An eye for an eye Chapter 9, a charmed fanfic

CHAPTER IX:

Suddenly Paige orbed to the kitchen.

"Are you guys ready to do the summoning or you need a few more hours for the socials?" She teased acidly.

"Everything is ready?" Wyatt asked happily and Paige nodded. "Then…what are we waiting for?" He said orbing to the attic.

Paige walked to Phoebe saying: "Wanna a lift?" and Phoebe grabbed her hand.

"For the record… our oldest nephew just said I was his favorite aunt!" She smirked smugly at her youngest sister.

"What about Chris'?" Paige asked.

Phoebe glared at her "Nahh… you won there!" She said defeated.

"HA" She laughed self contented and orbed them to the attic.

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"What is he doing here?" Wyatt asked shocked when he saw his brother laying on the couch. "Shouldn't he be sleeping and in a bed?"

"He has a name and allows people to address directly to him without intermediaries" Chris smirked.

"Ohh you are SO witty, Christopher!" Wyatt bitted his lip sarcastically.

"I know and you love me so much because of that, right?" He said banteringly, with his best "I am so adorable" smile.

"No… bro the word that you were looking for was despite… not because…despite that!" Wyatt smiled back sighing resigned.

At that point Phoebe and Paige orbed in.

"Are we late?" Phoebe smiled banteringly.

"Just in time; here you have, summoning spell, power blocking potion and vanquishing potion." Piper said giving the three of them a piece of paper and 2 vials.

Wyatt looked at the vials like saying "I don't think I need a vanquishing potion to blow his sorry ass back to hell." But didn't say anything.

"And me?" Chris whined from the couch.

"You should be happy we are even letting you stay here in the attic!" Piper barked at him.

"Yeah… why are we even letting him stay here in the attic? Shouldn't he be in bed?" Phoebe asked.

"I second that motion! How could you let him come back here?" Wyatt yelled at his mother, annoyed out of concern. "How can you be such a bad mother to my baby brother? You don't care that he might die?"

Piper swallowed her tears and defied him back angrily "Ok… then you might wanna tell me a way to keep your brother locked in the bedroom and laying in a bed, without him wasting all the little energy he has left in trying to get out of there!" She said walking backwards and sitting besides Chris. Who grabbed her hand and kissed it comfortingly, not knowing what to do to make his mom feel better.

Wyatt shrugged.

"Look Wyatt, son, we understand that you are worried." Leo said softly but firmly. "And despite what you think, you are not the only one who cares about him, we are as worried as you are; But if you think that being worry gives you the right to yell at your mother like that, you are very wrong. I don't care how old you are, I don't care if you are the ruler of a world of evil and darkness… you are my son, and you are not treating your mother like that in my presence… so apologize to her, and watch your tongue… ok?" Leo was never harsh; never left his soft, calm tone; but it was the firmness in it that surprised the sisters, and apparently Wyatt was used to hear it and obeyed.

"Yes, dad." He said meekly, he walked in front of Piper (who was sitting on Chris' couch) and kneeled in front of her. "I am sorry, mom, I am just overwhelmed with this situation; I never meant to be rude, will you forgive me, please?" His baby blue piercing eyes, exactly like his baby self's one, that Piper had gotten so use to stare at, were looking at her with so much love and so much fear. Piper hugged her oldest.

"Everything is going to be ok, don't worry." She kissed his forehead and he smiled weakly.

"Mommy is going to kill the big bad thing! Right?" Chris teased from beside her and Wyatt chuckled.

Everybody looked at them perplexed.

"Oh quit your complaining…it was for you to believe it, not me… and whatever… you always calmed you down when I told you that, so? It worked!" Wyatt smiled back at him.

Chris chuckled. "You were a cute little kid, you know that? And very naïve too! It wasn't what you said that calmed me down, you used to hugged me while you told that everything was going to be ok, not to worry because Mommy was going to kill the big bad thing. I wasn't scared any more cuz I knew you were there to protect me, and I knew nothing would happen if my BIG brother Wyatt was there; but you never realized it."

