Chapter 13 Girl of Snakes
Lucius Malfoy looked amused at the site of Ginny, who seemed to be covered in snakes with the candlelight flickering over her jewelry, making them seem alive, slythering over her.
She looked deliciously evil, wonderfully dark, alluringly beautiful.
He liked the way her mind worked, she seemed to be very ambitious and very intelligent.
A pity the girl was a Weasley, a great pity indeed.
Maybe he could fix that error somehow.....
He smirked as he studied the girl sitting next to his son across from him.
She kept stealing glances at Draco as if she was measuring an opponent....
Yes, this girl would provide fair sport for his son; she would not bend to his every whim, would keep him on his toes.
He looked at Narcissa, sitting beside him, remembered how she had proposed marriage to him....
Fearless, challenging, a true opponent.....
She had a lot in common with this girl.
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Narcissa looked at the girl, a girl who had more in common with her then she would ever know.
A girl who had more to loose then Narcissa ever had.....
Her face impassive she watched her son reach out and squeeze the girl's hand, the girl's eyes lighting up as she looked at Draco.
Her son's pale eyes saw everything she noticed, but his eyes did not shine as he watched the girl.....
No, he looked more like a predator.
A predator ready to strike.... and hit.
The girl thought she could gain control, thought she knew where she was heading.....
But Narcissa knew better, this girl was not heading for green meadows, no, she was heading for a spiderweb she could not see, she would not see untill she was so stuck in it she could not remove herself from it any longer.
Stuck, stuck with a large spider looming over her....
Feeling her husband's eyes on her, she suppressed a shudder.
How could she ever have believed she could control Lucius Malfoy?
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Ginny felt Narcissa's gaze on her, measuring her.
She looked at the silent, impassive face before her, a woman who had everything, yet seemed to show nothing.
No life, no feeling.....
She seemed to be nothing but an empty shell, yet her eyes did not seem to miss anything.
Like most things in this house, Narcissa Malfoy seemed to be but a facade hiding something much bigger, much complexer.
It was impossible to define what the woman was thinking, what she was feeling, if she was even feeling at all.....
If she was even truly alive.
Draco's hand was caressing hers, drawing her attention to him and she smiled.
He looked like a pale half-god come from the heavens to bewitch her with his attentions, to lure her into his web of artful seduction.
And he had succeeded, he had lured her to him, trapped her by his side.
Yet he had not trapped her mind, her thoughts were still her own.
Unbeknownst to her, Narcissa was thinking the very same thing across from her, only she drew much less comfort from the thought.
No, for Narcissa was stuck in the web of the spider and was full well realizing it. She knew she was stuck, knew she was not her own person any longer.
Life in a golden cage had seemed appealing from the outside, but now she was on the inside, it's contents seemed hollow, the riches seemed to dim before her eyes and the beauty around her had faded with the years.
Years that had passed by her slowly, while emotions pressed in around her, forcing her to see....
Lucius was hers, hers to hold, hers to love.
Yet his heart was elsewhere, could not be touched.
Had he ever truly had a heart at all?
He had given his life to Voldemort and left her here in the cage time and time again waiting for his return to her.
She had grown tired of shedding tears, had grown tired of pining over what she could not have....
A house filled with love.
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Draco silently watched his mother observe Virginia.
He saw the shimmer behind her eyelids, looking suspiciously like unshed tears.
He watched, yet he felt nothing.
Nothing at all, but still a connection was made; he knew what it had felt like to be left behind, to be forgotten.
For Narcissa had not been the only one left behind....
He looked at Virginia, her bright eyes on him as he had once observed his mother looking at his father, once, when he was still very young.
He knew his mother loved his father, loved him like nothing else in the world.
And she adored her son, loved him as well.
She had gambled to procure the love of Lucius for herself.
She had gambled and lost....
She would see herself in Virginia, as she had once been.
He knew deep inside that his father had once loved his mother, but somehow the tenderness and love had fled through a window no one had known was left open, until it was altogether gone.
But it had been too late, too late to change anything, too late for her.....
Too late to salvage any of the emotions his father had once possessed, just as it had been too late to save his own.
