CHAPTER VIII:

"What am I going to do without you?" His eyes were watery.

"Well… you would have one less annoying, bugging, brat on your case for starters." Chris teased.

"I don't want to have one less annoying, bugging, brat on my case!" Wyatt snapped and Chris draw comforting circles on his back.

"Everything is going to be ok, Wy." He said calmly.

"Don't you understand, Chris? If you die NOTHING will EVER be OK… ever, ever again…NOTHING… I lost everything, everybody already… you are the only thing that I have left… if I had been powerful enough… I would have been able to protect you all… but now… I failed you all!"

"You tried your best, Wy!"

"Well… apparently that wasn't good enough!" He said angry and devastated. "I should have tried harder! I should have been more powerful! If I had been…" He sobbed.

"Wy …don't go there, please." Chris asked him. "Nobody is blaming you for anything… we all know you tried your best."

"Then why all this happened? I should have been able to protect you all." Wyatt wept.

Chris gently sat up and hugged his brother, who cried in his arms a while before realizing Chris shouldn't be sitting down.

"It's ok Wy… nobody is asking for you to be god… you can't save everybody!" Chris said with his brother nested in his arms.

"I SHOULD BE GOD… I WILL BE GOD…and I COULDN'T SAVE ANYONE…everybody that I ever cared for died… and now you…"

"Shh…let it all out …everything is going to be fine, bro!" Chris told his weeping brother in his arms.

"How… how is anything going to be fine if you die, Chris?"

"I am not going to die, Wy… and even if I do…mom and dad and the aunts will make sure this never happens again, ok?" Chris caressed his brother's hair, and that's when Wyatt realized that Chris was sitting down. He shifted his position and wrapping his brother in his arms, he helped him back down while saying.

"CHRIS… what are you doing sitting up? What got into your mind? Can you vaguely start to explain your illogic and suicidal maneuvers cuz I am at lost in here!" He said in an angry concern.

"I am feeling better, Wy… see how long I've been conscious and lucid?"

"Awesome and you are somehow trying to make sure you get worst again?"

"You are such a drama queen!" Chris teased.

"Well…maybe but I would like to see how YOU would feel if I was the one laying in bed dying!" He said with teary eyes.

"I'll be fine, Wy…chill out, k?" He smiled comfortingly; he put himself in Wyatt's situation, and he knew he would be devastated if Wyatt would be the one in his position. He felt horrible for causing his brother so much pain.

"I don't want you to die, Chris! Please don't die…" Wyatt said hugging him.

"I am sorry, Wy… I didn't mean to cause you this much trouble… I know how horrible it was for you to loose everybody… I am sorry… I'll be fine, bro."

"It's not your fault, is mine… as usual…it was as painful for me to loose everybody as it was for you, Chris…"

"Don't tell her anything about me sitting down." Chris interrupted him.

"As long as you don't tell her that I was crying!" Wyatt answered walking to the door and opening it at the exact same second Piper got to it. "Need some help, mom?" He asked taking the tray she was carrying.

"Thanks… how did you know to open the door?" Piper asked with a curious smile as she walked to Chris and kissed his forehead.

"Because we could sense it." Wyatt shrugged as if was the most obvious explanation.

"But I thought you guys had to focus on someone to sense him or her." Piper said while she kept on checking on Chris, who seemed completely awake and coherent, so he wasn't appreciating the excess of fussing.

"Yeah well… but you are not "someone" you are our mom!"

"Does that mean that I can never catch you guys "in-fraganti"? Cuz you always know when I am coming."

"Pretty much …can you stop it now?" Chris said after as long as he could endure Piper scrutiny to make sure he was fine. Piper looked at him hurt and he obviously felt horrible about it. "I am fine, mom…I promise, I am feeling a lot better… no need to worry." He told his mom a lot gentler and afterwards threw a threatening look in his brother's way; but Wyatt didn't say anything.

"Paige said you were quite awake and lucid so I brought you something to eat, honey."

"Thanks, mom, but I am not hungry." He said and he felt his mother's and his brother's eyes piercing his skull in a silent command "EAT!", but he was a master at playing idiot. "So how is everything going up there, mom? Now that I am feeling better maybe I can go help a little, what do you think?" The silent darts his relatives' eyes were shooting at his skull, were still being ignored by him.

"Please Chris… eat something…you need to keep your strength."

"I think I'll go get something to eat myself… do you mind, mom?" Wyatt asked uneasy.

"Sure honey, go ahead… do you want me to bring you something up here too?" She said lovingly.