Piper was looking at her sons imagining the scene of little Wyatt hugging and protecting little Chris; her eyes met Leo's and she knew he was thinking more or less the same.

"Really?" Wyatt chuckled beaming.

"I was what? Four, when you used to do that? You were my big brother… my biggest hero in the entire world!" he excused himself sheepishly.

"Awww…" Paige couldn't help saying.

"They are sooo cute… Piper… my nephews are SO cute! Aren't they like the cutest nephews ever?" Phoebe babbled happily.

"Can we go back to the summoning, please?" Chris said acerbic, ruining the moment intentionally.

Still… it did the trick; they all stood in their places and began reading the summoning spell.

As soon as the transparent swirl transformed in a human being who stared at them startled and a little scared, a subtle change occurred in Wyatt, his eyes became cold and malevolent; Chris unemotional expression was a fountain of joy compared to Wyatt's and a icy fear would spread into anyone that looked at them.

Each of his steps had a security and imposing firmness to it that they hadn't seen before.

"Are you scared now?" Wyatt roared defiantly looking at him an inch away from the ending of the cage.

"You can torture me… you can kill me… but… in the end… I'll get what I want… YOUR BROTHER IS GOING TO DIE…soon, very soon!" Oprent said with a smug smile.

Wyatt Tk removed one of the crystals and made Oprent fly to his hands, he firmly gripped his shirt and lift him in the air.

"Ok…torturing and killing you sounds fine… the part of my brother's dying is still under revision!" He smirked acidly, with an frightening anger in his tone.

"I told him you still cared…but he was all upset… he thought you hated him… and it hurt him so much…right, Chrissy?" Oprent mocked Chris.

Wyatt punched him on the face, and then punched him again, and then he aimed to the stomach, in less than a minute Wyatt had punched and kicked Oprent ubiquitously and he was bleeding profusely from everywhere.

"Wyatt stopped… we need him alive!" Paige screamed worried; yet all that accomplished was Wyatt launching Oprent tk from the floor to a wall all across the Attic and then orbing right in front of him.

"Wyatt… stop this nonsense… he is just a boy!" Chris yelled firmly and alarmed.

"He tried to kill you… if he is old enough to do that, he is old enough to die himself." Wyatt said sternly, pinning him TK against a wall; a threatening energy ball in his hand.

"Wyatt PLEASE… if he dies we'll never learn how to heal Chris!" Leo pleaded softly walking to his son, Piper beside him.

"You'll never know even if I live… so it's a lost cause!" Oprent smiled self content and Wyatt threw the energy ball at his shoulder.

"I won't kill him, dad." He said in an insane, evil way; it reminded Paige of the look the insane-evil characters of the movies talk in a situation like that and it gave her the chills. "I will just make him suffer a little… I am going to leave his tongue and vital organs intact… he doesn't need his arms or fingers to talk." He said blowing up each of his fingers and then what was left of his hand and forearm, and breaking his other arm in several places with his TK.

Oprent let go an agonizing scream.

"Wyatt STOP!" Phoebe almost sobbed at the horrifying torture scene.

"Or his eyes either!" Wyatt said terrifyingly.

Far from eager to see what Wyatt had planned for Oprent's eyes Piper walked to him.

'WYATT STOP WITH THIS NONSENSE NOWWWWWWWWWW!" Piper reprimand yelling firmly and sternly.

Wyatt turned around shocked to look at his mother, never the less he TK made Oprent fly inside the crystal cage and closed it, putting back the crystal he had removed.

"Leo, heal him." Piper said calmly looking at the mass of blood inside the crystal cage.

"WHAT? NOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Wyatt said walking in front of his father as if that could stop the orbing man.

"Wyatt…it's kind of revolting to talk to a guy who has no hand and his other arm is twisted in the most awkward position and it's bleeding all over!" Phoebe said disgusted.

"I am sorry… do you want me to dress him in pink and make it fluffy so you can actually talk with something agreeable to your eyes?" Wyatt said sarcastically and angry, very angry.

Unintentionally Chris drift into a coughing fit at that precise moment and they all stopped their discussion and turned to him.