It was too late to save Virginia too, she had gone in too deep and now she was his.
He had never before let go of a possession willingly, nor would he start to now.
No..... she was his.
His to caress, his to touch..... his to play with as he saw fit.
She would be with him until the end.
The end of his interest in her, the end of their time together.
Whenever that would be.....
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Narcissa saw the flicker in her son's eyes, knew his intentions....
Knew there was nothing she could do to stop him.
She could only hope this girl would be luckier then she....
That she would have all she dreamed of....
And that the dream would not turn out to be as empty as her own heart was now....
Because having the dream within your grasp only to loose it...
It was far worse then to never be able to touch the dream at all.
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Lucius saw the tears in his wife's eyes, knew he had caused them....
Knew he would never be able to make her see....
She had fallen in love with whom she thought he was.
And he had done nothing about her assumptions....
Because he could not, would not let her go.
She had made him touch life, even love and he had warmed himself with her fire.
She was his link to a world of emotions he had not been able to touch before.
He looked at the red-head, snakes at her wrist and throat, a laugh bubbling from her lips.....
Saw his son's eyes flicker.....
Obviously, the boy was not immune to her threat, to her fire.
He would have to speak with him....
Soon.
Before someone else did.
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Behind a tapestry on the wall, someone was watching the four people.
Virginia and Draco, Narcissa and Lucius.
And she hated what she saw; a prelude of what was to come.
She would do anything in her might to save this girl from ruin, to have her listen to reason....
But she could not just walk up to her; the girl would never listen, would not want to hear.
How had such a sensible girl fallen in so deep?
How could she have forgotten to trow away the key to her heart?
Men like the Malfoy's were not for playing with....
Their lure was far too dangerous.
The girl should grab her money and go, make a run for it in the night....
The night she had been so eager to join.
Before they would realize how easy it was to make her binding permanent, to have her tied down for ever....
A girl of snakes, constricted untill she knew no more of the outside world.
A girl of snakes, bound forever to it's touch, it's caress, it's embrace....
The embrace of a snake in the darkness.
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End of Chapter 13; Will Ginny realize what is going on, will she catch on to the sceming going on around her? Find out next time.....
Disclaimer: Harry Potter is not mine..... *breaks out crying*
I want to thank SatansFlower, Serenade of the Sea, Chas (aka Aricos) and my anonymous beta-reader who wishes to remain anonymous and therefor shall be anonymous for beta-reading!
I also wanna thank Aricos for helping me with some of the poems :)
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I want to thank the following people for reviewing:
TrulyLovely: Thank you! Always happy to see happy reviewers ;)
Dukerbrown: Hi Megan, happy to see ya! Well, read ya that is ;)
Blood57: Thank you and yeah, I've got this whole thing with light and darkness and the different meaning of things.... Glad to see you gave it some thought....
Amber: Yup, you did hihi. Thanks; I'm always trying to let the emotional side of the story shine through, but sometimes it's hard to let it all fit. I'm not telling if the story's going to end happy, but I can tell there's going to be a sequel....
waterfairy-rose: Thanks! Yeah, I know; I'm mean for making you hang onto those clues.... Can't help it, I was born that way ;) And yeah, the Weasley's reaction is a difficult procedure, I'm still trying to envision their combined reaction. Of course they only know their little girl is the girlfriend of a Malfoy, but that'll be bad enough. But yes, they will have to accept that their little girl has grown up. Not telling if Molly and Arthur will notice anything though, what do you think yourself.....
blackrose: Hihi, yeah that's gonna be THE question.... Well, maybe, just maybe they'll work it all out....
mixed: Ooh yeah, I was going for confusing.... I'm hoping to make no sense at all untill the very end of the story.
Christina: Yup, wasn't sure about that to begin with; I remembered vaguely reading somewhere that Gin had brown eyes. Where does it say what color eyes she has, do you know? If you do could you tell me the book and the page.... I was gonna give her green eyes at first, but then I remembered that the only person having green eyes is Harry...
dragonsprincess: Sorry, about the finaly *hides in corner*, this is a bit of a finaly again, but it's not my fault, FF was offline here.... Hihi, yeah, that's a really outrageous theory. Insane too, but hey, aren't we all a little insane? Yep, I'm going to tell later why not, but believe me.... I never said she could not have children, just that she can't get pregnant right now.....