"No…it's ok, I'll go to the kitchen." He said kissing his mom's cheek and orbing downstairs, he needed some time alone.

Chris looked sadly at the spot were his brother had been.

"What is it, baby?"

"Wy… he is really scared, he suffers the losses so much! I know he is the insane overlord of all power…but I hate to see him like that, specially when its my fault."

"Well…then you have to make sure you get better." She smiled at him "For instance you have to eat and sleep so your brother doesn't worry so much." She said softly.

"Ohh… you always got me with the guilt, mom."

"Good to know for future references!" Piper smiled broadly and Chris rolled his eyes at her.

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Ten minutes later Phoebe walked into the kitchen only to find Wyatt sitting in front of a barely eaten plate, staring blank with eyes full of tears. He seemed unaware of her presence.

"Wy, what's wrong?" She asked resting her hand on his shoulder, and was answered by a premonition. While Wyatt sobbed "I always said she cooked as great as mom."

A girl, fifteen years or so, was in that same kitchen, cooking dinner. She was smiling, Wyatt had promised to try to come home early that night, he promised that often and rarely kept her word but Pryanna still had hope. And she knew, that even if he didn't come home for dinner, he was going to eat her food later, Wyatt always said her cooking was almost as amazing as his mom; and that made Pry happy, Aunt Piper had been an awesome cook.

She was mixing the dough when she heard the sound of orbing, she happily dropped everything she was doing and ran to where the sound was coming from.

"WY!" She screamed joyfully entering the living room, only Wyatt wasn't there; she had heard orbings alright. She gasped falling to the floor, but they were dark orbs; a darklighter had shot her right in her stomach and was now covering her mouth, preventing her to scream the names of the people that could save her.

It was really late at night when Wyatt (who didn't look more than a couple of years younger than he was now) orbed in, he orbed directly to the bedroom floors, like he always did. He checked his father's bedroom first, he was sleeping soundly. He smiled, asleep he looked so fine, like the dad he was use to see when he was little.

Then he walked to his cousin's room, his heart stopped for a second when he saw the empty bed.

"PRYYY… I am home!" He cried; but no one answered.

"She has to be with Chris." He told himself, forcing himself to believe it.

Pryanna would never go anywhere else without the body guards he had assigned to her, she knew better! She knew it had cost Chris a lot of struggles to convince him to let her even leave the manor and she knew that if she broke the body guard rule, she was bound to a life inside the manor.

He tried to sense her, and then… he panicked… he couldn't sense her. Why would Pry cloak herself from him?

"CHRISTOPHER…GET HERE NOOOOW…" He yelled, but Chris didn't appear. Why would he? Chris and Wyatt weren't exactly in the best terms since he had killed the elders and Chris had left the manor. He had even cloaked himself from Wyatt!

"CHRISTOPHER, IT'S AN ORDER!" He screamed harshly, but he knew that approach wasn't going to work, Chris would never take an order from him.

"Chris… please…it's about Pryanna!" He begged.

"What's with Pry?" Chris asked seconds later materializing in front of him.

"Where is she?" He asked harshly, mainly out insane worry.

"I don't know, you are the one that lives with her!" Chris said cockily, Wyatt pinned him against the wall freaked.

"Christopher… this is not the time to act cockily, I CAN'T find her…I can't sense her, don't you care?"

"What?" Now Chris could see the fear in Wyatt's eyes and wasn't amused any more.

"Do you know where she is? Don't do this to me, Chris! Just tell me that she is fine…I will just forgive and forget everything, I just need to know that she is fine!"

"I saw her this morning, Wy, I don't know where she is now." He said looking sympathetically at his brother. He was worried sick himself.

"Sense her! Maybe she cloaked herself from me but not from you…"

"I can't sense her either, Wy!" Chris said terrified. "I bet she is with a boy and she cloaked herself from us, Wy… she is a teenager!" He tried to appease himself and his brother.

"I hope… but...THAT's NOT LIKE HER! I swear I am going to kill the little brat for making us worry like this!" He shouted angrily.

"What's all this yelling about?" A very lost Leo walked out of his room.

Wyatt released the grip he had forgotten he had on Chris. "Everything is fine, dad, go back to sleep." He said softly.

"Who are you? And why are you calling me dad?" He asked perplexed.

Both boys tried to hide the pain that seeing their father like that caused them.

"It's ok, go back to bed… I'll take you." Chris said caringly, walking to his father and gently grabbing his arm.

"No… I am hungry…my little angel didn't bring me dinner tonight." Leo said.