"It's ok, I am fine." He said weakly, closing his eyes and focusing on stabilizing his breathing. Yet they all noticed how he hided the hand he had used to cover his mouth and they could infer that it was because it was now full of blood, since Chris couldn't see his mouth, but they could and it was stained with blood too. That couldn't be a good sign!

Piper grabbed the box of Kleenex she always kept in the attic and ran to his son, his eye lashes fluttered when he felt the tissue on his lips and his mom bestowed him with a sweet smile.

"It's ok…" She said trying to hide her fear and sadness and giving him the best reassuring smile she could. "Give me your hand." She said gently opening the hand she knew, was full of blood.

"I am fine… don't worry." He pleaded more than stated, ashamed that he couldn´t hide the blood from his mother and relatives.

Still they all knew there was a limited amount of times the conjoint healing would work, and it was probably reaching his limit; soon even the whole fleet of elders and whitelighters together wouldn't be able to do much.

"Ok, bro… your call… should we heal him before we kill him or not?" Wyatt said sternly, but still Chris could see the worry and love in his eyes directed JUST to him.

"Heal him, Wy. It'…"It seemed he wanted to give an explanation but he was too weak to do it.

"Ok…whatever you say, Chris. Heal him dad… cuz I WON'T do it." He said walking to Chris and leaving his father room to work. Meanwhile he applied his own golden tingle on his brother. "Better?" He asked caring.

Chris nodded with his eyes closed, he was barely feeling any better but he didn't want to worry him. Paige went to help and soon Leo was there. Chris managed to open his eyes, he felt stronger, with more energy, yet he could feel the wound in back that went all the way to his lung as it filled with blood and breathing was as hard as it had been for the last hour, or probably getting harder; he didn't know how long it would take for his lungs to collapse again.

"Oh… how sweet… it reminds me of when I used to have a brother!" Oprent said angrily.

"You stay quiet, unless you are planning to tell me something that would help him get better, SHUT UP!" Wyatt answered sternly.

"I am not going to tell you anything…you can torture me, you can kill me… I don´t care…I´ll still be the winner here, cuz I´ll still get to deprive you of the ONE thing you care about!" Oprent smiled smugly.

"You are so naive, Oprent!" Wyatt smiled evilly while he paced in front of him "I don´t need to torture you, I don´t need to kill you... those things are things I do to please my minions, myself and keep people in line... I never needed to torture anyone to get information from them... what do I have spells for?"

"What?" Almost everybody in the room asked at once, Wyatt was acting in a way that could inflict fear on a dead guy (and Leo could ratify that!).

"Why would I torture someone so they can tell me something that might be a lie? When I can cast a spell that will force them to tell the truth?" He said coldly.

"And by this power that I have

I command, don't tell a lie

All the truth I wanna hear

You can't lie while you are here."

"See... it´s as easy as that...try and lie to me...are you scared of me?" He said arcticly and defiantly.

"Very" Oprent answered against his will.

"Good...Glad to hear it!" Wyatt smiled icily and there was something in his stare, in his attitude that gave the present people the chills. "See... I always wondered...I always felt you had an obsession with my family? Was I wrong? "

"No...you weren´t wrong." They could see how Oprent was fighting against the words that seemed to be packing in his mouth. "I always envied you... you had the perfect loving family! Everybody seemed to love each other so much...my dad... he was a demon that beat the heck out of my alcoholic mother...all I had was Railey and you took him away from me...that is why you are going to suffer as much as I did! You and your perfect, little, overpowerful family!" He yelled angry and somehow they knew they didn´t need a truth spell to get him to tell them that.

Piper stood up and walked to him. "Why did you do this to my son? What did he ever do to you?" She asked sadly, tears flooding the sockets of her eyes.

"An eye for an eye! Death would be a reward for Wyatt after what he did… I want him to suffer as much as he can…I want him bent in pain, for the pain he caused me… there would never be enough pain in the world to make the abomination that is your son pay for his deeds… so at least… I am going to make him pay for my brother."

"My son is NOT an abomination…and Chris never did anything to you!" Leo said angrily.

