Well this was supposed to go before the chapter labeled mehe. Sorry it's out of chronological order.
Chapter 8: Crazy. Crazy. CCCCRRRAAAAZZZZYYYYY
Once Draco arrived back to his room, he groaned and threw himself onto an armchair. Damn it! Now Jade got him thinking. Is this what he really wanted? Being a death eater got him nothing but power and respect. What did power bring him? Sure people feared him, but what was the good in that? People didn't pick on him, but it's not like they thought very highly of him.
And as for respect, what was that worth if he couldn't respect himself. And what was with the "heart thing?"
He always knew Jade was a crazy fool, but this was going beyond over board. Since when was she such a wise, prophet freak? Honestly, he preferred the psycho, perverted her. At least she was fun then! Maybe she was possessed tonight.
Sighing, he tore off his robes and flopped down onto his bed. "Whatever…crazy psycho, wise, prophetic freak," he though before falling asleep.
LOOK AT THIS!
Why, look what came my way-someone who called her review a 'flame' and hardly bothered to point out her real problem with my story!
1. A few grammar errors do not a dire-need-of-beta make. I'm hardly good at Spanish, and in fact I learned English before it. Hold on English isn't even my first language, it's my forth. Lets see Cantonese was my first, then came Taiwanese, then Mandarin oh then English. And seeing as how my story is already for teens, let me show you how…colorful my Spanish is. Usted es un hijo tan estúpido de una ramera. Usted me hace me río. Usted es cabeza es hasta ahora arriba usted asno yo pienso se atasca. Pero viendo como cómo nadie como usted por supuesto usted puede sólo besa su propio asno. Qué era pensando?
2. Metaphor, dear, you need to learn to understand metaphor! It was simply an attempt to be witty, but obviously your humor sense isn't good enough to detect it.
3. Well, can you give me more than a few short chapters to develop her first?
4. Not hardly, though I have a 4.0. And as mentioned before, I'm hardly good at Spanish.
Dear, you're sending me juvenile 'flames' that are hardly worth the name picking over tiny little so-called 'faults' in my fic. If you've got a problem with it, just stop reading, because when I opened your flame, I burst out laughing. No wait so you should review. I gives me such great pleasure to read you lovely bubbling fireball that hops up and down like a bunny, I laugh. It's such a humorous source of entertainment please flame me more. Oh the pleasures of going to an all girl school. You learn how to kick people asses so hard. P.S. I passed Spanish one and two. Would you like me to translate my expose into Spanish?