If you don't like story's that couple original characters with existing characters then don't read this, personally I love that and do it in this story... this story may have brief sex-ness but is not explicit .. atleast not very much.
I prefer writing in script format because.. I don't know I just do .. I really don't care about grammar or spelling errors infact my grammar skills are quite horrible.. so if you're a grammar freak reading this would probably give you a heart attack.
I don't really care about critique or anything ike that and I definitely don't want to hear about grammar or spelling errors since like I said I already warned you and don't really care about my story being in your opinion "perfect'... it's already perfect in my opinion that's why it's my story .. so .. no critique or tips.. I don't need them .. or want them.
And please honor the whole if you can't say anything nice.. don't say anything at all thing.. .I'd appreciate that so much.
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Oh yes . .and about the story itself, it revolves around my original character Sakura who comes from a demon cat species that I created myself.. she in her travels ends up with Sesshoumaru and ends up remaining with him... eventually of course falling in love though I wonder ... does Sesshoumaru fall in love with her as well...? As if the Great Lord Sesshoumaru would admit such a thing.. or as Jaken would say .. why would he fall in love with such a pathetic little cat? scoffs... so anyway .. enjoy.
I'd have to say it gets more detailed as you go along.. chapter 1 is quite short much to my shock.. I began writing this story a long while ago and just began writing more.. it's up to chapter 15 right now (07/01/05) which I JUST finished writing after not writing for this story for months.
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The scene comes into view as Rin wanders through the forest in search of something, she pauses noticing a pretty flower and leans down to pick it, glancing off to the side as she hear's the sounds of human boys her age chasing after something. .. her eye's widen as she see's a small black cat like creature weakingly coming towards her.
Rin: Oh no!
She says rushing over to it, pausing as it stops and glares at her. .it's red eye's beginning to glow. .. she looks up as the boys her age reach them and stop.
Boy: Hey get away from that cat!
Boy 2: Yeah we're going to kill it!
Rin: Why are you going to kill it?
Boy 3: Cuz its a deeemon duuh.
Rin: Well that's a stupid reason.
She says and leans down and reaches out her hand to it.
Rin: I won't let them hurt you.. it's alright.. come here.
She says softly, the cat looks at her for a moment, the silver gem on it's forehead shining in the sunlight, while it's long tail with the gloing red ball swishes back and forth and it steps forward.
Boy: You'll be sorry!
He says and raises a rock, his eye's widening as Sesshoumaru comes up behind her.. pausing a few feet behind her. Rin glances back curiously noticing him and smiles, looking back to the boys as she hear's them screaming and running off in fear.
Rin: these boys were going to hurt this injured demon kitty, Lord Sesshoumaru. . .but I saved it..
She says proudly and looks down to the cat now in her arms.
Rin: I won't let anybody hurt you I promise.
She says and then looks up to Sesshoumaru with hopeful eye's.
Rin: Is it alright if I keep it, Lord Sesshoumaru..? Atleast until it is alright to go off on it's own.
Sesshoumaru: do as you wish.
He says and then turns and begins walking away. Rin giggles and smiles and begins following after him.
The scene changes to Inuyasha who paces annoyedly around Kaede's village mumbling to himself, Sango glances out the door silently watching him as he groans and storms off into the distance.
Sango: He is going to go for her now.
Shippou: I wonder what's taking her, she was supposed to be back an hour ago.
Sango sighs.
Sango: And you know Inuyasha.. he's so impatient.
Shippou nods.
He says the scene changing as Inuyasha leaps out of the well into Kagome's time and storms up to the house walking right into the kitchen, her mother looks up curiously.
Mother: Oh why it's you Inuyash.
Inuyasha: Yeah, hi.
He says glancing down as Sota comes in curiously.
Sota: Oh! Inuyasha!
Inuyasha: Hey.
Sota: Are you here for my sister? she's upstairs being lazy
Inuyasha: She's asleep isn't she?
He asks rolling his eye's as Sota nods. Inuyasha shakes his head and walks passed him storming up the stairs and into her room, ready to give her a piece of his mind he pauses as he see's her asleep his eye's widening slightly.. .a small smile creeping over his face for a moment as he turns and sits down against the bed on the floor.
Inuyasha: I'll just wait here until she wakes up ..
He says softly within his mind... as he sits there silently.