"The end justifies the means… one of Wyatt's favorite slogans… A big Machiavelli fan! Aren't you, Wyatt? He killed my brother; now I killed his…I think Machiavelli was a big fan of the law of retaliation, wasn't him? You certainly, are… aren't you, Wyatt? Did you tell your family the horrendous things you did in the name of justice? And you know I can't be lying… I am under a spell. Did they know how the "lex tallionis" work in your regime? Ironic, what do you think now… when you are the one suffering the punishment… not to so fun, right?" Oprent said as coldly as Wyatt.

Wyatt lost it, with one swing of his hand, the crystal went flying once again and so did Oprent. His head banged loudly against the wall, but unluckily for him, he didn't loose conscious. Wyatt ran to him, and beat him copiously, not giving the kid even time to breath between the punches in his abdomen and face; he was a sea of blood when a couple of minutes later Chris went into a seriously violent coughing fit.

Leo was the first one by his side, helping him to sit down and wrapping him carefully in his arms, to stop him from convulsing, he gently placed Chris' head on his shoulder, so he could get a little air, as he lovingly draw circles with healing light in his back.

"it's ok, son, I got you… I got you…" He cooed soothingly to the poor kid that couldn't do anything else but cough and struggle for air.

Piper at their side, was restraining her tears. She smiled tenderly at her son as she did her best to clean the blood pouring out of his lungs, that by now was so coming out so profusely Chris was unable to hide it, and it was dripping all over his father's T-Shirt.

She suddenly realized that Chris' hand was doing weak and blind attempts to reach for hers, so she held his hand.

"I am here, baby… everything is going to be ok, ok? Just take it easy…it'll be over soon." She said gently.

Chris tried to nod between his spasms.

Wyatt finished Oprent off with one last punch that sent him to unconsciousness and locked him back on his cage. He stood up and look at his family helping Chris; he was unable to move… to go to them. He was stuck there, glued to the floor staring at his brother from a heartbreaking distance, that he felt was bigger than the geographic one.

Paige and Phoebe were watching at Chris, ready to see how could they help, unaware that behind them, the lord of darkness, the prince that inflicted fear in millions, was staring at all of them, with a fear that felt like a petrifying ball of emptiness in his stomach that was sucking everything from him and leaving him as hollow an empty shell, with a painful unpronounced scream in the back of his throat that was cutting like a zillion knifes.

Chris' cough slowly began to cease and he looked exhausted as he panted loudly and fast for air with unmistakable effort.

"Calm down, son… slow down…easy…breath in…out…" Leo said with all the calmness in the world and it was the first time in her life that Piper thanked all the elderly meditation, because she was having the hardest trouble to even utter a word. To do so and sound calm seemed like an impossible task right now. So she just squeezed Chris' hand and smiled at him while she finished cleaning the blood.

Now that he was coughing only now and then, she could see him wince of pain every time he did it and it broke her heart.

"Are you in too much pain, sweetie?" She couldn't help asking.

He took a deep breath and shook his head, faking his best brave face not to worry her; but the pain, the exhaustion was scarred in his face.

"Hang in there just a little longer, ok? Please?" Piper begged him, trying hard not to cry. She could hear Phoebe and Paige crying behind him.

Chris closed his eyes and nodded, he tried to hide it, but this face sold him out, he was really struggling to stay alive and if it wasn't for the fact that his family was begging him to stay with them, he would given up right about now and let death come and get him.

"Just a little longer, son…we need you with us, you know that, right?" Leo told the man in his arms with all the love in the world, while he caressed his hair. Chris couldn't answer, and Leo couldn't see his face; but the three girls could see the weak smile in Chris' lips, while his eyes forcibly began closing as obviously struggled to keep them open.

"Rest a little, sweetie… It will help you…shhh… just close your eyes." Piper said gently caressing his face, her soothing touch seemed to do the trick and he closed his eyes.

Piper nodded at Leo and he gently began to lay him back down; yet Chris flicked his eye lids open, jerking a little, hugging his father as firmly as he could and holding his mother's hand tightly.

"Shh…it's ok… I am just laying you down… calm down, boy… everything is ok." Leo appeased him.

"Noo…" He moaned ever so weakly.

