Promise At Maidens Peek

by Ech0Ech0

OK IM SORRY EVRYONE! ok i was in eight grade when i wrote this, I WILL FIX IT! so pleez review it,ash and max doing some male bonding SRRY NOT A SLASH MABY ANOTHER ONE well ash promised misty he would go to Maidens peek but forgot so what will he

Pokemon Advance Battle:

Promise At Maidens Peek

Disclaimer: I don't own pokemon blah …blah… blah…blah… u know the rest(P.S. just skip all the NO's and go to the story it is exactly 1,000 NO's)

Okey this story took me about a month it will be done in different peoples POV but mostly Max's, MMAB (Max, May, and Brock's when it is them then I will use the word WE) , and Ash's point of view.

'…' thinking

"…"talking

Chapter :1 Nosey friends

MMAB P.O.V.

We where all walking along going through a woods to Ash's next gym battle. We where going by a lake we where all silent, except then Brock had to brake the silence.

Brock: "hay every one I know we had breakfast just a few hours ago but it say's hear in the guide that the next town isn't for another three hours away and it says here they have the fastest air port in all of Hoen but aney ways how about we fuel up by letting me cook."

Every one: "YES."

Ash and Max went to get the fire wood while May and Brock set up camp while

Max's P.O.V.

Ash and Max where getting wood. Max saw a funny peace of looking went to get the peace of wood but then …

Max: "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! OOOWWWWWW . (sniff, sniff) that HEEEEEERRRTT. M M M WAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAA AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH,"

Ash turned to see what had happened it turnes out that the funny looking wood was actually a weedel and it had stung max for pulling its tail.

Ash: "Its o.k. max just let me see it…"

Ash took a spray out his back pack treated the wound and then raped it in a bandage Max couldent help but notice that he had a Deep Thinking Almost in love look on his face "I wonder what he is thinking about"

Ash: "See isent that all better it was just a measly bug pokemon your all better now Mi… UH I meen …Max" (then he shook off a blush and told max)."I will just carry u back on my back o k good well that means I cant carry the wood so …(he reached down to his belt and held a pokeball then threw it ) Swellow I chose u …now I want u to take this back to Brock and May k now me and max will meet them back there soon".

Ash pick up Max as his pokemon flew away but Max couldent help but think that he was being a burden.

Max: "I m sorry I am being a burden on u Ash i should have known better and please dont hate me."

Ash: "...Hah u say something max ?"

Max: 'He is in a happy mood and why has he been spacing out ever since i got infected ...waite OH NO.' "ASH WHAT IF THE WOUND IS INFECTED I M GOING TO DIE CAUSE THERE ISENT A DOCTOR FOR THREE HOURS AWAY. WWWWWAAAAHHHHH!"

Ash: "It's o k Max that spray will stop the weedles poison. A friend gave it to me along with another gift and becides it was from a friend who dispised bug pokemon so I am confedent it will stop the poison she was always over protective of me...I MEAN ABOUTBUG POKEMON ha ha ha."

Max: 'Hhhhmmmm what was all that all about wait was he talking about that girl named Misty wait if they like each other Ash might not like me aney more' "Hay Ash uummm do u like hanging around with me? um if you don't I will understand… an-…"

Ash: "Of curse I do you r like a younger brother I never had." "O K the only bad part is that may is now like the younger sister I never had it's a good thing Brock is here to even it out. HAHA"

Max: "So u want to pass the time it's going to be a while?"

Ash: "Yeah shore…You have something in mind hhhhhmmmm" Ash Seid suspicious.

Max: "Well yeah I do promise u will express your feelings all through ok"

Ash: " O K" he seid suspicious Agin.

Max: "And to make shour you tell tell me the truth … I promise I will not tell Brock and May…(a few moments of silent pass.) sooo who… do… you… Have A Crush On is it Malory."

Ash: " Could be (he seid cool-ly )"

Max: " Well is it May."

Ash: " Might be (he seid flatly)"

Max: " Is it that gir Brock mentioned her name was Duplica"

Ash: "What do u think"

Max: 'ash is taking this seriously maybe I should quit while I m ahead … or not I think I will push my Luck. It could only be…' " Could it be that MISTY girl hhhmmmm…"

Ash looked like he had seen a ghost, he slowed down his pace, and then he got a bright shade of red.

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(read from here)And times all those No's by one thousand ok"

Max just nodded but too bad for Ash they where at camp when he finished so May and Brock where suspicious then Ash had seid something so Max would know he could always trust him to tell the truth.

Ash: " All that no means the oppsit I actuaitly do O K."

MMAB P.O.V.

May and Brock just stood their stunned to actually think that Ash and Max where having a fight. Brock was going to do the Brock thing and get boath sides of the story.