TomFeltons4ever: Thanks Jessica! Yeah, they've got hearts, just very well hidden ones.... that might never be released at all....
Bladefanatic: Thank you! I was hurrying; I was gonna update on friday, but then FF was offline.... please don't kill me!
Jackie: No, the stalker will be revealed later. Probably in chapter 14.... And yes, you're right if Ginny wouldn't fight, the story would be going no where, she would just be trapped. Don't worry hihi; you make perfect sense to me....
Ohepelss Oramtnci: Yep, you'll see.... in the end.....
Chrismery: Wow, 5 am?! I can't promise Draco will find his way soon, but I can promise that things will start making more sense soon.... And that there will be a sequel (even if things don't go wrong).
Felicity: Yep, you're right about the too obvious! But that's all I'm saying about it....
xangelcrisisx: Hihi yeah.... thanks, I will!
mz-duCkiee: Thank you! Yeah, those torn emotions are thankfully not too hard.... there a lot like a felt a couple of years ago....
Aurora Noctifer: Thanks and yeah, I think it seems realitic because I've felt like this myself, although it had a different background to feel that way....
Riauna: Thanks; love it that you came back even after not being able to read for a while :)
Sammy Rettop Malfoy (chapters1 and 12): Thank you! Wow, overly impressed? I'm really flattered, though hoping that you don't think that means I'm a cold-hearted bitch myself ;) As for Draco feeling, won't make any promises.... but he might feel.... And hihi is laughter; lets make it 'dutch giggles'.
Emily.Hart: Well, her parents can't do much after all; she's 16 and that means she's no longer a minor, at least not where I come from and even if they tried Lucius has probably got too much influence any way....
serasivad (chapter 1 and 12): Thanks babe! Hihi and I don't think my spelling's that bad, hell; with all the bad-grammar I've seen I'd say it's phenominal.... The angsty stuff is going to get bigger though, befire it dies down, so you shall have to bear with me.....
MelissaAdams: Thank you Missy :)
chanita: Thank you, I am writing it like I would write a poem with a dynamic-fluff so that makes sense :)
ESN: Thank you! I can always try and I always will ;)
red-rose: Glad to be back too :) The Rapping Party? Sure, I'll read it if you tell me who wrote it.... Did your cousin write it and what is the screenname?
LadyBrannon: And 5 points to Slytherin in the favor of LadyBrannon! Thanks!
Jade-The-Kitsune: Do you live in Seattle? Thanks for loving it!
Nirvanagurl1220: Hihi sorry?! Glad to see you like it ;)
tash (for chapter 4, 5, 6, 7, 8 and 9): Well, I first thought you were flaming me, but after mailing with you I understand the reviews. Sorry it's not your style, maybe some other time....
hpangel: Yes, it seems to be that way doesn't it. But then again a very wise someone once said "Go beyond reason to love, it is safe, it is the only safety"
ash: Thanks, also for clickin' the lil box in the future ;)
Gothic Retaliation (chapter 11 and 12): Thanks you; great you reviewed! Doesn't matter that the other was short for now I've got two reviews by you! And I'm trying to update right now hihi, but while I was answering all the reviews FF went offline again....
maggie: Thank you! Love you too for reviewing!
Keita: Well, maybe it'll change.... maybe you'll change too.... sometime in the future...
Viktoria: Thank you; I'll try to keep it up.... and while I was answering all the reviews FF went offline again.... oh well, maybe I'll be able to update later today....
ennui: Thank you hihi, glad you like my Lucius since he confused a couple of people :)
Megan: Yeah, I hear that a lot and believe me, I'm working on it.... They aren't as short as they used to be, so I guess I'm gettin' better at that....
highVOLTAGE: Thank you and keep hoping! If you hope hard enough it might actually happen.....
Principessa Squish Avina : Thanks! I'm trying to keep it that way very hard (tasteful I mean), because porn is never nice to read in my opinion....
SatansFlower: Thank you, I'm glad to hear you can see yourself almost as a part of the story....
