If only I Loved you More
Disclaimer: I dont own any of the characters in this story..execpt for Yuki! Back of girls! Just kidding..saddly, I dont own anyone .
Authors Note: Im going to try to update atleast once a week now, since I've alreay writen down the entire story. Does that sound okay with you all?
Also, I was wondering, do you all prefer longer, more detailed chapters, or shorter chapters? When I was writing it out on paper the chapters came out to be quite long, and I dont want to post the entire thing if no ones going to read it...
Oh! And thanks for all the reviews! I really appreciate them and Im glad to know that so many people like my story. I'll be replying to some of the reviews at the end of the chapter. Thanks!
Chapter 3
Stalkers and Cameras
"Thisss isss great!" Shuichi slurred, lifting his glass into the air and then plunking it back down on the table. Tatsuha forced himself not to laugh as he rested his chin in his palm. Ryuichi had promised to go to the zoo with him, if he did him the favor of accomanying Shuichi for the night. Of course, it was something he couldnt turn down. Still, he wondered why Shuichi hadnt asked Yuki.
"Ha ha! I think you've had enough to drink" Tatsuha laughed, wrapping an arm around Shuichi's shoulders to keep him from moving around so much. So far, no one had noticed that it was Shuichi of Bad Luck that was making all the racket, and if possible, he wanted to keep it that way. Tatsuha didnt feel like running from a mob today.
"Okay! Time to go home to Yuki!" He then said to Shuichi, since his attempt to calm the boy down hadnt worked. People were beginning to look, and one woman was even beginning to walk towards them!
Amazingly, Shuichi stopped bouncing about, and stared at Tatsuha. He looked distracted, but he looked none-the-less. "I dont wanna" he said, wrapping an arm around Tatsuha's neck. "I waaanna stay riiiiight-" he pointed at Tatsuha's chest "-here".
Okay. So the boy was really drunk. Tatsuha grinned. He was really drunk...and he looked like Ryuichi...what a great thing. "Okay, I wont make you go back to Yuki right now". Yuki was going to kill him for this. He helped Shuichi up and began to lead him towards the car. "Come on".
Why had he let Shuichi drink so much? He was so hard to move! The boy was like mush. He picked the boy up, to carry him over his shoulder, and Shuichi wrapped his legs around Tatsuha's waist, resting his arms over his shoulder, and pressing his face against the older males neck. He grummbled something, but Tatsuha ignored it.
He stopped at the car, and took out the keys. He glanced up as it began to rain. A flash went off. "Damn, just my luck. Lightning too" he muttered, opening the door to the back seat. He helped Shuichi in.
The pink haired teen gagged, and threw up all over the back seat. Tatsuha's lips curled. "Shu!" he growled, "My car!". He leaned into the back seat, and took off his shirt to use to clean the mess.
This is sick, he thought.
Another flash.
He then helped Shuichi out of his shirt, since he had thrown up all over it as well. Sick.
Another flash.
Once the mess was cleaned as best as it could be, he pushed Shuichi down gently. "Sleep". He sounded annoyed.
He rolled down the back seat windows. Hopefully, the air would help get rid of the smell until he could get it professionally cleaned. The things I do for you Ryu, he thought, closing his eyes.
Another flash.
Sighing, he went to the drivers seat, and began the drive to Yuki's house. He had told Shuichi he wouldnt make him go back to Yuki's, but he didnt want Shu throwing up all over his appartment.
Yuki glanced at his watch before unlocking the door and entering his house. It was late, nearly 10:30, and Shuichi had yet to show up. He had even missed the dinner that Yuki had promised to make him.
He had stood outside the house, smoking a cigarette, hoping to see the boy show up, but he never did, and now, he was just annoyed. How dare the kid stand him up. Was this pay back for not being there to rescue him when he needed him the most? No. Shuichi wasnt like that. Maybe something had gone wrong.
He took off his shoes, and began to walk towards the kitchen. He'd give Tohma a call and see if maybe Shuichi was still at the N-G building. As he neared the kitchen, he squinted. A camera rested on the counter.
He reached out to grab it, but never managed to. A sharp pain filled the back of his head as he tumbled to the ground. His vision blurred as he reached back and grabbed the back of his head. "Shuichi" he whispered.
Normally, whenever he was in some sort of trouble, the boy bursted through the wall-never the door- to rescue him...but why was his wall still whole?
He began to stand, when another blow came to the back of his head. He tumbled down once more as things began to grow black. The last thing he saw, was the bright flash of a camera, and a single word was uttered.
"Kitzawa"
Review Replies
Kitty in the Box, Im glad you liked the comment by Shu. Later on in the story, you'll see he really doesnt have anyone to fall back on...
pikapikaryuchan, Beware for more plot twists in up-coming chapters Laughs evily
Guren, Your review for chapter one didnt come in until after I loaded the chapter, so I couldnt have thanked you for it. Thanks for reviewing though! Im glad you like the story.
Syaoran is kawaii, Yuki doesnt care about Shuichi! He cares about me and only me! Just kidding. Yeah, in this story, Yuki's emotions will be put to the test, and how he really feels will be revealed...
DarkMetalAngel of Destruction, Alot of people hurt Shuichi in this fic...looks like alot of people will have hell to pay..
Amanda, it was just your browser? anime fall I spent forever trying to figure out what was wrong, and couldnt find anything! Thanks for the review though:)
uncertainty, Heres your update!
A/N: Stay tuned for the next chapter...
