I don't own Inuyasha or Ranma ½
Boy things are starting to get really weird over here or maybe school is starting to rub off on me, when most of your discussions end up with the topic of stone age history then it's time to visit the doctor, well ok it is my job to study this stuff, and it could be worse I could be studying physics then I'd already be in the local lunatic asylum. Anyway enough talking here are some answers to your reviews and then on with the fic.
GamertheHedgedog: Well I can give you a few tips, but first of all I want to make something clear. The quality of a story can NOT be measured by its length!!! (Even if I like long stories I still say this) I've read both your stories and the main problem with them is that you're only using dialogues, you're not really trying to describe the world that you're characters are in. One of the purposes of writing (take cover my philosophical side is coming out on me) to show different images to your readers, with some room for their own imagination to work, and this is almost impossible without description without it is much harder to see what's going on you only see some words, being said, and sometimes you see some moves but that's all, this is similar to the ancient Greek theatre, where the characters "don't have faces". Secondly if you want to write longer stories try to think more about the plot try to create side stories, and don't go down to business right away. Let's look at your second story "The battle between two" what if someone stole the jewel from the group or Naraku before he got killed. That could make the story a couple of chapters longer or what if Naraku found a way through the well and people in the modern world find out about Kagome's secret. For another example if I didn't create this side story that I'm currently working on in my fic then I'd be already in the middle of the battle scenes, but these few chapters make the entire story much better. Well I hope I could help with these few rows and believe me there is nothing really special in writing a story just use your imagination.
Inu-chan Sesh's little bro: Well how would Ranma exist if he didn't have a mother? By the way Nodoka made her first appearance in 22nd volume of the manga.
Psycho King: The story you suggested is about to be checked out. And thanks for the tip.
Chapter 8: When a demon goes to schoolIt was late in the morning and the entire Tendo household was asleep until. "We've overslept!!!" yelled Akane as she jumped out of bed.
The sudden noise caused Kagome to stir first she wanted to go back to sleep, muttering a silent curse about noisy humans, but when she looked out on the window and saw how high the sun was it all dawned for her. "Damn it I've got school today!!!" she half yelled and quickly slipped out of the dog-pile where she slept.
She grabbed her school uniform and raced into the bathroom. With a quick move she yanked Happosai out of his hiding spot (This time the freak used the cabinet behind the mirror) and threw him out into the yard.
Within minutes she was finished, and moved towards the door while taking a quick glance at the mirror. Kagome grabbed the doorknob and pushed it down. "Whoa I almost I almost forgot about you two!" Kagome quickly folded her ears under her hair, and straightened her dress. She was sure about on thing the human who designed this blue nightmare was either crazy or had a severe problem with style, or she simply learned to hate modern clothing over the years... no the last one wasn't it.
Happosai was about to re-enter the room, but Kagome raised a hand ready to throw the perverted martial arts master back out, and he turned back. Then the youkai left and the immediate second after she closed the door Happosai re-entered the bathroom through the window and took cover in the laundry basket.
Kagome made her way to the guest room knowing that Inuyasha and her pups were still sleeping in there. She leaned down to Inuyasha and gave him a kiss on the cheek to wake him up. "What is it bitch?" he asked half asleep.
"I'm leaving for school, don't forget that you have to bring Asaku to me at noon so I can feed him!"
"Don't worry I won't forget about that." he mumbled. Kagome gave her mate another kiss, and left.
Minutes later she was on the road running to school with Akane and Ranma by her side, like usually Ranma got splashed with cold water and they had to make a detour to pick up some hot water for him.
Finally they reached the Fourinkan high barely making it in time. Kagome just sat down on a chair when the teacher entered. The room went silent except for a few whispers but she didn't care about them.
Kagome glanced backwards and saw that Nabiki was sitting a few rows behind her, the desk in front of her was occupied by some kind of kendo fighter. Unlike the others he didn't wear any kind of uniform, instead he wore something similar to Inuyasha's clothing but it was much less baggy, the top was white and the bottom blue, and he also wore a silly looking wooden sword at his side.
The teacher looked up from her work and saw Kagome "It looks like we have a new student today. Would you please come out and introduce yourself." The youkai nodded before standing up, and walking to the teacher's desk. First she wrote her name on the blackboard, then she turned around and bowed to the class.
"My name is Kagome Taisho I'm pleased to meet you!" (She's married you know)
"Good morning!" replied the class.
The teacher smiled approvingly and signaled for Kagome to sit down, the youkai made her way to her seat and the lesson begun. Not even five minutes later a carefully folded piece of paper landed on her desk, Kagome looked at the sender who was the kendo freak in front of her, and shook her head before starting to read. (Everyone who hates love-poetry get a bucket... I mean it! You could need it!)
"To the sweet girl with the charming eyes." Kagome had to hold back an urge to chuckle. /Yep it's a love-letter all right./ "It's rare when a warrior like me stumbles on such a beautiful and fragile flower like you who is among the most beautiful ones on the wide field..." Kagome would had been flattered if she never met Inuyasha, but she did in other words, she couldn't care less about what was on the paper, and sent it back after writing an answer saying no.