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Lucius Malfoy looked amused at the site of Ginny, who seemed to be covered in snakes with the candlelight flickering over her jewelry, making them seem alive, slythering over her.
She looked deliciously evil, wonderfully dark, alluringly beautiful.
He liked the way her mind worked, she seemed to be very ambitious and very intelligent.
A pity the girl was a Weasley, a great pity indeed.
Maybe he could fix that error somehow.....
He smirked as he studied the girl sitting next to his son across from him.
She kept stealing glances at Draco as if she was measuring an opponent....
Yes, this girl would provide fair sport for his son; she would not bend to his every whim, would keep him on his toes.
He looked at Narcissa, sitting beside him, remembered how she had proposed marriage to him....
Fearless, challenging, a true opponent.....
She had a lot in common with this girl.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Narcissa looked at the girl, a girl who had more in common with her then she would ever know.
A girl who had more to loose then Narcissa ever had.....
Her face impassive she watched her son reach out and squeeze the girl's hand, the girl's eyes lighting up as she looked at Draco.
Her son's pale eyes saw everything she noticed, but his eyes did not shine as he watched the girl.....
No, he looked more like a predator.
A predator ready to strike.... and hit.
The girl thought she could gain control, thought she knew where she was heading.....
But Narcissa knew better, this girl was not heading for green meadows, no, she was heading for a spiderweb she could not see, she would not see untill she was so stuck in it she could not remove herself from it any longer.
Stuck, stuck with a large spider looming over her....
Feeling her husband's eyes on her, she suppressed a shudder.
How could she ever have believed she could control Lucius Malfoy?
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Ginny felt Narcissa's gaze on her, measuring her.
She looked at the silent, impassive face before her, a woman who had everything, yet seemed to show nothing.
No life, no feeling.....
She seemed to be nothing but an empty shell, yet her eyes did not seem to miss anything.
Like most things in this house, Narcissa Malfoy seemed to be but a facade hiding something much bigger, much complexer.
It was impossible to define what the woman was thinking, what she was feeling, if she was even feeling at all.....
If she was even truly alive.
Draco's hand was caressing hers, drawing her attention to him and she smiled.
He looked like a pale half-god come from the heavens to bewitch her with his attentions, to lure her into his web of artful seduction.
And he had succeeded, he had lured her to him, trapped her by his side.
Yet he had not trapped her mind, her thoughts were still her own.
Unbeknownst to her, Narcissa was thinking the very same thing across from her, only she drew much less comfort from the thought.
No, for Narcissa was stuck in the web of the spider and was full well realizing it. She knew she was stuck, knew she was not her own person any longer.
Life in a golden cage had seemed appealing from the outside, but now she was on the inside, it's contents seemed hollow, the riches seemed to dim before her eyes and the beauty around her had faded with the years.
Years that had passed by her slowly, while emotions pressed in around her, forcing her to see....
Lucius was hers, hers to hold, hers to love.
Yet his heart was elsewhere, could not be touched.
Had he ever truly had a heart at all?
He had given his life to Voldemort and left her here in the cage time and time again waiting for his return to her.
She had grown tired of shedding tears, had grown tired of pining over what she could not have....
A house filled with love.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Draco silently watched his mother observe Virginia.
He saw the shimmer behind her eyelids, looking suspiciously like unshed tears.
He watched, yet he felt nothing.
Nothing at all, but still a connection was made; he knew what it had felt like to be left behind, to be forgotten.
For Narcissa had not been the only one left behind....
He looked at Virginia, her bright eyes on him as he had once observed his mother looking at his father, once, when he was still very young.
He knew his mother loved his father, loved him like nothing else in the world.
And she adored her son, loved him as well.
She had gambled to procure the love of Lucius for herself.
She had gambled and lost....
She would see herself in Virginia, as she had once been.
He knew deep inside that his father had once loved his mother, but somehow the tenderness and love had fled through a window no one had known was left open, until it was altogether gone.
But it had been too late, too late to change anything, too late for her.....
Too late to salvage any of the emotions his father had once possessed, just as it had been too late to save his own.
It was too late to save Virginia too, she had gone in too deep and now she was his.
