Ok, I am sick today, so I decided I was going to add another poem, this is another poem about BB and Terra. The poem goes like this, the first line is Terra talking (the first 2 lined, lines), the second (2 lined) line is BB talking, it goes like that throughout the entire poem, except at the end. I would like to thank:

RaventhePortal

xxgambitxx


I don't know what to do,

For I did it all for you.

Tell me please,

That the pain, will soon ease.

I saved us, in the end,

And your heart will, soon mend.

I want to love again,

But, I'm afraid; I'll fail, again.

You'll find love, soon,

But, I've met my doom.

Your memory, lives on,

In the beauty of a song.

No matter where you are,

You're never really far.

You'll be remembered as a friend,

For you did what's right in the end.

I'll love you forever.

No matter what, endeavor.

You may not be here,

I may move on,

I have no fear,

For our love lives on.


OK, that was my poem, the last 3 line, (you know what I mean, the last 3, 2 lined,) lines they are saying together! I hope if you read this or any other one of my stories (The Newcomer) you will review. Right? I don't care if you submit anonymous reviews, I would just like some reviews! If I get enough I will actually make Forevermore into a story! Please review!

P.S. If you don't think it's good, don't be afraid totell me, or flame me, but not to harsh, because I am not a poet!

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