It begins..
It is the collapse..
Everything you know..
Everything will change..
Everything will fall apart..
Why?
Because Mesuinu will ALWAYS find a way to side track the storyline!
That's right, I, Mesuinu, daughter of the Mazoku, Xellos, and some woman I have yet to discover who she is, will always manage to successfully delay the story from developing into maturity!
Why?
Because..
I can.
And because..
It's fun!
Now then, to address some reviews!
Review of reviews!
Why didn't I think of it before?
The first review for this series comes from Alys'Culdil'Baranlote.
Congratulations to Alys'Culdil'Baranlote for being the first to review this fanfic!
Much thanks to your patron on behalf of me and Tsumira from me!
She reviewed the first chapter saying that it was fantastic and how similar I was to Xellos-papa.
Alys'Culdil'Baranlote, is a regular patron of this fanfic so much applause goes out to her for her eternal and unwavering devotion even should the story and plot go astray and I take over to type up perpetual nonsense.everyone deserves a fan like her!
Okay, on to the second review.
The second review is from Tsumira's real life friend, nightsiren02.
Her "sis" often bugs her irl to update her fics, and thus does not usually review them online.
Her review is of chapter two requesting longer chapters and to update.
The third review, the second review of Alys'Culdil'Baranlote, agrees with nightsiren02, who by the way, is the only nightsiren ON fanfiction.net
By the fourth review, by loyal patron Alys'Culdil'Baranlote, she starts to only slightly regret the request for longer chapters. Naturally, she read my 100 page long review and summary of the previous chapters and series.
It was really a bunch of nonsense, I mean, I wasn't THAT great.
However, as mentioned earlier, she remains devoted.
Tsumira - Like Excel to Ilpallazo-sama!
Mesuinu - Don't interrupt! I'm on a roll here!
Now then on to the fifth review.
Again, it's by Alys'Culdil'Baranlote.
She finds that my chapters are amusing, I'm really flattered.
Unfortunately, her hopes for the story getting back on track are dashed.
Oh well.
The sixth review is from, SURPISE; Silver Moon Rebel, and not our usual Alys'Culdil'Baranlote,
Tsumira - On an irrelevant note, my grandma use to call Sailor Moon, Silver Moon. I was also lured into watching and enjoying DBZ when she called me out saying that Silver Moon was on International Channel. That was the first time I saw a Super Saiyan.and it was Trunks. ^____^
Mesuinu - Ahem, I'm the one who interrupts!
SMR, believes that Tsumira needs help, I'd have to agree that she is quite a mental case.
Tsumira - And I suppose you're not?
Mesuinu - No, I've reached a higher state of enlightenment that one reaches after they've surpassed mental instability and insanity.
Tsumira - -.- I'd believe that.
Mesuinu - She seems to want smaller paragraphs, and thus I'd be happy to oblige by making sure that Tsumira's paragraphs are no longer than one word long!
Tsumira - No, no, and no. I admit, sometimes my paragraphs get too lengthy. The problem is trying to keep paragraphs with the same theme together without making it too long.
Mesuinu - She also thinks that a new paragraph should be started each time a new person talks. This is the first time anyone's said that in my series.
Tsumira - For me, it's the first time for my Slayers fics. I've get this complaint a lot in my other fics, and it really gets on my nerves. I try to write in story/novel format, and I don't recall ever reading novels in which every time a person speaks they get their own paragraph. This really ticks me off. Many of the fanfics I read don't do this, so why am I the few who get BUGGED TO SEPARATE PEOPLE SPEAKING?! I properly attribute when necessary. Do you fans really feel the need to have space? I got ticked off when ONE person complained about my spacing in an RPG I ran, and started a new paragraph for each sentence, HOWEVER, that's an RPG, and people get intimidated if it looks like a story or novel. However, many of the other famous rpgs I've seen are written in a story/novel format and I haven't so much as heard anyone complain about. However, rpgs are different from stories, this is a story. Fic is short for fiction, fiction is a type of story, and therefore a fanfic is a story written by a fan. This isn't a manga where you can look at pretty pictures and read the words in the bubbles. It's a story, and I'm getting sick of people trying to tell me how I should format my story. I don't mind people making suggestions, such as shorter paragraphs, re-check my grammar, or some sort of factual information, or suggesting ideas as to what should happen or where the story should go. Format.that's my job.