Chris and Wyatt looked at each other terrified. Leo called Pryanna his little angel, and he even recognized her better than he recognized his sons, since Pry took care of Leo with devotion and spent a lot more time with him than Chris and Wyatt, because she was the one that spent more time at the manor and took care of the house. All that meant, Pry would have never, under any circumstances left Leo without dinner.

Wyatt eyes were getting glassy.

"Don't worry, Wy… I am sure she gave him dinner but he just forgot…Come dad, I'll get you something to eat!"

Chris walked to the kitchen with Leo, because he knew that even if Leo walked all the way down to the kitchen as soon as he got there, he was going to start screaming for someone to go inside the kitchen for him, since Leo couldn't enter that room since his wife was killed there, in the same place she loved so much.

"Why are you calling me dad?" Leo asked confused, walking down the stairs.

"Because I am Chris, dad… your son?" He said gently, obviously used to these types of conversations.

"Chris… I have a son named Chris!" He said with a light of recognition.

"Yeah, dad, you do." Chris smiled in the way you smile to someone in that condition.

"He is so strong! He can take anything and keep on fighting for all the good causes, I am so proud of him… you should meet him one day…his name is Chris, I love him so much! He is my son."

Chris just looked at him and smiled. "I love you too, dad." He whispered sadly, knowing Leo wouldn't get it. "You stay here, dad, I will get you something to eat, ok?"

He parked him besides the stairs and he walked to the kitchen. Once he got in there, his heart skipped a beat, everything in the kitchen looked as if someone had left in mid cooking.

With a blank stare he grabbed a plate, looking at it, as if it was going to start talking and giving him answers. That's when he heard his father's voice and accidentally dropped the plate to the floor.

"Why is my little angel lying on the floor?" Leo's voice was unmistakable.

"Oh god, please no, please let her be fine!" He pleaded while he orbed besides his father.

When he got there, Leo's question and expression denoted he wasn't conscious of what was happening, still, his eyes were filled of unshed tears.

"Dad NO!" He yelled when he saw he attempted to grab the arrow.

Chris knelt in front of his cousin, who by this point, was already cold and long dead; he heard a sob. His eyes were fighting to drop the tears that Chris hated so much when he raised them to see Wyatt as he fall down to his knees crying like a baby, devastated, staring at the little girl.

His eldest heartbreaking pain woke Leo's blurry brain up. He ran to the devastated figure laying on the floor.

"It's ok, Wy… everything is going to be ok." He said gently caressing his son's back.

"Dad?" Wyatt looked at his father's eyes that shown a recognition they seldom had. Leo gently caressed his cheek.

"It's going to be ok, son!" He said sadly and Wyatt wrapped his father in a bear hug and cried in his shoulder.

"I am so glad you are here, dad. I need you so much right now."

Leo looked at his youngest who was still standing, except from the silent tears that bathed his face, to an amateur he would look as is he wasn't feeling anything; but Leo was far from an amateur in reading his son's eyes. He kissed Wy' crest and signaled his youngest to come near him.

"I have no one left, dad… I lost everybody and it's all my fault." Wyatt sobbed.

Chris kneeled beside his father, who kept one arm hugging Wyatt and with the other gently caressed Chris' temples. Chris swallowed soundly, repressing a sob.

"I am sorry, buddy." Leo said looking at Chris, but since Wyatt's head was buried in his chest, he wouldn't know where he was looking.

Leo forced Wyatt to look at him. With one hand cupping each of his sons' cheek.

"You didn't loose everybody, you still have each other…and sometimes you've got me…and it's NOT YOUR FAULT, Wyatt… it never was, and it never will, you have to stop blaming yourself, because that's one of the things that's dooming you to perdition."

Wyatt looked at Chris with desperate eyes and Chris couldn't resist it.

"I am here, bro." He told him with a sad smile.

"For how long?" He said heartbroken.

"You will always be my brother, Wy…and I'll be here whenever you really need me…I always have, haven't I?"

"Brothers forever… I'll always have you back and you'll always have mine… always." Wyatt sobbed and Chris smiled and nodded. "But you'll leave me!"

"I have to Wy…but not because I don't want to stay, because I care too much about you to stand still and watch how you destroy yourself like this!"

"I won't be able to protect you if you leave!"

"I'll be fine, bro!"

"I hope so Chris. Promise you'll always remember that no matter what you are my brother…and I wouldn't want any other brother but you and that I will always love you!"

Phoebe recognized that line as the line Chris had told Oprent when he asked for his last words for Wyatt.

"I promise I will remember it." He smiled through his tears putting a hand on his shoulder "I love you too, bro…and even if you can't believe me now, all I am doing is not against you; it FOR you!"