A few minutes later she received another paper, it was another love-letter from the same sender, and she returned it with another decline, another few minutes passed, and another came, and then another. With the time going on she became more and more angry and by the end of the class she only wanted to rip this Kendo freak apart, when she thought that she won't be able to take it anymore the bell finally rung.
Kagome quickly left the classroom before her, admirer could make his next move, but she heard whispers about the reforming of some kind of fan club, with a new idol, the youkai made her way the yard, and sat down on a bench. She sighed and tried to calm down the rage that was still growing in her. A few minutes later she could smell Akane's scent closing and turned to her.
"Hi Kagome how's it going?" asked the human girl.
The youkai gave out a long sigh "I've got no problem with the lessons but that dammed kendo freak, he's really going to my nerves."
"You mean Kuno he's really a pain in the ass, he was after me until he learned that I'm engaged to Ranma, and he still didn't completely give up."
"Well in my case he should better lay off and he has two reasons for that: One I could care less about him, and two if Inuyasha finds out what he's doing then..."
"Yep but at least I'd be rid of him for good!" answered Akane. At this both girls started to laugh. "So how does it feel to be back at school after more than twenty years?"
"Kinda strange, I never thought that I'd be attending any kind of school, after I left my era for Inuyasha. Not to mention that I'm already..." Kagome went silent when a student bypassed too close for her like. "...Not to mention that I'm already a three time mother." she continued whispering.
"Yeah it is a bit weird, but not as weird as Ranma's curse!" answered Akane.
"True true!" agreed Kagome.
"HEY EVERYBODY SAOTOME AND RYOGA ARE HAVING ANOTHER DUEL!!!" yelled someone, and the two girls immediately scattered to the tennis court what was usually used for such purposes.
The two competitors were already busy fighting when the girls arrived and Nabiki was busy at the betting stand. "So who's this Ryoga guy?" asked Kagome.
"He's one of Ranma's opponents, I don't really know why they're fighting all the time, I think in reality they're the best friends." answered Akane.
The youkai looked at the battlefield, and saw as Ranma punched Ryoga in the stomach sending him up into the air. Ryoga immediately countered, and Ranma barely made it avoid the attack that created a huge hole, in the ground. /These two! Friends?/ wondered Kagome silently /That last move could easily kill a normal human... on the other hand they're just like Sesshoumaru and Karom they are constantly fighting with each other but they never would kill the other, there's kind of "dear enemy" type of relationship between them./ Kagome continued to watch the fight and she had to admit that the two boys were quite strong for humans.
However soon she could hear somebody closing it was Kuno! "My sweet darling with the beautiful eyes here you are why did you run away!" Kagome couldn't hold back her growl, the stupid human continued closing towards her, and Kagome decided to make an exit. The kendo freak was more than surprised when his "love" suddenly "disappeared", but then he moved his attention to another woman of his life namely Akane.
Soon the bell rang and the second class began math to be exact, after the first five minutes Kagome thought that her admirer gave up, but she was wrong. In the sixth minute another message landed on her desk and she simply couldn't take it anymore. "Her blood boiled from anger, and she simply wanted to scream the fact into the boy's face that she's taken and happy with her husband, but if she would do that then it won't take long before it comes out that she's a demon.
However Kagome couldn't control her anger anymore and she had to calm down her rage before she does something that she'll regret, the youkai stood up and grabbed her chair then she lifted it up in the air. "How many times do I have to tell you to knock it out with the messages!??? I'm not interested!!!" She yelled, then she brought it down with full force but thanks to some miracle and maybe because Kagome's mid came back to reality just in time the chair got smashed on the floor next to the kendo clown instead of his head
"OUT BOTH OF YOU!!!" yelled the teacher with all his might after witnessing this little scenario. Minutes later Kagome and Kuno were standing on the floor each holding two buckets of water. The boy looked at the youkai with a smile on his face, and the youkai couldn't believe that the kid wasn't getting the message. For goodness sake she could be his mother.
"You know my love what you did in the classroom was a great idea of you..."
Kuno would have continued his speech if Kagome didn't start to growl. "Is it that hard to understand??? I'm not interested in you!!!" she asked.
"But my brown eyed beauty..." Kagome simply ignored the human and looked at the wall in front of her thinking till Inuyasha interrupted her via telepathic ring.
/Mate are you sure you don't want me to handle him for you?/ he asked.
/No thanks love I think I can easily handle a sicko like this one./ answered Kagome.
/If you say so mate, but if I run into that kid he's toast!/
/What did I tell you about killing humans?/ asked the female youkai.
/Feh! Like I care about a low jerk like this guy./
/Then don't hurt him! I'd rather eat Akane's last cooking project then to fall for him./ Kagome was rewarded with another "Feh!" and she decided simply to ignore both males; maybe the silent treatment will work.
