Kaede had tried to help me but how can you help someone who has witnessed and held the dead bodies of her friends? When someone has no will to live it is incredibly hard to save them and I was too far gone.
So here I am dying . . .committing suicide if you want to get technical. My life was slipping between my fingers quickly now.
"I love you Mom, Grandpa, Souta... please don't worry about me... I'll look over you"
Dark spots were staring to cloud my vision and I could feel my soul slipping from my body.
"Good-bye"
With that final word she let the memories of her life fade and drift away with the wind, and the darkness of the unknown consumed her.
Thump-Th..um..p
sad ending i know...but i like it...tell me what y'all think...does it flow properly?