"Just don't get killed trying to save me, Chris, I am not worth it." Wyatt sobbed and started orbing away. "And please stay the night!" The orbing lights said.

Chris started sensing for his brother and was going to orb to him, when Leo stopped him.

"How are you holding up, son?" He asked caring.

"As usual, better than him." Chris shrugged.

"And what's that supposed to mean?"

Chris shrugged again.

"I know… your traditional…go take care of the rest, I'll be fine…everybody needs more than me…I'll handle it on my own?"

Again, Chris shrugged. Leo hugged him.

"Oh, my boy, you are allowed to grief too…you don't need to stay strong for everybody else."

Chris returned his father's embrace eagerly; but a second later he pulled away.

"I am glad to see you are…you know…here… really here… I missed you…but Wyatt needs you more than I do right now."

'Wyatt always needed us more…but that doesn't mean you don't have needs Chris…and I don't want to leave you alone!" Leo said with his hand on his shoulder.

"Go dad… I'll be fine, I promise…" Chris said.

Leo pulled him into a tight bear hug. "I am so proud of you son… you are such a strong, man! You can't imagine how proud your mom it's probably up there, seeing what a strong, resilient man you've become!"

Chris pulled away from the hug, moved to tears. "Why do you always say that, Dad? I am not strong… Wyatt is the strong one! He is the powerful one… stop saying that I am strong, cuz its not true!"

"No…Chris…Wyatt is powerful, Wyatt can even have the muscles, but you… you are the strongest one of us ALL…of all the Halliwell…you are the strongest one, my son." Leo told him.

"How? Why?" He said confused.

"Cuz your strength relays here…" He pointed at his heart "and here…" He pointed at his brain. "And there is where it counts, Chris. You'll find a way to save your brother; I have absolute faith in you… so did your cousin there…now it's your turn to have it."

"Thanks, dad." Now it was Chris term to pull him into an embrace. "Now go to Wyatt…I'll clean up here and then go with you, just go comfort Wyatt, he needs you right now."

Phoebe knew that she was going to be pulled into another premonition, just as sad as this one, and didn't know if she wanted to now. She pulled her hand out of her nephew's shoulder.

"I don't even know how he passed all the protection spells, or why he just went for her and didn't even look for dad! If I would have been home for dinner that night, like I promised her to! She did cook like mom!" Wyatt said sadly.

"It wasn't your fault!" Phoebe said comfortingly, not daring to touch him.

Wyatt just sighed heartbroken. Everything in his expression showed that no matter what she said, he was still going to believe it was his fault.

"I bet you were a really good cousin, Wy. She really seemed to cared about you!" She tried a different way of comforting him.

"And that was her crime? And that was everybody's crime?" He looked at her with red and sadden eyes.

"That's not what I meant and you know it! How did you even know I had that premonition?" Phoebe asked confused.

"Lot's of times when you ask me a question and you touch me, when my feelings are strong your empathy and both our premonitions powers collide and you get sucked into a premonition that answers your question and I get sucked into your premonition. You eventually going to learn to get a hold of it and call it at will!" Wy told her, playing with his food.

"Cool!" Phoebe said

"Sure… you are in the parental side of the spectrum!" He smirked sarcastically "I dreaded you!And remember…no matter how many times mom begs you, don't ask me question like where were you last night, cuz it might make you and I blush for a month!" But Wyatt was evidently cheering up with happier memories, and even took a bite. Phoebe chuckled "I swear… not that funny when it happens! And you can't even keep a secret! Which was horrible, cuz you were always my favorite aunt!" He whined.

"I was your favorite Aunt?" Phoebe said delighted. Wyatt nodded smiling at her lovingly, his mouth full with food. "And Chris'?"

"Paige… they love playing smart asses competitions" Wyatt said banteringly, taking another bite. Wyatt sighed and smile the way you smile when you remember a happy memory about someone that you loved and lost. "You know? Pryanna was turning fifteen the week after that. We were planning a surprise party for her. Me and Chris, just the fact that we both got together without fighting to plan something for her would have been enough of gift for her. I had rent this amazing cabin in the middle of the most paradisiacal nowhere and we were going to spend the whole weekend there, with her; we promised we weren't going to leave unless the world was ending; We were just going to enjoy our company the five of us, because Chris was finally going to introduce me to his girlfriend, they had been dating for almost two years and I hadn't met her yet."

"Bianca?" Phoebe asked.

