Because of you Chapter 2: Detention, a harry potter fanfic

"A ball? In our school we have fun dances!" Brittany

"Not like that here." Max answered "here its all formal."

"No in our school, remember Christmas break you came in that cute miniskirt and tube top and we danced until 3 in the morning"

"And Tom was so mad because you got home late" Brittany added laughing but then suddenly realizing she had said his name "Sorry" She said

"Its fine, I'm not very hungry anymore I'm heading up to bed goodnight guys." Max said and just left.

"What was that about?" Harry asked

"Nothing private matter, so Harry as in Harry potter great wizard who's suppose to defeat lord Voldemort." Brittany said softly

"Yep guess that's me." Harry answered

"So Hermione and Ron the 2 sidekicks" Daniel said smiling and they all looked confused

"Our parents are in the order… the American branch and so are we in America you can join the order after year 4 so we know a lot about you." Brittany whispered to them.

"So unfair, we should be allowed to." Ron said

"Not like we do much just observe and learn we can't go out with them until 7th year." Daniel said

"I think I better go and talk to Max see you all at breakfast tomorrow or actually at the common room I mean we do all sleep together as were all in the same group right?" Brittany asked

"Yes of course but the girls and boys are separated." Hermione said

"That sucks!" Brittany said, "I'm sure we can find a way around it."

"We always do" Daniel said

"Well I'm off see you guys later." Brittany said. Suddenly realizing she had no idea where to go she stopped and looked around for someone to ask.

"Lost?" Ron asked smiling

"Yeah this school, so big, can you help me?"

"Yeah I was heading there now anyways I'll show you, but you must know never to tell someone who isn't in your house where the common room is or the password." Ron said

"Of course same rules in American academy basically, so what is the password?"

"Right now its Dragons blood but it changes regularly, here we are" Ron said reaching the portrait of the fat lady.

"She's our entrance?" Brittany asked breathing deeply " god I got to quit smoking killing me."

"Dragons blood." Ron said and they walked in. Brittany was shocked it was beautiful.

"Wow!" Brittany said, "So I'm getting gold and red are our colors I do have a cute gold tube top and red miniskirt I should wear it tomorrow. What are the rules about muggle wear here?"

"Rules well in class robes have to be worn but out of class anything you'd like I guess." Ron answered

"Great so thank I'm up to the girls dormitory I'm beat but goodnight." Brittany said then she turned to Ron and kissed him on the cheek. She smiled and headed up stairs.

Ron was so happy Brittany was one of the most gorges girls he had ever seen. Blond blue eyes and tall she was great.

Girls Dormitory

"So, Max I see the Gryffindor colors are red and gold I have the cutest outfit for tomorrow but I think you should wear it I mean you would look so hot."

"Yeah." Max answered Dully unpacking her silk black Pajamas.

"I'm sorry really its just," But before Brittany could finish Max cut her off

"Don't be it's not you I'm still dealing with the shock I still sing Because of you to myself every night before I sleep."

"It's an amazing song! Does anyone here know about it?" Brittany asked

"No, I really never had friends here I was so busy with Tom, but now he's gone so I guess if we all become friends I can share it with them." Max said. "So what's this outfit?"

Breakfast

"Brittany! Come on girlfriend get down here we are all going to be late!" Daniel was screaming from the bottom stairs. Harry, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione were all waiting with him for Brittany and Max.

"Were coming!" Brittany said and as she walked down was wearing jeans and a white shirt that flared up.

"You look great." Ron said

"You don't look so bad either men in robes always." She said joking "Daniel nice jeans those the ones form express?"

"Yeah of course I love this they look like zebra stripes and my tight black shirt got to show off" Daniel smiled

"Where's Max?" Hermione asked

"Max you look great get down here!" Brittany Yelled and then Max walked down the stairs. She was wearing a red mini skirt and a gold tube top with gold stiletto heals and had her hair down and smooth and her makeup done.

"So?" Max asked

"Hot girl! If I were straight I'd snag you." Smiled Daniel

"Yeah you look great! Who did your makeup its so beautiful but natural." Hermione said

"She did it," Brittany said "Back at home this is our normal cloths and makeup. So we get our schedules at breakfast?"

"Yeah," Ron said

"Can't wait for classes here I love potions and transfiguration." Brittany said

"Potions?" Ron asked, "The teacher here is well quite an ass and hates Gryffindors!"

"Hasn't Max told you anything?" laughed Ginny

"Not really." Brittany said

"Yeah I don't really talk about school." Max said

"Well we best be off, can't wait for everyone to see how you really are now that were here." Brittany said

Breakfast

As the gang walked in whispers were heard all around the hall as no one had ever seen Max dress that way. Most people had never really even seen Max even though it was her 6th year. The gang sat down and Max, Brittany and Daniel all joined them as if they had been friends forever.