He had never before let go of a possession willingly, nor would he start to now.
No..... she was his.
His to caress, his to touch..... his to play with as he saw fit.
She would be with him until the end.
The end of his interest in her, the end of their time together.
Whenever that would be.....
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Narcissa saw the flicker in her son's eyes, knew his intentions....
Knew there was nothing she could do to stop him.
She could only hope this girl would be luckier then she....
That she would have all she dreamed of....
And that the dream would not turn out to be as empty as her own heart was now....
Because having the dream within your grasp only to loose it...
It was far worse then to never be able to touch the dream at all.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Lucius saw the tears in his wife's eyes, knew he had caused them....
Knew he would never be able to make her see....
She had fallen in love with whom she thought he was.
And he had done nothing about her assumptions....
Because he could not, would not let her go.
She had made him touch life, even love and he had warmed himself with her fire.
She was his link to a world of emotions he had not been able to touch before.
He looked at the red-head, snakes at her wrist and throat, a laugh bubbling from her lips.....
Saw his son's eyes flicker.....
Obviously, the boy was not immune to her threat, to her fire.
He would have to speak with him....
Soon.
Before someone else did.
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Behind a tapestry on the wall, someone was watching the four people.
Virginia and Draco, Narcissa and Lucius.
And she hated what she saw; a prelude of what was to come.
She would do anything in her might to save this girl from ruin, to have her listen to reason....
But she could not just walk up to her; the girl would never listen, would not want to hear.
How had such a sensible girl fallen in so deep?
How could she have forgotten to trow away the key to her heart?
Men like the Malfoy's were not for playing with....
Their lure was far too dangerous.
The girl should grab her money and go, make a run for it in the night....
The night she had been so eager to join.
Before they would realize how easy it was to make her binding permanent, to have her tied down for ever....
A girl of snakes, constricted untill she knew no more of the outside world.
A girl of snakes, bound forever to it's touch, it's caress, it's embrace....
The embrace of a snake in the darkness.
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End of Chapter 13; Will Ginny realize what is going on, will she catch on to the sceming going on around her? Find out next time.....
Disclaimer: Harry Potter is not mine..... *breaks out crying*
I want to thank SatansFlower, Serenade of the Sea, Chas (aka Aricos) and my anonymous beta-reader who wishes to remain anonymous and therefor shall be anonymous for beta-reading!
I also wanna thank Aricos for helping me with some of the poems :)
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I want to thank the following people for reviewing:
TrulyLovely: Thank you! Always happy to see happy reviewers ;)
Dukerbrown: Hi Megan, happy to see ya! Well, read ya that is ;)
Blood57: Thank you and yeah, I've got this whole thing with light and darkness and the different meaning of things.... Glad to see you gave it some thought....
Amber: Yup, you did hihi. Thanks; I'm always trying to let the emotional side of the story shine through, but sometimes it's hard to let it all fit. I'm not telling if the story's going to end happy, but I can tell there's going to be a sequel....
waterfairy-rose: Thanks! Yeah, I know; I'm mean for making you hang onto those clues.... Can't help it, I was born that way ;) And yeah, the Weasley's reaction is a difficult procedure, I'm still trying to envision their combined reaction. Of course they only know their little girl is the girlfriend of a Malfoy, but that'll be bad enough. But yes, they will have to accept that their little girl has grown up. Not telling if Molly and Arthur will notice anything though, what do you think yourself.....
blackrose: Hihi, yeah that's gonna be THE question.... Well, maybe, just maybe they'll work it all out....
mixed: Ooh yeah, I was going for confusing.... I'm hoping to make no sense at all untill the very end of the story.
Christina: Yup, wasn't sure about that to begin with; I remembered vaguely reading somewhere that Gin had brown eyes. Where does it say what color eyes she has, do you know? If you do could you tell me the book and the page.... I was gonna give her green eyes at first, but then I remembered that the only person having green eyes is Harry...
dragonsprincess: Sorry, about the finaly *hides in corner*, this is a bit of a finaly again, but it's not my fault, FF was offline here.... Hihi, yeah, that's a really outrageous theory. Insane too, but hey, aren't we all a little insane? Yep, I'm going to tell later why not, but believe me.... I never said she could not have children, just that she can't get pregnant right now.....