Wyatt nodded. "No wonder he waited for a truce weekend! He was dating one Pry's body guards, one of my men! I should had suspected something when Bianca showed she loved kids so much, no respectable assassin loves their charges, but…I don't know…I was just happy to know the sweet angel was being protected by someone that cared about her and was nice to her; sometimes my baby girl was so lonely!" He said sadly.

Suddenly Paige orbed to the kitchen.

"Are you guys ready to do the summoning or you need a few more hours for the socials?" She teased acidly.

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Wwolf

"((Wyatt)), realmente debe ser una pesadilla tenerlo como primo mayor... " Totalmente… pero las chicas igual lo quieren! Es mas esos te asfixio con mi amor!
"Me guste k tenga problemas para recordaar exactamente algunos asesinatos, vamos un ordenador no puede ser.!" Y pero viste… eso lo saque de lo que vos me dijiste… y tan mal que te sentias! A mi me parecio tan bueno que tenia que incluirlo en mi historia!
Pero se sienta mal por gritara su tia, es tan contradictorio y adorable.
"Chris temiendo de la oscuridad es canon, esa tan mono cuando demuestra que no es de acero." :) siiiii…
"Puedo casarme con los dos, podemos compartirlos, pro favor." Si… hagamos eso… vamos a tener que tener una casa enorme…pero igual, hagamos un trato… no les enseñamos nada de español asi podemos gossip (yo se que si te lo digo de la manera en que yo normalmente lo digo no me vas a entender y no se me ocurre un termino mas correcto) sin que ellos entiendan nada OK?

Starry Sky 44

"This review is for chapter 7, but for some reason the "submit review" box wasn't at the bottom of the page so I had to submit it on chapter 6, plus it said I had already reviewed on chapter 6 so I have to review as a guest. " Thanks! That was sweet!

Cool! That sounds like a great trip (though no Drew… it would have been nice though!). Who is Wolfgang Puck?

Thanks!

"I liked that you explained why Wyatt could touch the book in the future--in "Chris-Crossed" I never understood how Wyatt could have the book and stuff since he was evil." I am soo happy you liked it! Yeah I found it illogical too… that's why I looked for a way around it!
"Good to know Wyatt still respects his family, and doesn't hate them. I like that." Glad you do! It just doesn't make sense if he loves Chris so much and he doesn't like the rest of the family!

hope master

Thanks… I am glad you liked it and thought it was crazy as hell!

Nathy1000000

" Y yo sí leí Corí Tellado (dos y no vomité pero sí me reí mucho y creo que no se suponía que fueran cómicas)" Heheh pasa a veces, como cuando miras una novela que nunca miraste! O cuando mi primita me fuerza a ver floricienta! Pero se me re ofende cuando me rio!

" Con decirte que mis vieja una vez las dejó en la basura y alguien vino y se las llevó pero las devolvió al rato..." Asi de buenas eran? Tal vez penso que pobres eran tan, pero tan buenas que no los queria privar de ellas… penso que las habian tirado por error!

"Me encanta la relación que planteás entre Chris y Wyatt, esa pelea pero con treguas...quiero ver al loco Leo! Suena muy prometedor." Si en esta memoria esta bastante calmado igual, parece mas con alzheimer!

" Como excusa, yo era chiquita" Excusas:P

" Uno escuchaba a Wyatt y se imaginaba a Jack el destripador y con Chris no tanto. " En serio? Buenisimo! Me siento feliz!

"Igual el chico estuvo mal...bueno Wyatt se ecargó de que nunca más hiciera nada parecido." Si… bien no estuvo, pero tampoco como para matarlo! Pero creo que hay demasiadas feministas extremas o Wyatt fans leyendo esta fic porque hay varias que dijeron que merecia morir… hehehe pero hasta Pryanna no se lo queria decir porque sabia que iba a irse a los caños!
"Ja ja...you go, Wy, pero no cerca mío, ji." Hehehe go… over there… go a little farther there…go a little more… there… perfect… algo asi?

"Y Wyatt, está teniendo secods thoughts sobre su amado reino?" Yeah don't hold your breath…Wy loves su amado reino…o al menos cree que cuando consiga todo el poder que quiere sus problemas se van a acabar, su sentimiento de culpa se va a acabar…

"Esta historia es muy original" En serio? Te parece? Por?

" insisto, no es mushy at all." Un poquito,... but we all love a little mushiness!

"los elders habrán ayudado un tanto pero siguen sin gustarme nada!" Die… elders… Die! No te preocupes Wyatt los mata a todos, sin ni preguntarles el nombre. Igual los elders lo ayudaron a Chris porque no tenian ni idea de que estaba pasando, quien era Chris, ni Wyatt… y porque Leo en insane mode es un poco scary!