"I can tell those two American transfers will be trouble," sneered Snape

"Why do you say that?" Dumbledore asked

"Look at the muggle way they dress, and Max a very quiet yet brilliant student dressing like well like a whore." Snape said though as he looked he quite liked the way she dressed. Her long legs looked beautiful and you could slightly see she was wearing black underwear and her tube top hid nothing she was absolutely beautiful. Not that it meant anything, she was hath his age and a student but he was a man and allowed to look.

"I do not think so, I think it good for Max to have friends. I was told that her guardian dies in the beginning of the summer. I do not know exactly but it seemed he was very sick."

"She doesn't appear to be grieving. Stupid Gryffindor." Snape said

"So what classes do we have?" Brittany asked

"Transfigurations, then Lunch after lunch is potions and charms and that's all for today." Max said

"3 classes?" Harry asked

"Yeah," Ron said

"Lucky, I have 4 classes but at least only 1 with Slytherin." Ginny said

"No! We have 2 with Slytherin dammit and one with Ravenclaw." Ron said

"We heard about this at the American academy here two of the houses are rivals not like that in America. I mean we all are rivals but in a healthy way no big one group against another." Daniel said

"Well we better go to our first class," Max said "I'm going to put my robe over my cloths in the bathroom and head to class coming?"

"Of course we are." Brittany said as Daniel followed.

"Daniel to the girls bathroom?" Harry asked

"Well in my old school it was the only bathroom I would use plus I know the best hair and makeup charms then anyone the girls love me." Daniel said laughing

"He's one of the girls" winked Brittany.

After Transfiguration, which went, all around well as all 3 of them were good in that subject. Then was lunch and then potions

Potions

Max Brittany and Daniel all sat together with Max in the middle. He had asked them to brew a nexus potion, which connects people.

Max was an excellent at this class and loved potions more then most people knew. She also had a little crush on the potions master. As most people found him sarcastic and cruel she saw him as dark handsome mysterious and totally kissable. She knew she never had a chance but it couldn't hurt to think.

"So Max, like Professor Snape so you?" Brittany whispered

"No! Where would you get that idea from?" Max asked

"I know you better then anyone, why don't you go for it he's not so bad looking."

"He is my teacher you know and twice my age and we would be breaking about a dozen laws."

"No! Actually in old fashion schools as this one student teacher relationships are not against the rules. And who cares about the age difference?"

"Well you like Ron, I saw the way you looked at him." Max said back smiling

"Well I'll get him, now we just have to find someone for Daniel." Brittany said

"I think I know who." Max said pointing to a blond boy with pale face tall and skinny. "That's Draco Malfoy, very rich, cute, Slytherin, and Gay. But"

"But what?" Brittany asked

"But one he is in Slytherin and very evil…not going to be very excepted two he's not openly gay though everyone knows it." Max said

"Well we can first be friends and work our way up." Daniel said

"What is all this chattering while brewing a very complicated potion?" Snape hissed at the 3

"The potion is done Professor Snape," Max sneered at him in a very Slytherin quality.

"It's supposed to be silver." He said, as the 3 looked down it were silver.

"It is silver." Max said trying to keep her cool she never did well with people starting up with her and usually the quiet one never had had problems before now.

"Not enough do it again."

"No it's perfect I spent the whole class doing this you jerk!" Max didn't mean to she really didn't but he was rude to her and her friends for no reason. She had seen it be done to many Gryffindors but she thought maybe they had deserved it but she definitely hadn't. Brittany and Daniel were smiling at Max but Snape looked so mad.

"Detention tonight after dinner, 7 o'clock be here." He snapped and Max had gotten her first detention… This should be interesting she thought to herself.

Dinner

I can't believe first day of classes you already have detention!" Ginny said, hearing about this detention.

"Well, he just got me so mad and was being such a jerk." Max said

"That's our girl doesn't take anything from anyone." Brittany said

"Yeah back in our neighborhood no one messed with her, no one dared to. Except for…" Daniel said stopping himself

"Except for tom," Max said "They should know I mean they are my friends now."

"Know what?" Hermione asked

"Tom was my guardian," Max said "My parents died when I was 10 and then I was entrusted with Tom."

"But if he was your guardian why do you not like to talk about him?" Harry asked

"Well Tom was very sick he had cancer a rage muggle disease and he didn't believe in magic so he never wanted magical help. He was very sick and treated me with no respect. He died in my arms and I held him at nights when he cried." Max said looking as if she were about to cry

"Max wrote an incredible song about it she's a great singer."

"Will you sing it to us?" Ginny asked

"You should sing it now!" Ron said, "Today and tomorrow are karaoke dinners, new idea of Dumbledore. You could save us from listening to those girls try to sing the 3 sister song."

"I couldn't," Max, said

"Max," Brittany suddenly said very seriously "This is your chance to sing these words out loud I think it will help you."

"Me too." Daniel said

"Fine." Max said as she got up and wrote her name on a list she was next as not many people were brae enough to sing.

"Ahh Ms. Guevara you are next." Dumbledore said and Max got on stage and lightly started to sing. Her voice was smooth and loud but sharp and you could hear every word of her song.

