Chp 2
well this is chapter 2. If you could give me constructional criticism to improve this ff, that'd be swell. THANX!
As Robin stared at disbelief at what had just happened he realized he was hungry.
Listening to his stomach growl, he decided to see if there were any of Starfire's leftover
Zorkaberry Ribs left. He walked back to the elevator and rose to the kitchen. As he was
waiting he started thinking about what in the hell he would do. Well, I do need to brush
up on my triple back flip disc explosion attack. When he got there he saw that Starfire had
beaten him to the ribs. "Oh man" Robin thought. Raven was reading a book and when she
saw him come from the elevator, she sort of blushed deep down. She of course never felt
it with all her powers and everything, but she had a feeling about it but couldn't quite
grasp it. "What friend Robin?" Starfire said. "Oh nothing Star." Robin replied. "Just
hungry" "Well Cyborg ate the ribs for breakfast and I'm eating Jam." Starfire said wiping
the purple sauce of her mouth. " I too am still hungry." " How bout' you Raven?" Robin
asked. "Are you hungry?" Raven was about to say no when her stomach growled fiercely.
She hadn't really eaten in 2 days. " "Yeah I guess I am." Raven replied shutting her book.
" Well we don't have anything to eat." Robin said glumly. "Hey what is this?" Starfire
said, when she spotted 3 70-pound Steaks. " Food.." Robin said hungrily. Under normal
circumstances Raven usually didn't eat too much Meat, but in this case she would eat her
book if she had to. "Wait" Robin said this is "Cyborg's food." "He wouldn't mind Raven
said hungrily." "Your right, he is gonna be gone for a week." Robin replied. "Friends we
have found lunch!" Starfire said and proceeded to eat it with her fork and knife. "We'd
better eat some too before she eats it all" Raven mumbled sarcastically. "I'm game"
Robin said. There was silence as Robin and Raven got their own knives and forks and
started feasting on the 50-pound Steaks. "How does he do it?" Robin said dropping the
silverware and relaxing his head at the top of the chair. Robin had eaten 10 pounds, as
had the other girls. "Amazing, Raven said." " I wonder if he had put something in these
steaks to make us full without eating a lot." Starfire said." " Well whatever the case we
had better save these for the next 7 days." "Why?" both girls said in unison. " BB and
Cyborg are doing an experiment in the wilderness, and they've locked down the tower, as
a safety protocol for the experiment." Robin said. "Oh" the girls said in unison. "Well,
Raven it's your turn to wash the dishes, I'll be in my room taking a nap." Robin said to the
girls as he walked away. The Door closed with a silent hiss. Starfire yawned and went
over to their monster TV, and Raven used her powers to clean up the dishes in less than 5
minutes. Raven also said to Starfire, "I'll be in my room." Then walked out the same door
as Robin. However as Starfire was watching a fungus show, a forgotten sign lay below
the table saying: Danger! Hormone project in these steaks. Please do not eat steaks.
THANX! Cyborg. Robin Fell onto his bed and was fast asleep in less than 2 minutes.
Little did he know what was going on inside him… Robin was sleeping a
dreamless sleep when suddenly he landed in a theater watching a romance film. His hand
was around something and he didn't know what. Someone was creeping closer to him,
and he didn't really like it. As Robin turned his head his face froze. Raven was leaning on
his shoulder wearing her uniform except without the cloak. She rested her head on his
shoulder and was smiling. Suddenly he didn't know what he was doing. He pulled her
face toward his, and………. Robin Suddenly shot up from bed gasping for breath.
Well, well, well it seems as if something was wrong with those steaks. It would help if got some reviews either saying, you hate it, ya like it, or if you have constructional criticism. I'll be updating every day (except when I have a big test to study for.) Please Review! Thanks!