Me alegra que te este gustando!

Ahhh ayer me acorde de vos… porque me colgue mirando un capitulo de la banda del golden rocket en volver y bue clave de sol y eso es casi lo mismo.

Altaira

"Yay! I think everyone thought I was crazy when I raised my arms in the air and shouted Yes!" Happens… you should join the new support group Sparkling Cherries and I are forming "Online support group for computer addicts." Is an online support group to help us understand why people don't get when we have weird reactions (like uncontrollable laugh, tears, hurrays, etc.) in front of the computer, or maybe to see how to re program them so they can understand. Because we are right… they are wrong, right?

Thanks! I am happy that you are enjoying it!

JadeAlmasy

THANKS!

Angel Kathy

Thanks!

" Thank you that you didn´t let Chris die." I could never do that… it would break my heart.

"And thanks for writing a review to my review." I am the one that should be thankful that u are reading my story.

" You are right, it is sometimes strange and dificult to write in another language, but I really like the english language so it´s not bad." Well… then this is a great way to practice. I didn't use to like English, but then… my family went international (we have a lot of foreigners staying at home, and we are always traveling and meeting all kinds of people) and then u can see how useful English can be, and then I started liking it

"What is your first language?" Spanish. I am from Argentina (south America).

"I just noticed that I already read other stories of you and that you are a really great and good writer." Thanks! Yeah I realized you read my other stories… but I didn't know you were German until I saw your email. You are German right?

"I liked disc... the most." You did? Awesome… I like that fiction a lot too! (very humble of me!). Well I am really happy that you like my writing!

Wicked R

"i don't like the character Chris. you can imagine i never cried for him. until i read your story!" Wooow that's a compliment if I ever heard one! I feel so flattered I don't even know what to say. Thanks… really : )…I am glad you ended liking Chris a little, at least in my fiction. Who is your favorite character? (just out of curiosity, you don't have to answer if you don't want) and I am glad you are reading recurrent Nightmare too… I hope you like it!

Victorious Light

"You see they just don't delve into Leo enough in Charmed, can't you just tell he's one of my fave's. I think his character often gets neglected, not to mention they conveniently forget things about his character too." I think they never delve into any of the characters… but yeah, the male characters tend to be neglected, and sometimes reduced to stupid to make the glamorous ladies shine more. Which is cool when you thinkthey are the stars… not very cool when it makes absolutely no sense with the whole background of the characters… like I donno… they could put Piper fixing the floorboard after a demon attack and Leo staring at her without knowing what is a hammer. Or like with Chris it happened a zillion times, the guy is shown like this demon obsessed freak and then when he is with the charmed ones in the underworld (where according to the show he is a regular) he doesn't know anything or he barely uses his powers and its saved by the girls… and you are like… dude… that makes no sense… but that's how the show works… and we have to deal with it.

"The only good thing was that he seemed to be the only one that reacted to Chris' death, though even then they botched that up and had him overly concerned with the betrayal of Gideon." Totally… can't you just say that you are sad cuz your son is dead… yeah whatever your friend killed him, so its even worst… but the problem is that your son died, not who did it!

" Sorry to ramble, I seem to do that a lot in your reviews!" Hey… I answer it back and ramble some more… don't i?

" Firstly, how adorable was that beginning, I liked the imagery of Wyatt hugging Chris and putting on a small light show, aw." Thanks! Actually in one of the first chapters Chris mentions that Wyatt always did that for him when he was little and he was scared of the dark.

"Another thing I have to point out is the fact that you have Wyatt still return to his dark side, which I like. It's good to see that he hasn't just coverted completely by being in their presence for a few hours, and that at times he still slips up and lets that anger and resentment through. " No… Wyatt is far from turning back to the good side… he is nice with his family cuz he loves them. In Chris' words "he had given a real portrait of Wy's insane mind; he could perfectly separate his role as the good brother, the good grandson, the good cousin with the overlord of all evil, and it made no contradiction or whatsoever in his head." Ok… those are my words but…it's what he said in my mind (I guess Wy is not the only one insane).

"I like - if that's the word - how you tied the comment in with Paige and have it all connecting, even if Wyatt did take it a tad bit too far by killing him. Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying he shouldn't have reacted, but killing, well, just goes to show you shouldn't get on the wrong side of Wyatt!" hehehe yeah… I don't think he should have killed him either! But yeah… if you see Wyatt… smile and be nice… just in case :)… but not too nice, cuz then he might like you and befriend you and keep you lock in his maximum security house with 3 body guards, for "your own safety"

"One last thing, I loved the book moment, when Wyatt had to ask Piper to open it! Just a great, comical moment!" Really? Thanks! I am so happy you did!

