Hello peoples! I know its been awhile but I just wanted to let you all know that I'll be moving this story to I'll probably be moving all my stories there, actually. I thank you for all your reviews and I enjoyed reading some of them. Though, I did happen to find one that caught my attention.
First, I would like to say thank you for reviewing, moonymonster. I overviewed your comments and I would like to thank you for your constructive criticism. I would like to bring a few things to mind, though. When I did this story I was writting in a hurried manner, at the time I had no computer at home and the only time I had access to one was at school. I was quite young aswell so my knowledge of quotation was limited. It still is to a point since my obssessive compulsive disorder inhibits my learning ability, but I am quickly working around that. I will be making the neccessary changes to the story and reloading it onto aff soon. I hope you decide to follow it there since your reviews are... thought provoking.
Now, I refuse to change the names of the characters. I know very well what their names are, but I chose to gift them with the names I did for a purpose. It adds a feel to the story. A sense of it being different yet still holding it's familiar qualities.
I know it sounds like I'm harping on this but, I just wanted you to know how I felt. I don't want to lose you as a reader, and I am granting your wish of having it fixed, but your review deffinately caught my interest. So, if you're reading this, I cordially invite you to read the revamped version of my story at , that goes for all the rest of you too. My pen name there is Seirin of the Desert.
LOVE TO ALL!