"Shh… don't talk, Chris… it's ok… just go back to sleep." Piper said lovingly.

"Five more minutes… till I fall asleep…please…" He whispered with the little strength he had left, while he snuggled in his father's arms and brought his mother's hand close to his chest.

"Five more minutes of what, son?" Leo asked confused, probably too humble to understand how much it meant to his son to have him there, soothing him.

But Chris didn't even bother to answer, he just laid there pretending he was a kid being pampered by his parents.

Piper did get what he wanted, though, she sat down behind Chris on the couch and got as close to him as he could, caressing his hair with her free hand.

At that point Oprent woke back up.

"Ohh isn't that a cute thing?" He said sarcastically. " Such a pity he won't last much longer; and why aren't you with your family now, Wy? You are suddenly feeling guilty for all your past deeds? You don't feel you are worth enough to be by your brother's side when he dies? Is it killing you that I figured out the only way to destroy you?" He said acidly.

Wyatt finally reacted, and not in a nice way… He snapped again, opening the cage… and started dismembering Oprent in the most awful possible ways.

"STOP! God… Wyatt stop it!" Phoebe was the first one to react, yelling disgusted as she saw Wyatt TK take one of Oprents eyes out of it sockets.

Phoebe and Paige ran to stand in front of him, in an attempt to stop him, and Piper ran to stop his son, while Leo gently laid Chris back down on the couch.

"Tell…Wyatt…to…come…and…take…care…of…me…if…not… he… is…going…to… kill…him." Chris whispered weakly and Leo nodded in agreement.

"Wy… your brother wants you here with him."

Wyatt stopped what he was doing and looked at Chris.

Chris wanted to pat the space beside him, to signal Wyatt to come, but he didn't have the strength, he tried to stretch his arm to him, but he couldn't… all the managed to do, was to open his hand, so his brother would take it.

Wyatt forgot about Oprent and ran to his little brother, he gently scooped him and nested him on his chest. He wanted to say something comforting, soothing, reassuring, but he felt that he had lost all the words…all he could say was a weak.

"I love you." As he kissed his forehead.

"I love you too." Chris whispered as he felt asleep in his arms.

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Nikki14u

Thanks! Yeah don't worry I know you've been busy and your updates were worth the wait : )

jenna51980

Thanks! Don't worry about it… I am just glad to know you are reading it.

teal-lover

"that was so sad. I just wanted to walk over and give poor Wyatt a hug. All he wants is his family back—" He can be a very cute guy! He can also be a little scary like in this chappie too

"and I'd be curious to find out who killed pry--seemed like a set up to me." They were a little more than curious… but they never found out anything, that kinds of drives Wyatt a little more insane than he is.

"Great chapter. I love his sensitive side & the way you bring it out in him. Even Chris has to melt:)" Thanks!

" I hope you'll find a way to save all of them in this story." Ohh I sat down on Sunday morning and almost finished the story, I am just missing a couple of scenes in two chapters… so since I don't think I am going to change it…I can tell you it has a happy ending.

Victorious Light

"You see that's another thing that annoyed me. The episode witchstock - at the beginning when Piper and Chris are waiting for Paige to do the spell, and Piper says she'll do it on her own, but Chris says they need two witches - hello? There are two! He was half and half but for some reason could really only orb! Okay that's my rant for the day." Hehehe yeah I forgot about that… never paid that much attention… Yeah he could have say they needed two charmed ones, at least! I wasn't that hard to solve that even… writers…they just write whatever it fits them…without caring!

"I loved the conversation between the two brothers at the beginning. And it was nice to see Chris being the stronger brother for a change and Wyatt relying on him!" I always thought that should be their dynamics…and it is in all my stories; Wyatt is powerful, well built and usually a very emotional; impetuous and sensitive guy (I mean I always guessed he had to be very sensitive to get turned by Gideon), and Chris is always the one with the strongest will, resilient, the one that "holds the fort" if you catch my drift. So I am glad you like it.