Ceres217

" I still like it... found it funny, that Wyatt had complications to remeber Operents powers etc. (ok maybe funny isn't the right word)" Tragicomically? I love that word, and bitter-sweet, they so apply to this sort of situations.

"that wyatt couldn't touch the book... " I am glad you did, I mean… he was evil, so he shouldn't b able to do it; but he does it in Chris-crossed…so…

"okay I think I missed the quote you mentioned" It's ok, Wyatt babbles so much that at one point you are meant to miss sth, I was just one tinny little line, so don't b so hard in myself…my stories are written as you know some movies that you watch them and then you watch them again and there are tons of little details that are giving you clues but they are so little you missed them? You just see them the second time around and you say AHHHH… well…sort of like that! So that was one of the lines that are meant for the second reading.

midnite-magic

Thanks… aren't those brothers sweet? I want to take them home, put them in my night table (maybe Wyatt locked somehow better), but I can't get them out of my head and into reality… pitty, right?

Heheh back to the real thing… thank you so much, I am glad you like it!

Karen

" Did i mention that i love Chris and Wyatt?" Don't we all? They are SOO cute…wouldn't it b awesome if they were not only cute but real too? The problem would be that it would be hard to chose.

" you have to promise me you will save Chris eventually!" I promise, Chris will be saved, Wyatt will be saved and the future will be saved, and will have a small glance of what the good improve future looks like, what do you think?

Missing Whisper

Thanks… yeah I over did with the emotional, babbling stuff… Chris was plotting against them saving them and Wyatt talks more than Phoebe… so that's a problem.

"But I can't wait until they start to do something else, are they gonna kill that dude?" Well…I don't know if they'll get to the killing part next chapter (they won't kill him till they are sure that the antidote works) but Wyatt will certainly beat the crap out of him next chappie. Is that good enough?

Piper Chris fan

Thanks! Here you have the premonition. Piper is not in it… cuz well… she died pretty soon in the game…at this point there are only those 3 left.

"I hope Chris will be ok soon." He will… don't worry.

"He is so sweet and his connection with Piper is great." I love the Chris-Piper relationship, I wish they had developed it more in the show… I know they probably didn't have time… but well… the solution would have been not killing him, right?

" I think they didnt get enought bonding on the show - that was mean." Hehehe funny I wrote that and then I read you wrote this.

You ought to read my one shot "getting to know you" is only focused on Piper and Chris; and "For the love of Chris" is actually focused a little more on Chris- Leo but it has a lot of Chris-Piper in it too. (Heheh I am good promoting myself!) nahhh but if you like this fic you'll probably like those 2 too.

adpi24

" I love the interaction between Wyatt and Chris. You are portraying their relationship wonderfully." Thanks! I am glad you like it!

"You are adding a dimension to Wyatt that would have been wonderful to see on the show, an evil Wyatt who still loves his family and is struggling with his "evilness" and his "love"." I think they barely gave any dimensions to evil Wyatt… which would have been great! Actually Chris never even speaks about his relationship with his brother or anything… that is, in my opinion, pretty sad… they could have make a great story out of that! Besides, I don't know, when Chris says small things like " I came to save my family." Or stuff like that, he shows he cares, or the fact that he knows he is actually good inside and something turned him, shows that he wasn't always bad… so there has to be some goodness in Wyatt,… I donno I am rambling here… the thing is yeah…they should have focused a lot more in those too.

Thanks!

Beleninwe

"I hate repeating my own words, but... I love it!" If those are the words please, keep on repeating yourself!

" I always love your stories, and I'm always longing for your updates, hehe." Ohhh I feel so flattered! Thanks

"Looking forward his (Wyatt's) meeting with Oprent!" Next chappie…

"Even though, after the memories about the supposed rape, I can't hate the murdere so much..." But Railey didn't rape him, what happened is what Chris said, they guy did kissed her and she didn't want to…he tried to touch her, but barely… I wasn't too much of a rape… it was mean… but he would have never raped her.

"he's doing what Wyatt himself would have done if Chris was murdered." Yeah…probably! But remember Wyatt is evil…is going to be a little harder for the good side of the clan…

"actually, what he plans to do, I guess, even if Chris lives ;)" Yeah his hours are counted.

