Before starting this chapter I'd like to say that I'm sorry I just started working on a chapter the day I said I would and then I just got on the TV then video games (ratchet and clank of course) then the next few days I have the VMA's that I love to watch but now I'm back on track and writing. I'm gunna be 14 soon so hurray for me but now schools gunna start too so I might get chapter in every 1-7 days ok and if it goes beyond that I'm sorry too.
Just incase your wondering my birthday is September 6th
Wow I'm flattered I Jay.w. I'm not even that good a writer but always love to have someone loyal to the story. Umm tips
-Space out people don't seem to like big clumps of words
-Whenever I've done anything with romance in it people seemed to like it
- I don't know if this is just me… but I love plot twits
-And talk to the people that want to be talked to
I must ask you thought do you think the spacing is better? And also should I space out chapter one?
For all those things you need to remember for this chapter and all those who skip for no reason here is your review of chapter 2!
THE CAFETERIA
"And that's when he said that's all right I do that for a living!" said captain quark finishing a joke. This is one of the times where I the author talk to you the reader about something about to happen. Have you ever had something maybe slip out that you didn't mean to or even worse come in the room after someone said something bad or embarrassing about you and you have no idea why everyone is looking at you. This would be one of both of those times.
"Ok, here's a good one. I walked in on Ratchet and Sasha having sex dudes! Hahahhahaha!" Skidd's laugh quickly dimmed down. "Oh crud" he said underneath his breath. Ratchet and Sasha walked in together. There was not one eye that wasn't on them.
"What?" said ratchet as Skidd slowly got out of the room.
Chapter 3: Back to Bogon
"What?" Sasha also asked.
"It's nothing." Quark smiled
"It's just that…your hair is spectaculous." Quark said making up yet another word.
Al glared at captain Quark.
"Skidd said he ran into you last night!" said Al.
"I'm sorry to say this but according to rule 1231 relationships between you two are not allowed to be with each other we made this clear last night before we all went to bed! I'm afraid we will have you let you guys go." Ratchet and Sasha were furious and though Ratchet surprisingly enough kept his anger to himself. While Sasha went off! If you've ever been bumped down from a high position by person of lower position your usually a bit tick off. It's like being corrected by a person younger than you except worse.
"You're letting me go?" she said hatefully
"A lower ranked Q brat is letting me go? Because I'm in love?"
she flipped him off as ratchet pulled her away.
"I hope you drown you mother f-" Ratchet shut her mouth before she could say anymore and took her by the hand to his jet.
"Where are we going?" she said
"To my place."
Clank was walking down the hall to see what was for breakfast when he saw the angry Lombaxes headed for the cockpit.
"Is something wrong?" asked clank
"I'm going home and Sasha's coming too."
"They have figured out haven't they?"
"State the obvious"
Clank started to go towards the plane.
"Where are you going?"
"With…you."
"To tell me the mistakes I've made. I don't need you or anybody else but Sasha."
"They are just concerned-"
"Concerned about what? Maybe I should join the Noids and give you something to worry about."
Clank gasped at that and so did Sasha.
"Let's go Sasha." Ratchet said.
"Wait Ratchet" Sasha sighed
"Maybe he's right."
"What?" Ratchet hoped back out of the car and approached her.
"Calm down I think clank has a point."
"Oh this is just great first my crew doesn't trust I know what's right for me and now my girlfriend."
Ratchet hoped into the jet.
"Ratchet please don't leave!"
"What are we going to do if we don't leave?"
Sasha thought for a moment
"Maybe we can stay here for a little while."
Then all of a sudden a floating holovid feed floated towards Ratchet, Sasha, and Clank.
"Sasha!" yelled the g.p. In rage
"You got yourself kicked out of the army! Because of him?"
"Dad that didn't even make sense!"
"But why did you…"
"Because I love him"
"You're not even engaged!"
"Well actually Mr. g.p…sir." Ratchet chuckled nervously
The g.p. was so angry now that he was red
"I hereby banish you from the Salana Galaxy indefinitely"
"Dad don't do that it was my fault! Last night-"
"I don't want to hear about last night!"
"I can make my own choices I'm not a little girl anymore!"
Then the Three (clank is still here) heard Ratchet's boosters as he flew away.
"Dad I'll never forgive you for this!"
RATCHET'S SHIP
"I can't believe this."
Ratchet set a course for hyperspace as approached the Bogon galaxy upon his arrival he called his old friend Angela cross.
"Hey Angela?"
"Ratchet?" She said surprised
"Your back?"
"Ya."
"Hey that's great why don't you come over."
"Naw I got a lot on my mind."
"I insist it's been kinda boring here"
Ratchet groaned.
"Fine I'll be over soon." Ratchet said heading towards his jet again.
He hoped in and set a course for planet Grelbin. Ratchet landed on the snow covered planet next to Angeles house he took a deep sigh and forced a smile to great her with. And walked towards the door. He knocked. There was no answer. He just decided to open the door and come in she might just be gussying up. He looked at the room. Everything was ruined! Pictures tossed couches overturned H.V. smashed. Something wasn't right.
"Angela" Ratchet called
"Are you alright?"
Mumbling came from the storm shelter downstairs. There had to be something going on down there. Ratchet ran down the stairs. There was Angela holding a huge metal pole.
"Are you ok?" Ratchet said hugging Angela
"I don't have time to explain I was ambushed by some crazy guy. I need you to go this way and I'll go this way."
"I've only got my wrench."
"I've only got a pole."
"Right." Ratchet said.
Ratchet started walking and then was smacked in the back of the head knocking him out.
Ya a bit of a shorter chapter but o well see ya later