"I liked your premonition part for a few reasons - How sad is it how Leo ended up, ugh, honestly gets me right in the heart, and how the two have to look after him and keep reminding him of who they are. You're officially Queen of heartbreaking moments!" hehe I knew you were going to like the Leo moment! And I am glad to know that I was right? You liked that? Actually what I liked the most…or at least what I tried to show was… first, that even if Leo was completely broken… it shows he was a good father… because both his sons dropped everything to try to help him and make him feel better as soon as he arrives, and they both were so caring with him… you are not that caring with someone if that person wasn't really good with you. And then… my favorite, favorite… was that well Leo manages to regain some sanity cuz his sons need him, and when he does… not only his sons show how much they do need him, and how much the relay and lean on his father, but he shows he is a really good father calming both his son, who are so different, at the same time; telling each one what they need to hear, without neglecting any…he doesn't allow Chris to fool him with his "I am ok" façade and he manages both of them to stop fighting and relay on each other since he knew he wasn't going to be able to stay sane for a lot longer; and last but not least, the fact that he was devastated too, he LOVED that girl, but he was able to put his own grief behind to help his kids. Ok… mini analysis of what that little scene with Leo had back stage for that character… did all that show?

"It also brought about the favourite Aunt's bit. Which led to Wyatt saying about how she found out what he'd been up to at night! How funny would that be, unless of course it was you in their positions, then it would just be down right embarrassing. Ha!" Yeah… I thought so too… "And Chris and Paige bond of being smartasses! Great!" I always thoughts those should have been the pairs because Chris and Paige have the same smart ass sarcastic personalities and as I told you, my Wyatt as usually very sensitive and emotional, and that's more like Phoebe. I am glad you like it, thanks!

Sparkling Cherries

"a CTH to start the online help group would be awsome! lol, the newest member's experience! that's so funny she's more than welcome - this is just too funny!" People keep on reading our msgs to each other and asking me if they can join! We are getting so popular… and I never thought people read so much what I had to say to others… what can I say… I am such a great writer that ppl wanna even read all junk babble I write down here… and I am so humble my fingers should be cut off, so I learn that I can't type such things!

anyways wonderful job update soon!

Jade"

"" Nahh you are the only one that enjoys killing our sweet little boy when he is merely a 16 year old baby!" - You're making me sound so sadistic! You however choose to torture chris endlessly, so who is crueler! " Heheheheheh you are FUNNY! Yeah I am mean and sadistic… ok… I admit it… maybe the group will help me.

"I think we could arrange wyatt's nurses to frequent the ward, or looney bin. Maybe magicaly bring pry back to life just so she can cook for us...oh and stop wyatt from going even crazier of course, but that's minor compared to feeding us." Who cares about Wyatt's sanity when we are in a luxurious mansion, with all the computers we want and Penny cooking us for an all you can eat buffet? Right? The only problem we are going to have it's see who gets to be with Chris every time he comes to visit his father.

I was also thinking that the CTH should joining once a month in Wyatt's maximum security palace, where he keeps Leo… we'll bring back Pryanna to feed us and we'll just wait there to see if Chris comes and visit his father… how does it sound? Do you have any problem with time traveling? Hehehe.

"I was really bored so looked on the net about our star sign. if ya wanna how AMAZINGLY FANTASTIC we are then check this site :- " You know? When you want to publish sites here, it doesn't do it… god knows why… I tried a few times you have to write it like www . blha blah . com leaving tons of spaces, so it doesn't recognize it's a site.

"once again UPDATE, I COMMAND THEE! gives evil stare you think you can defeat me! HA I will beat you at you're little mind games:P" Ohh honey… you don't know what you r getting yourself into… I am the master of mind games… now bow in front of me! I command you:P

JadeAlmasy

"can i join? i have to stop reading some fics in school cuz i get too emotional and my friends start looking at me like i have lost my mind! and its embarrasing to cry in school over a story! at home its ok but not in school!" We all know that feeling my friend…and at work gets even more ridiculous…. I am asking our fellow members but I am pretty sure they will be rejoiced… we are also thinking on joining once a month in Wyatt's maximum security palace, where he keeps Leo… we'll bring back Pryanna to feed us and we'll just wait there to see if Chris comes and visit his father… how does it sound? Do you have any problem with time traveling? Hehehe.