Mesuinu - Uh, I think maybe you should break up that BIG paragraph there.
Tsumira - Oh shut up Mesuinu, it's a rant. And to get back to ranting.
I attribute frequently, and when I don't, it should be obvious who's speaking. If you're a true fan, then you wouldn't be completely clueless every time you see something that isn't attributed.
I swear, if I did a fanfic that had only TWO characters from an anime, and all of their interactions and conversations were just between them, I'd STILL get complaints DEMANDING separate paragraphs for each time someone speaks.
Oh, and on another note, I'm going to look over the fanfics of my reviews who are making such requests and see how their fics are done. No need for hypocrites.
I'll start with Silver Moon Rebel. I'm glad that your review started off with an apology, and I understand that you had no malice towards me. Please understand, that chapter with all the reviews and summaries and uncut versions was a gag chapter. It's not part of the story, nor anything else Mesuinu writes. You could have skipped it. Only hard-core fans would read it, and you're not that fan. I'm sorry if it was confusing, but Mesuinu's not the most understandable character. She's a complex character that even I can't understand sometimes.
Mesuinu - Are you ---
Tsumira - No I'm not.
I'm also glad that Silver Moon Rebel stated "that these are just suggestions and you don't have to change it if you don't want to." Most of the other reviewers who made similar requests took no heart in being kind, but they weren't necessarily cruel or mean, they simply didn't care either way.
I've looked over your fic, Dark Past, Long Forgotten. You have lengthy paragraphs in it, but nowhere near as often as mine can get. Looks good, I'll have to read it later and review.
Mesuinu - Are we ever going back to the story?
Tsumira - You actually want us to?
Mesuinu - Not really since you plan to marry me off.
Tsumira - Mesu, that's not for maybe 100 chapters to come. It's a teaser. Hopefully I'll have something, even if incomplete, to post next week. College is so stressful, time consuming.and my college is just plain evil.
Mesuinu - Can I blow it up then?
Tsumira - Go right ahead. The sooner the better. If I wasn't stuck at such an abusive and neglectful and hateful university, I might be a little more productive socially, economically, academically, and fanficually.
Well, enough about that, Mesuinu's Rampage and Tsumira's Rant is OVER.
THE END
It is the collapse..
Everything you know..
Everything will change..
Everything will fall apart..
Why?
Because Mesuinu will ALWAYS find a way to side track the storyline!
That's right, I, Mesuinu, daughter of the Mazoku, Xellos, and some woman I have yet to discover who she is, will always manage to successfully delay the story from developing into maturity!
Why?
Because..
I can.
And because..
It's fun!
Now then, to address some reviews!
Review of reviews!
Why didn't I think of it before?
The first review for this series comes from Alys'Culdil'Baranlote.
Congratulations to Alys'Culdil'Baranlote for being the first to review this fanfic!
Much thanks to your patron on behalf of me and Tsumira from me!
She reviewed the first chapter saying that it was fantastic and how similar I was to Xellos-papa.
Alys'Culdil'Baranlote, is a regular patron of this fanfic so much applause goes out to her for her eternal and unwavering devotion even should the story and plot go astray and I take over to type up perpetual nonsense.everyone deserves a fan like her!
Okay, on to the second review.
The second review is from Tsumira's real life friend, nightsiren02.
Her "sis" often bugs her irl to update her fics, and thus does not usually review them online.
Her review is of chapter two requesting longer chapters and to update.
The third review, the second review of Alys'Culdil'Baranlote, agrees with nightsiren02, who by the way, is the only nightsiren ON fanfiction.net
By the fourth review, by loyal patron Alys'Culdil'Baranlote, she starts to only slightly regret the request for longer chapters. Naturally, she read my 100 page long review and summary of the previous chapters and series.
It was really a bunch of nonsense, I mean, I wasn't THAT great.
However, as mentioned earlier, she remains devoted.
Tsumira - Like Excel to Ilpallazo-sama!
Mesuinu - Don't interrupt! I'm on a roll here!
Now then on to the fifth review.
Again, it's by Alys'Culdil'Baranlote.
She finds that my chapters are amusing, I'm really flattered.
Unfortunately, her hopes for the story getting back on track are dashed.
Oh well.