TomFeltons4ever: Thanks Jessica! Yeah, they've got hearts, just very well hidden ones.... that might never be released at all....
Bladefanatic: Thank you! I was hurrying; I was gonna update on friday, but then FF was offline.... please don't kill me!
Jackie: No, the stalker will be revealed later. Probably in chapter 14.... And yes, you're right if Ginny wouldn't fight, the story would be going no where, she would just be trapped. Don't worry hihi; you make perfect sense to me....
Ohepelss Oramtnci: Yep, you'll see.... in the end.....
Chrismery: Wow, 5 am?! I can't promise Draco will find his way soon, but I can promise that things will start making more sense soon.... And that there will be a sequel (even if things don't go wrong).
Felicity: Yep, you're right about the too obvious! But that's all I'm saying about it....
xangelcrisisx: Hihi yeah.... thanks, I will!
mz-duCkiee: Thank you! Yeah, those torn emotions are thankfully not too hard.... there a lot like a felt a couple of years ago....
Aurora Noctifer: Thanks and yeah, I think it seems realitic because I've felt like this myself, although it had a different background to feel that way....
Riauna: Thanks; love it that you came back even after not being able to read for a while :)
Sammy Rettop Malfoy (chapters1 and 12): Thank you! Wow, overly impressed? I'm really flattered, though hoping that you don't think that means I'm a cold-hearted bitch myself ;) As for Draco feeling, won't make any promises.... but he might feel.... And hihi is laughter; lets make it 'dutch giggles'.
Emily.Hart: Well, her parents can't do much after all; she's 16 and that means she's no longer a minor, at least not where I come from and even if they tried Lucius has probably got too much influence any way....
serasivad (chapter 1 and 12): Thanks babe! Hihi and I don't think my spelling's that bad, hell; with all the bad-grammar I've seen I'd say it's phenominal.... The angsty stuff is going to get bigger though, befire it dies down, so you shall have to bear with me.....
MelissaAdams: Thank you Missy :)
chanita: Thank you, I am writing it like I would write a poem with a dynamic-fluff so that makes sense :)
ESN: Thank you! I can always try and I always will ;)
red-rose: Glad to be back too :) The Rapping Party? Sure, I'll read it if you tell me who wrote it.... Did your cousin write it and what is the screenname?
LadyBrannon: And 5 points to Slytherin in the favor of LadyBrannon! Thanks!
Jade-The-Kitsune: Do you live in Seattle? Thanks for loving it!
Nirvanagurl1220: Hihi sorry?! Glad to see you like it ;)
tash (for chapter 4, 5, 6, 7, 8 and 9): Well, I first thought you were flaming me, but after mailing with you I understand the reviews. Sorry it's not your style, maybe some other time....
hpangel: Yes, it seems to be that way doesn't it. But then again a very wise someone once said "Go beyond reason to love, it is safe, it is the only safety"
ash: Thanks, also for clickin' the lil box in the future ;)
Gothic Retaliation (chapter 11 and 12): Thanks you; great you reviewed! Doesn't matter that the other was short for now I've got two reviews by you! And I'm trying to update right now hihi, but while I was answering all the reviews FF went offline again....
maggie: Thank you! Love you too for reviewing!
Keita: Well, maybe it'll change.... maybe you'll change too.... sometime in the future...
Viktoria: Thank you; I'll try to keep it up.... and while I was answering all the reviews FF went offline again.... oh well, maybe I'll be able to update later today....
ennui: Thank you hihi, glad you like my Lucius since he confused a couple of people :)
Megan: Yeah, I hear that a lot and believe me, I'm working on it.... They aren't as short as they used to be, so I guess I'm gettin' better at that....
highVOLTAGE: Thank you and keep hoping! If you hope hard enough it might actually happen.....
Principessa Squish Avina : Thanks! I'm trying to keep it that way very hard (tasteful I mean), because porn is never nice to read in my opinion....
SatansFlower: Thank you, I'm glad to hear you can see yourself almost as a part of the story....
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