"I will not make the same mistakes that you did
I will not let myself
Cause my heart so much misery
I will not break the way you did,
You fell so hard
I've learned the hard way
To never let it get that far

Because of you
I never stray too far from the sidewalk
Because of you
I learned to play on the safe side so I don't get hurt
Because of you
I find it hard to trust not only me, but everyone around me
Because of you
I am afraid

I lose my way
And it's not too long before you point it out
I cannot cry
Because you know that's weakness in your eyes
I'm forced to fake
A smile, a laugh everyday of my life
My heart can't possibly break
When it wasn't even whole to start with

I watched you die
I heard you cry every night in your sleep
I was so young
You should have known better than to lean on me
You never thought of anyone else
You just saw your pain
And now I cry in the middle of the night
For the same damn thing

Because of you
I never stray too far from the sidewalk
Because of you
I learned to play on the safe side so I don't get hurt
Because of you
I try my hardest just to forget everything
Because of you
I don't know how to let anyone else in
Because of you
I'm ashamed of my life because it's empty
Because of you
I am afraid

Because of you
Because of you"

Everyone clapped and Max was smiling but it hurt so much to sing that song to think about Tom. Suddenly she couldn't stop herself tears were rolling down her eyes and she ran out of the dining hall. She kept running not really thinking where to go but she had to go somewhere. Suddenly she ended up in the dungeons and she sat on the floor of a hallways and just thought.

"That was a lovely song," Dumbledore said

"Yes and she wrote it herself I heard." McGonagall added

"It was adequate but obviously a dramatic teenager song." Snape said though as he thought more into it what if the song had a deeper meaning. Her guardian who had just died could it be he had treated her badly made her trust him and take care of him at such a young age for her and then die. He worried.

"Do you think Max is ok?" Hermione asked

"Yeah she just needed that, to let it out and all." Brittany said

"Yeah we'll see her at the common room tonight I'm sure she'll be better then." Daniel added

Max sat there thinking for what seemed like hours and couldn't move. She took off her robe and sat on it so she wouldn't get dirty. She had her mini skirt and tube top still on. She realized every word of her song was true. She couldn't trust her friends, teachers, anyone not even herself. She hated her life and she had to fake being happy all the time. She didn't know what to do. Also why did she end up in the dungeons? Maybe she was a true Slytherin at heart or maybe it was because a certain professor lived down here. Her feeling for Professor Snape had grown over the years into more then a crush but into lust. She thought about him and ironically as she did she heard someone coming down. Dinner must be over she thought I should get back to my common room. She didn't want to get up but she had to so she slowly got up and as she did she saw whom it was she heard.

"Professor," Max said

"Ms. Guevara what are you doing in the dungeons?" Snape asked noticing her attire up close it was even more beautiful then from afar.

"Nothing I like it down here just came here to think." She said noticing he was checking her out. She was happy about it.

"Well you do have detention with me." He said

"Right, well I'm here and its," looking at her watch "7 so right on time."

"Yes well come in." He said walking into the potions classroom. "You will be cleaning this by hand." He said showing her about 50 cauldrons.

"Fine anything else?" Max asked

"No, here is soap and a sponge enjoy." Snape said sarcastically. Max got on her knees and bend down to scrub the cauldrons. Scrubbing them she looked quite hot especially with her movements of going back and forth as she was bend down. O bloody hell why did she have to wear that. "I will be right back." Snape said leaving through a door behind her.

"He never makes noise," She whispered to herself wondering how he did it. After 20 cauldrons her hands were sore and she ran out of soap. She got up to get more soap and as she turned around the professor was right there in front of her. Her chest was touching his chest and she looked right into his eyes.

I had just come back when this girl had to stand up and go right into me. Her body against mine feels so good. Snape thought why isn't she moving I should really move but she is so beautiful.

Why isn't he moving? She asked herself she thought he hater her but he seemed different now. He was looking into her eyes and she was looking into his. His eyes looking amazing and his hair suddenly without realizing it her hand put itself on the back of his head and she ran her fingers thorough his hair then suddenly they kissed. At first it was slow but then passionate. Snape was waiting for her to yell, scream, or hit him but she didn't. The kiss continued and his hands where at her waist moved to her back bringing her closer. Suddenly they were on the desk he was on top. There movements were passionate and as he was unbuttoning his robe she unzipped her skirt. Then she slid her tube top down and she was wearing black underwear and a black bra. Professor Snape managed to get out of his robes and only had boxers on. Then with a flick of his wand the desk turned into a bed. They kissed more and slid off all there cloths. As she felt his warm skin touching hers she was in heaven. He rubbed against her and finally was in her. She moaned in ecstasy and he kissed her more passionately. Finally as both climaxed they fell to opposite sides of the bed.

"You should get back to your common room," Snape said, "Before your friends go looking for you."

"I had detention remember, they won't be looking for me." Max said leaning in to kiss him

"No, get dressed." Snape said. She hadn't understood didn't he feel what she felt for him? Didn't he feel anything at all?