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Chapter 3 Big red pools of sexy!
My head hurt so badly it was like someone cracked my skull in two. The sun that was shining on my eyelids suddenly diminished causing me to open them, ever so slowly…
There was a little upside down boy staring back at me. He had mouse brown hair and matching chocolate pudding eyes.
"So, you aren't dead huh?" the little boy said, "My name is Hayden, what's your favorite species of duck?"
"Excuse me?" I asked groggily. What was a duck? More importantly where was I? I slowly sat up and tried to move my fin…….. What the hell? Where was my fin? Why did I have…GASP…legs? She tried to remember what had happened to her. Then Hayden spoke.
"Hey, you stay here ok?" he spoke quieter now, "I'll go get my brother he'll know what to do, Ok? Stay here" he edged away slowly as if not sure what to do next. Then he turned around really fast and ran towards a castle.
I hadn't even noticed it before. She remembered her castle. She started to recall small bits of her memory. Her father, the king. Her brother and the countess. Riding horses in a flowering meadow. Kissing someone (blonde?)….a ring…. Who was it that she was kissing? A frightening memory came rushing back… the man in the cape… That big black portal… That same blonde man running after me… Then nothing. She laid back down on the sand trying to remember what happened to her. She was a human. She finally remembered, oh my god am I naked! She looked down at… a flowing white dress? She was wearing a simple yet elegant off the shoulder style gown. It had a corset style middle and a flowy loose bottom. She looked at her new legs for a second time and realized that they had a bluish sheen to them. Even in human form she couldn't escape the blue fin that made her stand out so much in Atlantica, and her eyes that bright exotic green that all the women called gorgeous, did she still have those too? Her thoughts were interrupted by the two sets of footsteps coming acrossed the beach.
"Where is she Hayden? I don't see any…" he apparently saw me whoever he was.
" See I told you I wasn't lying! I told you there was a girl on the beach!" Hayden cried.
" Shut-up Hayden! Yeah ok you were right ok, I admit it." The strange voice was getting louder.
I opened my eyes to see the most gorgeous man (ok so one of the only Human men I've ever met) He had black hair that was shortish mediumish and tousled… like the blonde man? No his was longer. He had a golden creamy complexion similar to mine and was wearing leather pants and a loose white shirt. I slowly sat up and he stared at me with the strangest and hunkiest eyes. They were red. BIG RED POOLS OF SEXY! Not like maroon or a dull red, but a gorgeous piercing red that people in Atlantica would die for. (Everyone in Atlantica besides me has blue eyes) those eyes were staring right at me pouring into me like he might actually care. Then it was gone, they turned into a hard blank sheen of red that masked all feelings that had shone so openly before.
"Do you need help?" the man asked. He wasn't really a man man he looked to be about 17 or 18 at the oldest.
"What do you think?" I replied.
"Well, would you like to tell us what happened?" he asked. This guy was all about questions!
"For starters my name is Princess Skylar Odett," I spoke slow choosing my words carefully, "and 2 days ago I was a mermaid."
I was sooo going to be shipped off to the loony bin……….
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