Thanks!

Beleninwe

"hehe, Then... If you like that I repeat these words... Here you are! I love it!" GOOD START!"Don't worry, I can setill wait for another update to see the meeting between Oprent and Wyatt... ;)" Here you have Wyatt kicking his sorry ass!

"I like that technique... I mean, about not completely good or evil. My point is always that... No character is completely good or evil. In any story. I'm sure that the evilest person has some good inseide, as well as the best one has some evil.. Only in stories for kids, there's a clear evil and good. And even so... I used to pity the step sisters of Cinderella and tha step mother, lol!" Absolutelly, you pity them? Why? I always wanted to be them or the evil guy when we did representations… I guess it was more fun…but I don't know if as much as pity them.

" That's why love Paige, and the top-sarcastic of the show, Chris ;)" SOOOO totally! Same here.

"Leo's madness is very understandable -does that word exist?- comprensible..." Understandable exist, is correct and people usually use it more than comprehensible, and I don't know who I am to start telling you about English wording!

"And the way the sons behave to him. And as I always say... I completely agree that Wyatt might be the most powerful and physically strongest, but Chris is the strongest in mind, the one capable of discerning between good and evil, and all." So true… if you see… that happens in all my fictions… I always thought that should be their dynamics…and it is in all my stories; Wyatt is powerful, well built and usually a very emotional; impetuous and sensitive guy (I mean I always guessed he had to be very sensitive to get turned by Gideon), and Chris is always the one with the strongest will, resilient, the one that "holds the fort" if you catch my drift. So I am glad you like it.
"You see, that's why I thought he was supposed to be the owner of Excalibur, he's like Arthur... not Wyatt. Wyatt is the super-powerful witch, he's more like Merlin, hehe." Yeah…I did something like that in my fic predestinated, that Chris gets Excalibur exactly because of that.

THANKS.

Ceres217

"And still love it - I guess this is my introduction sentence for quiet a while... " Well I couldn't think of a better introduction sentences if its about one my fics… so keep on sending them!

Thanks! It's so cool that you liked the premonition and how the things occurred in the future…ok… maybe like is not the correct word…since it was pretty sad… but you understand what I mean… I hope you like this too!

Wwolf

"CrazyLeo is the best lo más dificil debe ser cuando se da cuenta de la realidad ysabe que esta loco y no va durar mucho su cordura.Debe ser rompedor." Si… pobrecito…especialmente el saber no solo que irremediablemente va a volver a perder la cabeza muy pronto… sino el saber que sus hijos lo van a necesitar y el no va a poder estar para ellos…eso es lo que lo mata…
"dan tantas ganas de abrazar a Wyatt en la premoniicion pero más a Chris o de darle un par de guantazos parqa que supere su complejo de martir, me gusta que Leo le diga que tiene derecho a romperse que no necesita siempre ser el fuerte." Gracias! Queria demostrar que Leo conoce bien a sus hijos and he can't be fool con la cara de poker de Chris y que sabe bien como tratar a los dos… y que si bien Wyatt es el que se deshace en llanto, no por eso Leo se olvida de Chris.

"Sure… you are in the parental side of the spectrum!" He smirked sarcastically "I dreaded you!And remember…no matter how many times mom begs you, don't ask me question like where were you last night, cuz it might make you and I blush for a month!" jajajajaja
Pheobe-Wyatt
Paige-Chris
no se porque siempre veo asi los favoritismos.Puede porque en el show obviamente Paige se llevaba mejor con Chris."

Yeah… I thought so too… I always thoughts those should have been the pairs because Chris and Paige have the same smart ass sarcastic personalities and as I told you, my Wyatt as usually very sensitive and emotional, and that's more like Phoebe. I am glad you like it, thanks!
"PD: hablandod e Paige/Chris ¿conoces algun fic de estos dos donde sean tia/sobrino se que es wrong/weird pero la reacion de Piper podría ser jajajaj" O sea una fic donde esten juntos tipo pareja y después se den cuenta de que son Tia/Sobrino? No… no vi ninguna… igual seria bastante Pervy de Chris… porque el sabe que es su tia! Aunque sabes que divertido un Fic donde Chris pierda la memoria y empiece a salir con Paige y después todo se revele y Chris se de cuenta que esta saliendo con su tia y Paige con su sobrino y Piper que esta a punto de perder una hermana porque la va a matar con sus propias manos?
"PD: Gossip marujear? queda mejor en ingles." Ok… si mejor, poruqe no creo que la recuerde a esa palabra… aca seria chismear, chusmear.

hope master

Thanks "and i still think it's crazy as hell" Almost as crazy as Wyatt? But in a nice crazy kind of way.

