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I'm gonna try to make this chapter a lot longer since i have a lot more time.
Here's the story...
She and Jynx left the dusty old flat and started there journey to America.It didn't take them long to reach the Titanic and when they got there Raven was left breatheless...
Raven's POV
Clutching her small suitcase tightly she and Jynx made her way through the crowds.She gazed in awe at the sheer size of the Titanic.The magnificant ship was proudly docked,the sunlight streaming on the elegant railings ,reflecting off the sparkling decks.The whole structure was fit for royalty and people very close to that were getting on the ship of dreams as it had been reffered to in the tabloids.
Jinx also gazd in awe at all the rich handsome young males that couldn't help but steal her a glance at which she smiled flirtatiously.
The two made there way to the ship's gates waiting patiently.Feeling eyes onher Raven slightly turned her head and was met by two gazes coming from two rich extremely handsome young men.They both had long ebony hair and sparkling ice blue eyes.They were both extremely muscular.They were exactly alike except for the fact one had their hair tied in a ponytail whereas the other's was hanging loosely down his back.Suddenly the man with the ponytail was being clung to by a beautiful young lady.Her hair was tied in a bun with wispy strands at the fornt hanging like bangs.Her eyes were the purest of emeralds.She had an innocent yet seductive smile on her angel-like face.The man was now quietly speaking to the beautiful girl.
Robin's POV
"Oh Richard isn't this wonderful"the girl cried.
"Yes!Yes it is because i'm here with you!"he proclaimed to her making her blush.
His eyes couldn't help wander to the young girl he saw earlier.She was now looking at him with beautiful amethyst eyes with a sad smile on her heavenly face.He noticed her gaze travelling to another young man who looked remarkably like him.The man was smiling warmly at the beautiful peasant girl.His jaw clenched slightly at the thought of this incredible girl being wooed by that bastard.
"Darling i'm going up front with your mother alright?"The young girl Kory said.
"Of course my princess"he replied placing feathery kisses around her face.
She soon let go of him and walked over to his mother slightly putting an extra sway in her hips hoping to seduce him more.He inwardly grinned at her obvious attempts of flirting and his eyes travelled to the peasant he lay eyes on earlier.He saw her now talking to another girl with dark pink hair and matching eyes.He assumed the other girl to be her best friend.They both looked up at him and he flashed his award-winning smile at them.The pink-haired one blushed profusely whilst the violet haired beauty just glared at him and gracefully floated to be taken onto the ship Jynx in tow.
He watched her leaving back as he felt another presence next to him.
"Who's the lucky girl Dick?"his best friend Victor Stone questioned.Victor was an african american and had no hair yet was incredibly handsome and kind with a well chiselled body.
"You see the girl with the pink hair talking to the boy with the green hair?"
"Yeah.Her!"he all but yelled.
"No no not her her friend with the violet hair!"he hissed angrily.
"Woah!She's-she's a...PEASANT!"he whispered.
"Yeah but she is hot you know"he smugly replied.
"Well yeah but don't be getting any ideas plus i think that Garth over there has a thing for her as well since he can't seem to take his eyes of her"he chuckled at his friends sudden change in colour from normal to red to white after Raven turned around again and his eyes met with sparkling amethysts.She glared at him but stopped when she saw Victor and gave a sweet smile in which he happily returned.
Raven's POV
I saw that man Richard as i heard that woman clling him staring at me again whilst Jynx was busy flirting with another peasant boy with green hair and green eyes.He was kinda cute she thought andat leastwasn't a jerk she mused.Her thoughts turned bac to Richard giving her a flirtatious smile in which she gavea glare too.She knew his type.Filthy rich bastards who would love to woo a peasant girl like herself and then get them into bed to steal their virginity's then just leave them breaking the girl's heart.She was still thankfully a virgin and prefered to stay that way for a long time.
She then saw him look at her again with a smirk on his face in which she gave another glare to when she saw another tall man standing next to him.He looked very kind and sweet so she gave a gentle smile to him in which he quickly returned.Giving one last glare at Richard she and Jynx along with the young man Jynx was flirting with who was called Garfield also known as Gar went into the luxurious ship and went to there assigned cabins.As luck would have it or as hell would have it in Raven's case of the thoughts of none stop flirting Gar was also assigned to their cabin.
Bored of the two's none stop flirting she soon packed everything into the chest of drawers next to her bunk bed and went outside to take a stroll...
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