A few minutes later she could hear the sound of four running humans they were closing towards her. Kagome turned to the sound as saw four boys who were dashing through the hallway carrying a fellow student. "What happened?" she asked.
"We don't know how but Narimoto has hurt his leg." responded one of them.
"Put him down I'll se what I can do!" responded Kagome almost out of reflex.
"Shouldn't we rather take him to the doctor?" asked one of the boys while coming to a halt with the others.
"No need to worry I know what to do." answered the youkai. The group eyed Kagome strangely but when they saw how calm and confident the youkai was they laid their friend on the ground. Kagome kneeled down next to her patient and started to check his leg there were no cuts or scratches on the boys leg but she could tell from the scent that the he wasn't lying. Kagome inspected the injured limb from closer and she immediately found the problem, and went to work without saying anything.
The humans saw as her hand started to glow and they could only stare at her. "How is she doing that?" asked one of them.
"I don't know why, but she seems to know what she's doing." came the answer.
After about five minutes Kagome was done, and the pink glow faded from her hand. ""You're leg is healed but, be a little careful with it for the next few days." she advised her patient. The other spectators still couldn't believe what they just witnessed.
The kid nodded dumbly still not being able to figure out how this girl could heal him so fast "C you please tell me how you did this?" he asked.
The youkai smiled at the human "Sorry I guess I should have told before healing you. I'm a miko."
"You're a what?" yelled Kuno with full force.
"You heard right I'm a miko." answered Kagome.
"Then why don't you let me protect and love you a girl like you..." Kuno would have continued if it wasn't for the bucket of water next to Kagome, she lifted it into the air, and brought it down onto the kendo clown's head.
"Would you get off of my case!" she roared. The teacher exited the room, and saw what's going on, to put it better he heard almost the entire story.
"Well I think I'm beginning to understand what's going on! You two lovebirds..."Kagome really had an urge to strangle the teacher at this point "...should keep it down! You're disturbing the lessons. YOU miss Kagome should come in maybe that way I can get some things done with the class.
Kagome couldn't really hide her smile she was more than relieved that she can spend some time without Kuno harassing her, and the rest of the morning was spent uneventful there were only a few seconds left till the bell rung. The female youkai could hardly wait to get out of the classroom, she gazed at the clock waiting not bothering to listen to the lecture /Five... four... three... two... one.../
Finally the sound of the bell could be heard all over the school Kagome immediately left the room and made her way up to the roof. Nabiki saw all thins and since she was from a curious type she decided to check it out.
Inuyasha just landed on the roof of the Fourinkan high in the exact second when Kagome reached the top of the stares, he was holding Asaku in one of his hands, and looked around to make sure that there are no humans around. When he was sure that the coast is clear he turned to his mate. "So where is this freak who's been harassing you all morning,"
Kagome plastered a smile and made her way to her husband. "Don't worry about that pest I can take care of him."
Inuyasha's answer was a serious face "I don't care Kagome, nobody and I mean nobody can harass my mate and get away with it! Understood!" Asaku stood up on Inuyasha's hand and started to bark that he's agreed with what his father just said.
The miko couldn't help but smile at this "Thanks you guys, but I can take care of myself I'm not a little pup."
"Yes you're not a little pup, but you're my little mate and I won't let him molest you."
Kagome couldn't help it anymore Inuyasha was just too sweet, she jumped forward, and hugged him with all the might she had, while being careful not to hurt her pup who was between them. Asaku immediately grazed against her face trying to show Kagome how much he loves her, and Inuyasha responded by hugging her back.
He leaned forward, so his face was in one level with Kagome's and gave her a kiss on the cheek. "So does my dear mate finally learn that there's no use in arguing with me?"
At this question Kagome became a bit cranky "Inuyasha!?" she asked with a meaning face.
The male dog smiled, and grazed Kagome's cheeks with his hands then he placed another a row of kisses all over her face. "So do you give up now?" he asked, and started purring.
"Inuyasha! Not in front of Asaku!"
Inuyasha didn't care about what his mate said, and continued with his kissing. "You just have to say the word, and I'll stop."
Kagome felt her knees starting to buckle, even if she didn't like the fact but this time she had to admit that Inuyasha has won "Ok Inuyasha you've won!"
The male youkai placed one more kiss, on Kagome's mouth, and withdrew, while he was doing this he pulled his hands through Kagome's hair, and pulled out her ears from beneath her locks. "You know mate you look much better when you're not hiding your ears. And besides a demoness like you shouldn't hide her attributes in public." Kagome couldn't keep the blush from her face when she heard this comment, and she buried her face into his kimono to hide her embarrassed face.
"Can't believe it mate, after all these years I still can make you blush?" asked Inuyasha.
"Please mate! You're embarrassing me!" murmured Kagome. Inuyasha simply smirked it was rare when he could take Kagome down so easily, Asaku was looking back and forth between his parents not really understanding what was going on. He could feel the immense amount of tenderness in the air but didn't knew what it meant.
Unknown to the three dogs, they had one eves dropper gawking at them who heard everything.