The sixth review is from, SURPISE; Silver Moon Rebel, and not our usual Alys'Culdil'Baranlote,
Tsumira - On an irrelevant note, my grandma use to call Sailor Moon, Silver Moon. I was also lured into watching and enjoying DBZ when she called me out saying that Silver Moon was on International Channel. That was the first time I saw a Super Saiyan.and it was Trunks. ^____^
Mesuinu - Ahem, I'm the one who interrupts!
SMR, believes that Tsumira needs help, I'd have to agree that she is quite a mental case.
Tsumira - And I suppose you're not?
Mesuinu - No, I've reached a higher state of enlightenment that one reaches after they've surpassed mental instability and insanity.
Tsumira - -.- I'd believe that.
Mesuinu - She seems to want smaller paragraphs, and thus I'd be happy to oblige by making sure that Tsumira's paragraphs are no longer than one word long!
Tsumira - No, no, and no. I admit, sometimes my paragraphs get too lengthy. The problem is trying to keep paragraphs with the same theme together without making it too long.
Mesuinu - She also thinks that a new paragraph should be started each time a new person talks. This is the first time anyone's said that in my series.
Tsumira - For me, it's the first time for my Slayers fics. I've get this complaint a lot in my other fics, and it really gets on my nerves. I try to write in story/novel format, and I don't recall ever reading novels in which every time a person speaks they get their own paragraph. This really ticks me off. Many of the fanfics I read don't do this, so why am I the few who get BUGGED TO SEPARATE PEOPLE SPEAKING?! I properly attribute when necessary. Do you fans really feel the need to have space? I got ticked off when ONE person complained about my spacing in an RPG I ran, and started a new paragraph for each sentence, HOWEVER, that's an RPG, and people get intimidated if it looks like a story or novel. However, many of the other famous rpgs I've seen are written in a story/novel format and I haven't so much as heard anyone complain about. However, rpgs are different from stories, this is a story. Fic is short for fiction, fiction is a type of story, and therefore a fanfic is a story written by a fan. This isn't a manga where you can look at pretty pictures and read the words in the bubbles. It's a story, and I'm getting sick of people trying to tell me how I should format my story. I don't mind people making suggestions, such as shorter paragraphs, re-check my grammar, or some sort of factual information, or suggesting ideas as to what should happen or where the story should go. Format.that's my job.
Mesuinu - Uh, I think maybe you should break up that BIG paragraph there.
Tsumira - Oh shut up Mesuinu, it's a rant. And to get back to ranting.
I attribute frequently, and when I don't, it should be obvious who's speaking. If you're a true fan, then you wouldn't be completely clueless every time you see something that isn't attributed.
I swear, if I did a fanfic that had only TWO characters from an anime, and all of their interactions and conversations were just between them, I'd STILL get complaints DEMANDING separate paragraphs for each time someone speaks.
Oh, and on another note, I'm going to look over the fanfics of my reviews who are making such requests and see how their fics are done. No need for hypocrites.
I'll start with Silver Moon Rebel. I'm glad that your review started off with an apology, and I understand that you had no malice towards me. Please understand, that chapter with all the reviews and summaries and uncut versions was a gag chapter. It's not part of the story, nor anything else Mesuinu writes. You could have skipped it. Only hard-core fans would read it, and you're not that fan. I'm sorry if it was confusing, but Mesuinu's not the most understandable character. She's a complex character that even I can't understand sometimes.
Mesuinu - Are you ---
Tsumira - No I'm not.
I'm also glad that Silver Moon Rebel stated "that these are just suggestions and you don't have to change it if you don't want to." Most of the other reviewers who made similar requests took no heart in being kind, but they weren't necessarily cruel or mean, they simply didn't care either way.
I've looked over your fic, Dark Past, Long Forgotten. You have lengthy paragraphs in it, but nowhere near as often as mine can get. Looks good, I'll have to read it later and review.
Mesuinu - Are we ever going back to the story?
Tsumira - You actually want us to?
Mesuinu - Not really since you plan to marry me off.
Tsumira - Mesu, that's not for maybe 100 chapters to come. It's a teaser. Hopefully I'll have something, even if incomplete, to post next week. College is so stressful, time consuming.and my college is just plain evil.
Mesuinu - Can I blow it up then?
Tsumira - Go right ahead. The sooner the better. If I wasn't stuck at such an abusive and neglectful and hateful university, I might be a little more productive socially, economically, academically, and fanficually.
Well, enough about that, Mesuinu's Rampage and Tsumira's Rant is OVER.
THE END