"Half demons, right... But I loved Cole, girl!" I like half demons too… I have Phoebe marry one in each story, except in this one cuz it would be too hard for Wyatt to conciliate his cousins and the half demons enemies…

"So I can't hate these guys as much as I hated when you started the story, lol." This story doesn't have black and Whites, it's a whole mixture of grey… like life… and most of my stories have things like this, but this one specially. Chris is not always TOO good, Wyatt is not TOO bad, Oprent is not TOO bad, and the glamorous ladies are not saint either…nothing its too easy and they all have good reasons to do what they did! Gosh… if I woulnd't have wanted the guy to be half good, I wouldn't have Paige be a "friend" of his mother.

" That part about 'I don't remember all the people I killed,' and all, yeah, was quite funny, you know:)" heheh thanks! I am glad you appreciated my morbid sense of humor hahaha.

teal-lover

"That was funny all the way up until the part where I had to start screaming when he stopped breathing. That would really set Wyatt over the edge, permanently." Pretty much!

"Oh, and thanks for the timeline. No wonder poor Wyatt lost it, after he lost nearly everyone that ever meant anything to him." I am glad you appreciate it and understood…yeah I guessed it would have been useful to have all the information in sort of a logical order, just in case someone gets lost in Wyatt's babbling.

"I LOVE your Wyatt. He's like a big teddy bear, just a little bit rough around the edges." Yeahhh he is adorable! Though be careful…as I told a couple already… don't piss him off… and don't get him to like you too much, cuz he might lock you in his maximum security house with 3 body guards for your own protection.

"But it's so nice how he loves and protects his family, even his little cousins." In my mind he was actually adorable with the little girls, a too paranoid and overprotective, but well… he was too scared of loosing them, and he still did in the end, sad.

"And I don't completely understand Chris' point--Wyatt went ballistic on the guy after what he tried to do--and just because he didn't succeed didn't make it ok. And 14 is plenty old enough to know better." Heheh I know… but the guy would have never raped her; Chris was right… he never even attempted to undress her, he just forced his mouth in her throat…and try to touch her breast with her shirt on…and even if he did something horrible…it was a person… you send him to jail, not kill him!

"So in just this one instance, I raise my fist and say, "more power to Wyatt!" :)" See I defend Chris… cuz he is MY guy:P! Nahh I defend poor Pryanna…she didn't want him to be killed.

Sparkling Cherries

"" I decided that I better face that I was insane and then… well… live with it…it's better that way… it takes part of the guilt away"LOL! words to live by, those are! If we keep talking like this, we might as well move to the maximum security house:P" Yeah but that won't be Wyatt's that would be the loony bin! Unless we convince Wyatt to have the nurses that are taking care of Leo to take care of us too!

"Yeah, but what would the world be without a lil sappyness. Yeah the whole 1960's thing topped with the tooth twinkling (loved that touch btw) would be just too funny (and v. weird). Piper actually saying it though...she'd either be on drugs, possessed or both." heheheheheheheh

""cyber- transcontinental hug!" - great name for that!" Then here we have another C-T H for our own little online support group! I invited someone to join us yesterday when she told me everybody looked at her weird when she looked at the monitor and yelled "YEY" lifting up her arms. I thought she might needed some support too for her feeling of not being understood by this neophyte people that never experience the joy of relating with a computer.

"gives evil, insane glare back Try to out evil stare me will you! I'll have you know I'll outlast you, take your characters and your little dog too! (last bit from wizard of oz if ya didn't know. no idea where it came from it just sounded right! yes me a my mad brain lol)MUHAHAHAHAHA!" Hahah NEVER… nobody beats me missy! I am Taurus and we are very stubborn… but then I am remembering you are a Taurus too… bull against bull (don't go farther than there cuz that's all I know about astrological signs).

" CHRIS IS ALIVE! WOOHOO! Or is this some cruel joke where you'll eventually kill him off?" Muahahahahah I'll never tell! Nahh you are the only one that enjoys killing our sweet little boy when he is merely a 16 year old baby!

"so the whole thing with wyatt killing the younger bro is just some big misunderstanding." Not really, Wyatt understood what Pryanna told him, he just overreacted and created a whole big soap in his mind…she told them both the same story; only Wyatt is a little more dramatic, paranoid, overprotective and evilly insane and overreacted a little more.

BiancaHalliwell

Thanks! You are soo sweet!

phoebe turner

Thanks… aren't those brothers sweet? I want to take them home, put them in my night table (maybe Wyatt locked somehow better), but I can't get them out of my head and into reality… pitty, right?

Heheh back to the real thing… thank you so much, I am glad you like it!