Brock: "ok ok ok what happened so tell me the hole story so we can be all calm."

Ash / Max: "NO. AND IT'S NONE OF YOUR BISENISS SO SHUTUP." They seid in unison.

They looked at each other and started laughing.

May: " What is so funny and Max what happened to your leg."

Well they explained that Max had gotten stung by a weedel but they wouldn't tell what they where talking about to pass the time.

Half an hour later

May: " What do you think happened to make them get so close." She seid looking at Max and Ash talking and laughing.

Brock: " I don't know but it seems to have brought them closer … but I still want to know what happened for them to have Ash screem like that … hhhmmmm… because he oinly use to yell like that to Misty I mean he dosent even yell at you like that. He has even gotten more kind over his journey last time we saw Misty he didn't even yell at her but I bet if she had come with us they would have all of us getting a headache even Max. hhhmmm."

May: "I don't care what you say I want to know what is going on.I am nosey and I know it. Ash has a secret and Max knows what it is I will pry it out of hi… … … OOOOOO LOOK A TENTACRUL." Ash and Max doing what they where doing and looked they all started to examine it then…

Max: " Well lets see if memory serves me right that is a Tentacrule A water poison Pokemon loved by all water collector pokemon trainers."

Ash: " OK then pokeball go …"

Ash threw a poke ball and cought the pokemon every one looked in AWE then…

May: "Ash can I pleez have it ."

Ash: " Nope sorry I am going to give it to someone els I know they will love it."

May: "Oh yeah who is this person and when are you going to give it to that persion hhhhmmmmm."

Ash: "Well if you must know …(just then Ash got a little look in his face it seid Oh no I am going to die of embrassment and ?) … AAAHHHH LISTION TO ME RIGHT NOW Brock you go with May and collect our things and get ready to go I will go down to the stream and get our plates clean put out the fire then come back and pick up max since he still cant walk and if you aren't ready I will leave you got that."

Every one agreed at Ash's out burst then he left to go do what he seid he was going to do they all did what they where told then went back to Max and gave him glares that could make an Ursarang cower in fear.

Max: "Ha ha well what do you guy's want."

May: "Hhhmmm don't you think it is kind of strange that ash didn't make you do aney work…(she asked suspiciously ) … Other than the fact that your leg is heart I am shore you could have done some work and one more thing what is the secret you two are keeping."

Max: "I don't know what you are thinking about."

Brock: "That's a lie you and ash have gotten closer ever since you two got back from getting the fire wood and getting stung AND from that argument whats going on."

Max: "I CANT TELL YOU O. K. SO BACK OFF……… ASH HELP."

Just then Ash came out of the woods came rushing over to them grabed Max and ran up the hill.

Max P.O.V.

Ash: " You guy's better come or you will be left behind."

Max: "Ash why are you in such a rush… oh and before I forget Brock and May are getting a little suspicious now tell me what is going on."

Ash: "Ok ok ok I am suppose to meet well, you know who at Maidens peek for some thing special and as Brock seid earlier there is an air port in the next town and it is the fastest in Hoen remember and I am hoping she doesn't find out I forgot. See I had promised I would meet her but I forgot with my gym battles me and her had danced with each other so I told her before we went our separate ways that we would always meet there no matter what we would always meet their to make shore our friendship always lives. But since I forgot I got her this tentacrul because she loves them. But sh-…"

Max: "INOUFGH WITH THE BUTS AND JUST FINISH ALREADY…hhuuff huff hhhuuuufff sorry but I m just wondering why are you telling me this Ash."

Ash: "Well as you and I said your now my little brother k … well any way as I seid she doesn't know I like her more than a friend so I m going to tell her when we have our dance because for some strange reason last time we oinly danced once and that was with each other… now I am done." He seid as he saw Brock and May catching up but Max was so tutched by his words he started to cry but tried not to show it but it was to late May had saw him…

MMAB P.O.V.

May: " Ash what did you do to make Max cry" she yelled.

But to her surprise Max had answered instead of Ash.

Max: " SHUT UP ASH DIDENT DO ANEYTHING SO LEAV US ALONE …hmph."

She was so shocked she didn't have a comeback so they (as in they I meen Brock and May.) just stood back and then after a while talked.

May: "what is with those two."

Brock: "I don't know but I have a feeling we might find out soon."

Authors Note : Well tell me what do you think I will start to continue the story after I at least get 10 reviews in the next 1-2 weeks send me ideas I was thinking maybe Ash would run up to misty and just kiss her and it would last a very long time or they kiss at medians peek but ether way they will be embarrassed because Brock and May will see them any way just send me ideas.

P.S. and if u want count the dam NO's there are exactly 1,000 NO's

Have a nice day ok good.