tell them they can come and yell at me (that they will pay the air fare to Argentina...but that they can surely can come and I will take full responsibility)
" Very nice brother interaction there." Thanks! I am glad you do! " Like the line about which brother does mommy love more." Hehe cool you liked it, I almost took it away! So I am pleased it was appreaciated.
"Please hurry on with the next chapter." I am trying:)
"No suicide!" Ok... I will take that into consideration... besides... think about it... do you think they will let Chris commit suicide? They are watching him all the time
" Play nice with the good little Charmed characters!" Hehehe I just found that line so funny... I guess cuz I am pretty dumb, but I prictured myself with all the real characters like playing with them like they were action figures! It was cool... specially playing with Chris!
midnite-magic
Thank you very much! I am glad you think it gets better and better!
shyeye
Hi:) THANKS!
Sparkling Cherries
", I reviewed the last few chapters, but I'm not too sure if it came up." No it didn´t... I would have answered you if not!
"I just want you to know that I have been reading ur fics!" yeyyy I was wondering if you didn´t like it or if you didn´t have time. Yeah this is the corniest, sappiest of all fics. I guess that s why its so popular, but its just for those moments you just want to read something just you know... to be entrained for a while.
"I like the way you've made Wyatt diff compared to him in ur other fics." Yeah? You think he is different? I mean, he is evil and most of my Wyatt´s are good. It´s true that the 2 different evil Wyatt I am writting are not exactly the same. The have things in common and others are different, and their life stories are pretty different too. I am glad you see the difference : )
"He's harbouring a lot of guilt and he just wants to help everyone in his own twisted way. hugs wyatt and hands a cookie I think he neds some love and lots of hugs." Ahhh yeah... basically, he does...He says thanks and blows you a kiss. Though I wouldn´t get too near to him, cuz he might start caring about you and lock you in his maximun security house with Leo, and never let you go anywhere fearing he might loose you!
Christine Marquez
" but Piper has got to stop with the nick names, it's making me disgusted. The kid is, like, twenty two, for christ's sake! And every sentence she has to call him some stupid pet name." Hehehe I'll try to remember that. I admit is my fault… I tend to call everybody with stupid pet names all the time, from age one to fifty, I usually use the sweetie and love and all that all the time (But you are right in one thing, Piper is not as affectionate as I am…so that might be off character). I would change it in this chappie, but I admit it, I am lazy.
The other thing is that this is a VERY corny fic, the corniest I ever written, so I admit, is like my version of a corny soap. I didn't write this as an attempt to write good literature, its just something really emotional, easy to read entrainment, still I think the stupid pet names are a constant in my fics, and you are right in the fact that that is not how the real characters talk (more than the age of the characters, cuz I know a lot of mothers that only call their sons like that and they are a lot older than 22).