Starry Sky 44

Thanks!" Wolfgang Puck is a famous chef..my grandparents are obsessed with his brand of soup :)" Ohh hehehe I bet that was someone you were really hoping you would see… almost as much as Drew… right?

"The premonition Phoebe had was so heartbreaking! I was crying. " Ohhh I am sorry…Gua sings to you "I never meant to hurt… I never meant to make you cry…" (Gua is me btw)

"And I always thought Chris was stronger, but maybe that's because Chris is my favorite and I'm a little biased :) "So true… if you see… that happens in all my fictions… I always thought that should be their dynamics…and it is in all my stories; Wyatt is powerful, well built and usually a very emotional; impetuous and sensitive guy (I mean I always guessed he had to be very sensitive to get turned by Gideon), and Chris is always the one with the strongest will, resilient, the one that "holds the fort" if you catch my drift. So I am glad you like it.

"I have a question though (sorry if it sounds stupid..). "I LOVEEEEEEEE questions and I love explaining everything about my fics… cuz almost every Word has a reason… so please… ask anything you want! And don't say its stupid.

"Did Wyatt know that Chris was going back to the past to save him? Just wondering…" If you are asking if when Pryanna died he knew Chris was going to the past to save him, the answer is no… Chris didn't even know he was going to go to the past by the time Pry died…they started planning it later. If your next question is then Why did he say "Don't get killed trying to save me, I am not worth it" or something like that. Because even if he wasn't planning the trip to the future yet, he was doing other sort of stuff to save him, he tried a lot of other options before coming back to the past.

If your question is if he knew by the time he killed Bianca, then yes… Bianca told him where Chris was and why.

Does that satisfy your curiosity? I hope it does… if not… please… ask me… I love questions.

Karen

Thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss… here is more, hope you like it.

Altaira

"Heh heh! I'd love to join. And I'm sure I know a few people who would be worthy. " The more the merrier!

People keep on reading our msgs to each other and asking me if they can join! We are getting so popular… and I never thought people read so much what I had to say to others… what can I say… I am such a great writer that ppl wanna even read all junk babble I write down here… and I am so humble my fingers should be cut off, so I learn that I can't type such things!

""can i join? i have to stop reading some fics in school cuz i get too emotional and my friends start looking at me like i have lost my mind! and its embarrasing to cry in school over a story! at home its ok but not in school!

anyways wonderful job update soon!

Jade"" That is Jade's petition to join.

"a CTH to start the online help group would be awsome! lol, the newest member's experience! that's so funny she's more than welcome - this is just too funny!" And this is Sparkling Cherrie's Welcoming message.

What do you say… we let Jade join? we are also thinking on joining once a month in Wyatt's maximum security palace, where he keeps Leo… we'll bring back Pryanna to feed us and we'll just wait there to see if Chris comes and visit his father… how does it sound? Do you have any problem with time traveling? Hehehe.

Thanks " I managed to keep my estatic jumping to a minimum today. I'll do it with the door locked later." We are proud of you…from all parts of the globe were sending you good vibes to accomplish your task. (doesn't it feels like a huge group? All parts of the world… but Sparkling is in the UK… I am in South America… I can assume you are from the US…a very international group, you see?)

phoebe turner

THANKSSSSSSSSSSSSS I hope you keep on liking it.

midnite-magic

"I don't understand how you can pump out brilliant chapter after brilliant chapter. Oh well, It keeps me wanting more every time!" OHHHHHHHH that's like the sweetest thing ever! So sweet I have a really hard time believing it…but I am glad you like it!